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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Reserved. :O

-Edited-

The update was beautiful Srishti. It hit my heart, straightaway.

Poor Sharon, caught in her complexity once again,torn between her past and present. And Swayam, I can't help but sympathise with him.

Eager to read more Srishti :)

You are doing a great job! keep it up.

Cheers,

NV.

Edited by Rhapsody. - 10 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Well written
They love each other bt destiny...

Our chapter,though incomplete...it pains a lot yr
Loved the chappy

Thanks 4 d pm

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

awesome update
it was so emotional
finally she is started to gaining bck her meomry
hope she remembered d person too
loved d update

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

I have to say you are a fabulous writer. The emotions you wrote and they way this chapter eas framed. Well done. *applause*

I aam in love with this story. Update soon.
Thank you for the PM

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Nice update

Bt sharon is so rude with swayam

Bt its nt her fault

She is so stressed

Thank god he saved her

Varna pata nai kya ho jata

She was remembering d classroom part

Bt dammit she is nt able 2

Hope 2 see swaron 2gthr in next update

Update soon

N thanx fr d PM

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Again a superb update 👏

Well u are an amazing writer.. 😃

Beautiful portrayal of Sharon's conditions, her confusion, 😊

Both swayam's and Sharon's emotions very well written down. 😊

Sharon has started remembering the past incidences..😊

Hope she remembers all soon with help of swayam. 😊

This is one of my fav. FF .. Very well written.. 😃

Update soon. 😊

Thanks for PM.😊

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

This is the reply to the update you posted on Pg 9 :)

Sharon has partial Amnesia and she has totally forgotten about het previous three years. . .And most importantly her boyfriend, Swayam.

You know what is the best part of this FF is every update you present is more like One Scene. . .But you write it so well so the reader feels like he or she is actually present there. . Which z just so Commendable about you. . .Really!

The way you have put up Sharon's confusion and Swayam's shocked mental states were amazing. Not too melo dramatic. . . Just perfect!

P.S. I dont know why I was not reading this. . .You know when a new baby comes in the house and the elder one feels like why all attention is being given to the new one and not him? I guess I feel the same coz I love Friendzoned too much and since the time you have started this. . .Updates of Friendzoned has lessened. . .and I dont like it :( Maybe thats why I ignored pms of this :(

Feel like I am Crazy? I understand!

Chitra :)

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Aah. . .Sharon kissing Swayam reminded me of NDC days :) Sigh! Good Old Days!

Sharon is stalking Swayam's FB account and their Happy Pictures. . . I felt so good reading this ^_^

Swayam went to the same place where he used to dream about her for hours. . . Bharat's garage and he felt like everything is again back to Square One.

I loved the way Rey knocked down sense in his mind. He is Swayam Shekhawat who always says "I will make you fall in love with me, Sharon!" and I m superhappy that he is back.

So now Loverboy will be back. . .Sharon will be going back to the academy and will try to remain okay with Weaklings presence. . .And she wants to feel everything of that picture again.In Short I am so damn excited!

Update soon!

With loads of love,
Chitra.