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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

really well written update

sharon is pushing swayam away

but swayam still holding on

do update soon

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

you cant throw a chapter lyk tis on my face

n not expect me to write a cmment fr it 🥱

tis was way too emotional for me too handle

for the first tym i felt sympathy for sharon

thr is a very thin line of distinction b/w sympathy n pity

yes i felt sympathy n sorrow for her

she was struggling thruot the chapter

n its not easy to write such a difficult character

n chapters lyk tis are not incidental,

they are the meat of the plot,

the crux of the conflict n

yet yu pulled off things

wit such ease

her pain was unbearable

all points to yu for showing truth

about the character's deepest self,

and thereby creating

a complex, conflicted character,

the ones who are driven to behave in certain ways

that go against the grain

a lost soul who's burning within herself

she's such an intense character tat at tyms

i fail to understand who is a better lover swayam or sharon

writing such conflicting emotions for sharon

its no easy task n tis certainly makes u an artist

wen it comes to shaping a characters true feelings

n thr emotions

her tears were enuf to make me feel helpless

i wanted to reach out n tell her

tat it will be alright

the best part was her breaking apart

in front of swayam

it was way beyond intense 😭

n for swayam i can say only one thing

now i know the meaning of tis line

n it is dedicated to only ur swayam

'' i m irreversibly and catastrophically in love with yu "

u justified it thoroly

do update soon

ps : i may hav resed earlier sumwhr sorry i cant find it

so i wrote here

i know i cant praise yu enuf becoz words fail me sumwhr

to express ... so bear wit my sloppiness

regards rosy

Edited by rosyrkohli - 10 years ago

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--Anaya--

@--Anaya--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Amazing update. But really short :( I am glad you gave a comma to their story just when i thought it was going to head towards sorta happy ending with a "I GIVE YOU A CHANCE SWAYAM" kind of thing. totally unpredictable.

Sharon's state is totally understandable best thing was she stated her thoughts right in front of Swayam and shared all his fears emotions of how she feels about Swayam's love. Her confusion, Chaos in her mind is very well presented. I wonder how she will overcome all this undeserving feeling. Sad to see Swayam's condition :( :(

Also loved how you have written why Swayam never stopped loving her. His emotions for Sharon are deep.

Very interesting turn. Amazingly written. Pls write a bigger update nxt :) Cant wait

Edited by Anaya.SwaRon - 10 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Shristi i send yu a pm n scrap if u recieved it then do scrap me or pm me :p

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Im really sorry for commenting so fast. And you should write stories my dear not just as a hobby but as your professsion you language the way you potray characters makes it addictve. Coming to the story Swaron story is not just about romance it is more of raw emotions which every viewer felt your story reminds me of original Swaron...thanks for writing this... it compensates for absence of swaron story n screen .

P.S: keep writing its a request

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Brilliantly written.. The way story is moving forward, loving it..😊

You are an amazing writer, very clean writing.. Ur flow of writing is superb...😊

Sharon's confuse state, she is again pushing swayam, but it was justified as what her current state is..😊

Both swayam and were justified here.. 😊

The book is shut, it was hurting ... It reminded me of Old swaron days... but this time I know Sharon will again initiate to open.. It will be interesting to read..😊

Beautifully written update.😊

Thanks for PM.😊

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Winds.of.Winter

@Winds.of.Winter

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

U r the same Srishti Banerjee who makes VMs right? I remembered when I read somewhere you wrote you are an engineer. Is there anything you aren't good at? -_- This is the second FF i have followed since 2011. And guess who wrote it. One of my fave VM maker. Been following your FF for a long time. Unfortunately not so active to reply or like or do anything at all. :(

Next time you update, do update you chapter - Page no. table on page 1 plz. I know its too much to ask from an engineer xD but plz do man -_- Been a long time talked to you on YT. Mostly im on the clock so i hardly come online :( hope to catch up later. And keep writing. Its brilliant. its on my watchlist now 😎 You better keep it active.

btw Ishita here

Edited by Winds.of.Winter - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

nice updates...

im loving each and

every bit of the story

sharon's frustration of

not remembering anything...

the confusions...

hope she clears all of it soon.

swayam's cold yet caring...

update soon...

each update of yours leads to

more curiosity of wats gonna be next...

thnx for the pm..

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

loved d update... u r simply amazing... keep writing ❤️

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BeulaSwaRon

@BeulaSwaRon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#160

I can say one of the most Beautiful story of SwaRon That I have read. So typically SwaRonish. Thank you so much. Must read for All SwaRon fans. Swayam-Sharon are portrayed so perfectly at each and every point and the way you have described every situation is so interesting to read.

Please continue...waiting for the next update eagerly.

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