arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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kizh72

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Rhea, it was just wonderful, had me giggling away the whole time. And I just loved your take on mami and the young chottey. Can't wait for the next one.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kizh72
Rhea, it was just wonderful, had me giggling away the whole time. And I just loved your take on mami and the young chottey. Can't wait for the next one.

Thank you Kizh .. you giggled? That was the purpose of the entire chapter. And you liked the mami and chote memory.. uff what else to want now..

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Nice one.

The chapter is about mami's emotions mainly.

I liked the anecdote of Arnav and mami from his childhood. Arnav is no less then a child to Mami. She even wants to fix the match between Arnav and phati Saree.,after all his Arnav bitu a is in love with phati Saree.

When Arnav was elaborating his feelings for Khushi, it seemed he is expressing his genuine feelings for Khushi.

Looking forward for the next chapter.

Edited by sohara - 10 years ago

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sohara
Nice one.
The chapter is about mami's emotions mainly.
I liked the anecdote of Arnav and mami from his childhood. Arnav is no less then a child to Mami. She even wants to fix the match between Arnav and phati Saree.,after all his Arnav bitu a is in love with phati Saree.
When Arnav was elaborating his feelings for Khushi, it seemed he is expressing his genuine feelings for Khushi.
Looking forward for the next chapter.

Thank you for liking those mami parts of the chapter Sohara. Yes, you are right, I also feel she has an extra soft spot for her Arnav bitwa. And ASR does feel all sorts of things for the jhalli girl, but how will he admit to it? And more importantly will she? haha even I don't know answers to that yet.

Already thinking what happens in the next chapter.. thanks for saying you are waiting for it.. makes me feeling like writing..

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..Anita..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

I have a huge smile on my face after reading this !!!

Loved mami and the young chotey

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
I have a huge smile on my face after reading this !!!
Loved mami and the young chotey

huge smile is exactly what Arnav and Khushi and di and mami want from you Anita.. they and I are very happy..

young chote and mami.. I wonder how that actually must have been so tried to recreate a moment. Thank you for liking.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Rhea 👏👏👏

Love the start, His nightmares and then channeling his thoughts with Jamuni Dupatta wali...

Loved it...as this is his transition."Tumhare saath bitae huwe moments Yaad rehne lag gaye..."

Now he is angry...early morning...what's new? Laad Governor has been threatened How dare you ruin my beauty sleep...huh...what a ajeeb jodi ...Devi Maiya ne Milaye...

I agree with wiwy, buttoning up...I would love to see him un buttoning in anger...and throw it ...

Di is happy teasing him, making him do things which are only happening in Lala land not in Laad governor land...hehehehe

OH he is bad , he doesn't want to analyze Khushi's confusion...very bad boy...Poor Khushi and Planner di...and at the top " he grudgingly admitted to himself" that she is talented...

Awww I loved his confession which starts right after...thodi paagal but cute...and everything just coming out spreading smile...laadoo phootat hai...bitwa keh mun wa...

I would love to see how Mamiji will handel Khushi now...

Faiqa di when I was writing the dream my first thought went to you.. you liked ? you also noticd teh paagal but cute.. 😳

Hahaha am laughing at all your comments.. laad governor land.. would be so boring.. but mrs laad governor will come and add all her colors to it.

you know my mind thought of all unthinkable reasons for the unbuttoning. I didn't even think of anger.. hey devi maiyya.. ka karein is sanka devi ka..

Can't wait to write what happens next di. feels nice that people are intersted in the story I am telling. And thank you so much for reading and your detailed lovely comment even though you are so busy

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

ok, i fell for mami... again.
and don't lie, you lub her too. match phixing kareke padi... lovely one.👏

the tender dream that makes you vulnerable... and then you have to run a bit faster to make things feel unshaken inside... so well written and i did feel his sadness, his yearning... his need for someone to set things right.

khushi is lovely and anjali is abs the sister he needs and needs to be manipulated just a little bit by.

It was time he left and cleared his head. He would call Aman and get some real work done.'.

why do i like this man so much, and that line, oh, i dig that. 😆

rhea, very nice story going down its path... like the details, the specific bits and pieces of your characters. and their feelings. looking forward to the next chapter.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: indi52
ok, i fell for mami... again.
and don't lie, you lub her too. match phixing kareke padi... lovely one.👏

the tender dream that makes you vulnerable... and then you have to run a bit faster to make things feel unshaken inside... so well written and i did feel his sadness, his yearning... his need for someone to set things right.

khushi is lovely and anjali is abs the sister he needs and needs to be manipulated just a little bit by.

It was time he left and cleared his head. He would call Aman and get some real work done.'.

why do i like this man so much, and that line, oh, i dig that. 😆

rhea, very nice story going down its path... like the details, the specific bits and pieces of your characters. and their feelings. looking forward to the next chapter.

Indi di you stole time from all the madness to read my story.. thank you..

there is one mami I definitely love.. she and issk gave me all the practice needed to come up with mami's dialogues..😆

I am going to preen about because you are quoting lines from my story and saying nice things about it.. really grateful you liked it .. that dream.. yes isn't there something awfully tender in laad governor? by the way both Faiqa di and wiwy liked his waist coat buttoning.. hope you took enough time to savour that.. was written for you..

now that am writing am having so much fun.. can't wait for my own next chapter.. haha.. have become completely sankadevi..

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

^^^

i loved the waist coat buttoning, from last one up to the top with precise movements... so much, i saw nooo reason to share it with anyone else. i know it was for me he he. my bday giphatwa, underisstandings?! 😆

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