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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
super awesome
your description is so so perfect and the way you describe every character and situation its feel like i am watching ipk again
superb

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zafi

Fantastic update.⭐️

I loved it.❤️
I loved how Arnav told Mami he loved Khushi and wanted to marry her.❤️
Manorama Bond is on the case now to get Arnav and Khushi together.⭐️
Bring it on Mami.😆
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃


Haha loved your comment Zafi.. now that mami is involved how can things not get crazier.. lots more to look forward too.. hope you enjoy..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Fantastic update!

Anjali is on mission not listen to khushi and finally khushi gave in..

Arnav, didnt get the chance to speak when khushi called

mami giving hard time to everyone. .

finally she is on mission now. .


thanks for the pm


Happy to see you Madhu and yes Anajali and mami both on a mission to get these two ajeeb people to meet.. And khushi on her own mission to make Payal and Aakash .. Am planning to give missions to more people.. haha lets see how that goes.. thank you!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved it


aww you loved it.. 😳 Thanks a lot for always showing up IsleOfCapri..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

wow what a cute, hilarious and lovely update

mamiji was awesome and her shocked expression were wort readinf for on finding his favorite nephew less son in love and want to get married. And the flashback when Arnav has hugged here was a very very cute moment they shared. Now mamiji is too with Anjali and her match making plans.
i am eager to now shyam and nani reactions and more specifically buaji, i am sure her nand kishore's dialogue will not stop for the day.
The way arnav confessed his feeling for khushi that he wants to marry her and money doesn't matter to him were beautifully describe.
update nxt chapter soon.
P. S. thank you for a long update, it was very well written. You are a very very talented writer.


The girl to whom i dedicated the chapter.. did you see javeria ? It was specially for you.. so glad you enjoyed.

haha have to sit and think of who should know next. and what will be the reaction.. though am tempted to make ASR realise that he does love kushi and just carry her away with him.. no disturbance..

that last line.. thank you so much dear.. you absolutely made my day. I was scared that it will turn out boring and too long.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sathyaish

jus came across this story nd loved it.
plz update soon nd do pm me


A new reader.. am thrilled.. Will definitely PM you sathyaish. Thanks a lot.
Will update by next weekend if all goes as mami and Anjali plan 😉..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: faree

super awesome

your description is so so perfect and the way you describe every character and situation its feel like i am watching ipk again
superb

thanks for the pm


I am extremely grateful reading your comment dear. Hope I continue to do justice and you keep enjoying the story... Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Really Good aarwen😊

My fav part is his telling her money is nothing in front of her and thinking of her , hugging her in fb
I am waiting for the part where Nani will find out and how they will all react.Mamiji is hilarious 😊
Buaji will get fainted , I am sure the way you are telling this story.

Nice and cute update👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: wiwy

Me first😃

Res

Unres

Great development R! Arnav ki pol khul gayi! 😆 He was trying to convince mami but I think he succeeded in convincing himself about his feelings for Khushi! He only missed out the chemistry factor...the dhak dhak...please make him accept that too ! Kitna bhi jogging kar le bach ke kahan jayega bachhu!😆
Anjali is on an unstoppable trip...to get her Chhotey married! Glad she is putting herself to good use instead of moping around! Well done R!😃
Now mami is all set to fix his match with phati sari!👏 Awesome! This will be really interesting. Looking forward to that and khushis reaction!
Even Lakshmiji is doing her best to make them bump into each other! Wah kya scene hai!⭐️
I loved how you interspersed the past with the present, the sad with the happy, and your detailed version of waistcoat buttoning😛 though I would have preferred unbuttoning😆


R kya commentwa hai.. budhiya.. thank you thank you. Am relieved you liked the pacing and progress of the story. Half the time I have no idea what I am writing.

I can't tell you how touched I was to see you immediately come and res. And the unres turned out even better that that.

Haha for mamiji's scene all that practice with Indi di and Issk helped me to write her dialogues. ASR so easily accept.. kaise? Ziddi jo hai.. 😆 By the way I definitely need your help with the unbuttoning 😳 hey devi maiyya when i reach there what will I do.

Thank you for all your encouragement R.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: MehreenB

Really Good aarwen😊


My fav part is his telling her money is nothing in front of her and thinking of her , hugging her in fb
I am waiting for the part where Nani will find out and how they will all react.Mamiji is hilarious 😊
Buaji will get fainted , I am sure the way you are telling this story.

Nice and cute update👏


Haha that is a great idea.. I will write that someday and you will get all the credit Mehreen. I find your point of view on IPK very insightful and so I really hope my story makes sense to you so far while being pagal and cute. Thank you!

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