arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: manee03
Nice

Excited to see a new reader. thank you manee03. hope to see you again.

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Awww...Rhea...😊
Button got opened...then closed...then opened...Why are you so cruel on us??? OK now how can I move on????

OK OK agey badhtey hain...don't look at me with your passionate anger young aunty...Oh I mean Young Lady...

Now start from the last...Buaji and her actions ...in Khushi's style ...you made me laugh like a crazy girl over here...Yes I am an old girl but loved that description of yours ..hai re nand Kishore.

Arnav's possessive and protective side in that damn rain ...yes of course how can his girl go like that.He will escort her and ahem ahem ...He wants to take her back home...but he won't say that and show her his dominance...You wanna go back with me instead of yours...what a charm???

OK now the Slither, my Scorpion has problem with their wedding...he is so cupid in their case...Love him ...hate him...but he is there hissing and dum utha ke...

Love it Rhea...a light hearted update...

Thnx for the wishes ...so nice of you😊

Faiqa di I read the first line and started laughing.. but then that passionate anger wala thobda came and saree hasi chali gayi.. uff.. how to move ahead. hope you enjoyed the unbuttoning..

Love your comment about Shyam being cupid.. stupid scorpion snakewa ..whatever he does has to backfire.. nothing can touch our ASR and his Khushi..

Happy you liked the SUV ride in the rain.. complicated man and his complicated way of showing love.. which he does not even know is called love.. but he will protect her.. hamesha..

Thank you young crazy girl..hehehe.. I always eagerly wait for your detailed comment.. you are super nice to young aunty..

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: aarwen

Mehereen.. woman of the hour.. bhelcomes bhelcomes..

I had to dedicate the chapter to you since your comment was what gave me this pagaal idea.. and all the readers loved it.. so thank you!

Love your understanding of their love story.. yes he has marked her in more ways than one. In fact she has marked him too.. apne rang mein..

Yeaaa you liked the seat belt exchange.. I loved writing it.. Imagine khushi looking serious, drawing close to ASR and putting on his seatbelt for him.. Bet ASR loved it! maybe he got dhak dhaks too..

You are very welcome Rhea.But honestly I didn't do anything.I guess all the time and do the same with everyone and I read a lot of stories.Some I don't even write comment but I do read em.

Mamiji and Buaji are two character who we can do whatever.

Now NK is another fav of all .Use him to make him take his vest off in anger and in possessiveness and def he will shout st her and then may be they both end up saying sorry to each other.Just a guess and an idea .if he can drag her away from her imagine what will he do?

Rhea can you put a link of your index at the bottom of each update.That will catch more readers.Trust me.I am lazy .I know that.

Edited by MehreenB - 10 years ago

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

I always enjoy a jealous Arnav.😆👏

It is always fun.😆

I loved these lines: "He knew with certainty she would not pick up. With the same certainty he knew he would get to her."

"Khushi knew it was him with as much certainty as she knew he would come and get her."

It just goes to show how much love and care they both have for each other even if they haven't realised it yet.

I just love NK.

"Naughty naughty Nanav.. Mere bhai.. Tum shaadi kar re ho? .. Wo bhi Kushiji se? sweet sweet Khushi se?"

He is so much fun.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply superb
loved it-

Thank you IsleOfCapri. Glad you liked the update.

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: zafi
Awesome update.⭐️

I loved it.❤️

I always enjoy a jealous Arnav.😆👏

It is always fun.😆

I loved these lines: "He knew with certainty she would not pick up. With the same certainty he knew he would get to her."

"Khushi knew it was him with as much certainty as she knew he would come and get her."

It just goes to show how much love and care they both have for each other even if they haven't realised it yet.

I just love NK.

"Naughty naughty Nanav.. Mere bhai.. Tum shaadi kar re ho? .. Wo bhi Kushiji se? sweet sweet Khushi se?"

He is so much fun.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

Here comes the colorful smiley big font girl.. Zafi your comments always look so exciting..

Aww.. you quoted your favourite lines.. thank you dear.. always nice to know if my writing is still making sense.. haha..

NK babua toh kamaal hi hai.. I enjoyed writing his dialogues..

really liked your thought that each of ASR and khushi 's action shows their love and care for each other. The fights, dhak dhaks and still the intense love makes Arnav and Khushi this special, don't you think?

Thanks a lot for stopping by. Next update hopefully by Thursday..

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: aarwen

naughty nannav and naughty Khushiji.. rain sequences have to be naughty don't you think?

About the raindrops..I don't remember exactly how I came to know but it was something I used to believe in as a kid.. you see like our Khushiji I also wanted to get married jaldi jaldi..

Yes those rerun episodes with NK and ASR together are very enjoyable. Actually I like all scenes where the three brothers are together. I want to try and write more scenes like that in my story also. Hope it turns out well.

And dear fair slender Sohara when you find ASR maybe not your hand, but atleast let me know if your nose goes red! hahaha

Thank you for the wonderful comment..

Haha, naak laal,

I'm so besharam, don't know will my nose turn red or not.

But I badly need an ASR in my life.

Too much adrenalin rush!😉

hahhaha

By the way my skin is light, but I'm not. I am not fat, but not slender like Khushi.

Looking forward for more bromance in your story.

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sweetfairy007

@sweetfairy007

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Hi Aarwen,

Now only I saw your story.It is full of laughter.I liked it a lot.You have developed the story from a different situation .Suggesting Arnav to act like he likes a low class girl is a fantastic idea.

Arnav's possessiveness with Khushi's crazyness is a treat to read. Your story is so good that even Mamiji turned to be very good.

Awesome and best wishes.👏👏👏

Awaiting for your further updates...

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: sweetfairy007
Hi Aarwen,

Now only I saw your story.It is full of laughter.I liked it a lot.You have developed the story from a different situation .Suggesting Arnav to act like he likes a low class girl is a fantastic idea.

Arnav's possessiveness with Khushi's crazyness is a treat to read. Your story is so good that even Mamiji turned to be very good.

Awesome and best wishes.👏👏👏

Awaiting for your further updates...

Hi sweetfairy007.. you have a lovely name,by the way..

Thank you for the wishes.. so you are enjoying how paagal sankadevi and jealous laad governor are dealing with this crazy idea.. haha yes mamiji also is busy match phixing..

very happy that you came across my story.. will surely PM you the next update.. I try and update on thursdays.. looking forward to see you then..