arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: AMAL722
awesome:)

Thank you Amal722.. seeing comments on my story leave me so happy and eager to write the next chapter.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: juhi611
Another great chapter! So glad that dhak dhak and acidity made an appearance... Those moments are always fun to read! 😆
Green with envy Arnav... Sighhh!! Excuse me while I make a trip to dreamland

Hope Shyam doesn't do anything drastic... But then again, Arnav in protective mode is always a delight to read. 😳

But that last para with Buaji??? I couldn't stop laughing!!!!😃

Juhi611.. such a nice comment.. thank you thank you..

Possessive jealous ASR.. hayee.. take me with you in this dreamland..

If Shyam is too evil I will make buaji and Nand Kisore babua teach him a lesson.. hahaha.. tab toh thik hai na?

Arshi dhak dhak and acidity is my favourite too.. Arnav and Khushi have told me they wants lots of it in this story!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya
Hope Khushi tells Arnav about Shyam, before he does anything cruel.

completely agree with you pinky_sathiya.. I wished in the show also Khushi had told Arnav..

Khushi is too busy with lakshmiji and her loose lehenga right now ..haha.. but as soon as she realizes she must tell Arnavji she will surely expose Shyam..

Thank you pinky_sathiya.. love to see your interest in this story..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: shiv456
lovely update

Thank you so much shiva456 for always coming so quickly and leaving a comment.. hope to see you soon.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Nahi!!! Ye nahi ho sakta. I m not on first page??? I missed the spot yaar. *cries* Blame on my sister since she had my phone wid her. *fumes*

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Isn't it amazing dat how small things can bring a beautiful smile on khushi's face. Love dis abt her.
finally khushi knows to wear seatbelts. :))
Arnav is happy when he is enthusiastic 4 completing his office work and also when he left his work to be surrounde by beautiful thoughts of his personal happiness/ sweet ( in future).
NK's impromptu love/marna/ghar speech and attempt to catch buaji made crack up violently. The final nail on coffin- buaji herself started to laugh when she saw Nk trying to hold her up.
Beautful update since it brought a very big happy smile on my face.
Hilarious update since it made me crack up literally.

Hai re meri sanaka devi.. der aaye durust aaye.. haha.. chalo NK babu's hard work in trying to lift the heavy buaji and my hard work in thinking of his dialogues has brought such good results with it.. you know how happy i get when you say you smiled and laughed reading the update.. that is always my main goal.. have the reader forget all their tension and get immersed in sapno ki duniya..

When I started watching the show I loved the exact thing you mentioned above about Khushi. Really to be able to laugh even in times of strife..make jilebi when she was trapped whole night by a rakshas.. ooohh that reminds me our Khushi needs to make jilebis.. see talking to you always gives me so many ideas!

Yes Khushi Kumari Gupta knows how to wear a seatbelt. In fact nowadays she makes Arnav Singh raizada wear his seatbelt also! hai re nand kisore..

Thank you so much dear.. am specially grateful that you wait with such eagerness for an update..

Isn't the pink and orange combination above looking lovely?

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Superb part.
Buaji ' reaction was just too good
Continue soon

Nice to see you asha! and thank you for liking.. Like I said a reader was wondering if buaji would faint hearing Khushi and laad governor had fallen in love.. all your comments give me such a lot of inspiration to continue the story.. already working on what next..

sneak preview.. a certain young girl might also faint.. see ya!

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Thnx Rhea😊 for dedicating this chapter to this naachees❤️

How brutally our Arnav makes he marks his Khushi always ...as his starting from her wrist all the way down to his heart .Just his. Now he doesn't want to marry but wants to take her home.He doesn't care but goes behind her as protective body guard.NK and his talking about Khushi is making him more possessive.Love this side of Arnav.
Khushi who becomes happy with small things and her smile is the one which he see every where even in his thoughts.
Hey , but Buaji didn't get fainted , she was literally choking over NK , and the way he was holding her up.

My favorite , seat belt exchange .Indi di was right...beautiful after all she is learning everything from him/

Thanks😊

Mehereen.. woman of the hour.. bhelcomes bhelcomes..

I had to dedicate the chapter to you since your comment was what gave me this pagaal idea.. and all the readers loved it.. so thank you!

Love your understanding of their love story.. yes he has marked her in more ways than one. In fact she has marked him too.. apne rang mein..

Yeaaa you liked the seat belt exchange.. I loved writing it.. Imagine khushi looking serious, drawing close to ASR and putting on his seatbelt for him.. Bet ASR loved it! maybe he got dhak dhaks too..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Lolz fantastic update 👏 🤣
I love the storm scene and details you write down to describe it
A wild uncontrollable storm had arrived. The satin curtains on the french window leading to the poolside flew with such force that the danger o the curtain rods giving way.

His mind subconsciously registered the menacing weather, but most of him was still swimming in thoughts of a pair of stormy eyes.. Aapko kya farak parta hai?.. She had demanded to know..

Farak parhta hai famous dialogues of khushi and arnav has started. Great. I like reading khushi thoughts on rain. Aww ts so cute that Khushi used to run in courtyard for the first drop of seasonal rain. And now that she has finally drenched in rain, she is definitely going to marry arnav.
Oh shyam is villain in this story and he is thinking about breaking arnav and khushi marriage. He is sick. he has a beautiful caring wife but he is so cheap to thiink about other women.
I wonder what will be khushi and her family reaction when they will see him, afterall gupta family has hidden his treacherous and cheapest act.
His entry will give a new twist to story.
Lolz NK conversation was hilarious. He is so funny.
Buaji reaction on proposals for her neices was predictable. I knew it she will react in a similar way you told.
I am sure next cpnversation between buaji and NandKishore will be interesting.

So sweet of you Javeria for noticing the details and quoting those lines. I Loved your line about Khushi drenched in rain.. actually she is drenched in Arnavji's love.

Yes people like Shyam are sick and pathetic.. I don't know what will happen now that he has entered my story. I don't even want to think about it! Another reader was asking me about khushi's reaction to Shyam.. I want her to tell Arnavji everything.. I never liked her not telling him about Shyam..

But you are right before all this serious talks buaji and NK still have to be introduced.. hai re nand kisore..

Thank you so much.. and thrilled that you laughed and had fun reading the update.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Horizon
Rhea, just trying to catch up the chapters I missed. Just read2 and had to comment. Great foundation laid from all sides for the heavenly match, Anjali, ESP mamaji. Loved her FBwith young arnav bitwa, very intuitive, and my fab has to be that "black and white phillum hero" , oh my vintage hero...

many match fixers.. Making it a great read..
Going to read 3 now
A request, is it possible to give link to the next chapter at the end of one. It would certainly me life easy for late latifs like trying to read multiple chapters at once...

Indu that is a wonderful suggestion. I have added the link to the next chapter for each of the already posted chapters. Thank you for the idea.

I have been looking forward to your thoughts on this story.. very happy you are liking the madness, chaos and dhak dhaks..

Yes lots of match fixers.. I decided the more the merrier.. haha..

And hopefully chapter 3 will be special to you. so please do read whenever you get a chance..

the more I obsess over your vintage hero the more I love ASR.. uff.. ye naadani hum kar baithe..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: sohara
It was a nice read Rhea.
I was laughing throughout.
Loved how Arnav drove to give Khsuhi ride in the rain. And the naughty girl was sensing all sort of thing inside her mind.
But what is the rain drop on face thing! It is true?

NK's part was hilarious. As I am watching NK and Arnav's bonding in the rerun, I was enjoying even more. This guy brings an involuntary smile on my face.

considering the fact that the slender arm in question was prone to bruising quite easily.
This line cracked me up.
Seriously do people get bruise so easily.
My skin is also very light, but I don't get bruise so easily.
Poor Khushi!

naughty nannav and naughty Khushiji.. rain sequences have to be naughty don't you think?

About the raindrops..I don't remember exactly how I came to know but it was something I used to believe in as a kid.. you see like our Khushiji I also wanted to get married jaldi jaldi..

Yes those rerun episodes with NK and ASR together are very enjoyable. Actually I like all scenes where the three brothers are together. I want to try and write more scenes like that in my story also. Hope it turns out well.

And dear fair slender Sohara when you find ASR maybe not your hand, but atleast let me know if your nose goes red! hahaha

Thank you for the wonderful comment..