arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Prettycool
Bookmarking this interesting story

Hey Prettycool.. am happy you found it interesting and hoping you like the story once you read it.. thank you..

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

I hope that U r going to include scene of a jealous Arnav in the nxt update coz
A jealous Arnav= More flirty Arnav
hahaha!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

hi rhea,

i finally get some time to read and the poolside shenanigans of the raizada man are delighting me no end.

She took a step backward. Breath refusing to leave her. He seemed to glide forward. With each faltering step that she took back, she seemed to draw him closer. She moved back till there was no back left to go. His gaze lingered on her face, caressing and scorching at the same time. "aa.. Arnavji?", she bravely breathlessly whispered. Part of her was still unsure why she needed to object when this closeness felt absolutely scarily wonderful.

beautiful writing there.

so we have scheming nani and anjali... hmmm... i am never quite sure how to deal with this interfering love... but i am sure our immersed in papers man,( can ya hear indi'd heart go kaboom?), will manage fine, even without the schemers and dreamers. but they are swwet and i lau nani's fake khadoos-ness.

i love mami... yeah time khushi learned to suttupiya kar leo and listen to the knowledgeable one.

asr is mom inside... awww.
khushi is bahute cute... so confused, her rebellious bit does nooot like any distance from that awful laad gov. clever rebellious bit.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

oh h, he is dragging and hauling her... i am swooning.

really, how can she look at that nk when rakshas is standing there staring at her...😆

lovely chapter... more soon.

liked that line so much.

Aakash, however, not handicapped by such obscuring of judgment by matters of the heart, was better equipped to deal with the peculiar situation that seemed to be unfolding before him.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: indi52
hi rhea,

i finally get some time to read and the poolside shenanigans of the raizada man are delighting me no end.

She took a step backward. Breath refusing to leave her. He seemed to glide forward. With each faltering step that she took back, she seemed to draw him closer. She moved back till there was no back left to go. His gaze lingered on her face, caressing and scorching at the same time. "aa.. Arnavji?", she bravely breathlessly whispered. Part of her was still unsure why she needed to object when this closeness felt absolutely scarily wonderful.

beautiful writing there.

so we have scheming nani and anjali... hmmm... i am never quite sure how to deal with this interfering love... but i am sure our immersed in papers man,( can ya hear indi'd heart go kaboom?), will manage fine, even without the schemers and dreamers. but they are swwet and i lau nani's fake khadoos-ness.

i love mami... yeah time khushi learned to suttupiya kar leo and listen to the knowledgeable one.

asr is mom inside... awww.
khushi is bahute cute... so confused, her rebellious bit does nooot like any distance from that awful laad gov. clever rebellious bit.

Originally posted by: indi52
oh h, he is dragging and hauling her... i am swooning.

really, how can she look at that nk when rakshas is standing there staring at her...😆

lovely chapter... more soon.

liked that line so much.

Aakash, however, not handicapped by such obscuring of judgment by matters of the heart, was better equipped to deal with the peculiar situation that seemed to be unfolding before him.

Your swooning has made me swoon.. what the? ASR from my story made you do that Indi di?

There is an ASR part of me that says don't care, but the Khushi in me feels a little disappointed at times when I don't see a lot of people reading the story I feel like telling. But you are here Indi di and saying such giggle worthy things and that makes me very happy. Specially coming from you a compliment on my writing means a lot. So thank you 😳

I hate interference of any kind.. but the ladies of IPK are a force to reckon with.. have to intervene in everything 😆

Sure we like clever rebellious Khushi.. You never know she just might end up dragging laad governor himself or just as likely may order him to wear that seatbelt..

Okay now I have to write that into the next chapter.. hehehe..

I know fanfic isn't your thing, but still you make it a point to come.. Thank you so much di.. you made my day.. 🤗

Edited by aarwen - 10 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Really cute update👏

First ,the letter which halts her down on her dhak dhaks and extra flying butterflies in her stomach,,,Which even extra Jalaibs and Samosas , I am sure couldn't stop.

This is not a letter , this is a TICKET of DEEDAR...hynk for them to see each other but this letter made her sad...Arnav , What should I do with you.

But next ticket of happiness came on the PHONE...awww that was sooting for her soul but she made him mad...haha...equal partner in crime...She did take the revenge by not picking his phone.

Yes they both are made for each other.

But he lives on her nerves and that is why instead of going home she went to him...RM and at the top made him angry and jealous by shaking hand with NK ...and he didn't leave her there either , dragged her with him...in his heart with anger...

awww my fav NK and his international Hindi...Mami ans her family ...with extraterrestrial powers of being ajeeb ...with hinglish one side and ...and makeupia other side...

I love this over active Khushi and her extra speedy imagination which leaves Arnav in the middle of crossing but arrow always goes to Khushi's side...

Nice Update😊

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Really cute update👏

First ,the letter which halts her down on her dhak dhaks and extra flying butterflies in her stomach,,,Which even extra Jalaibs and Samosas , I am sure couldn't stop.
This is not a letter , this is a TICKET of DEEDAR...hynk for them to see each other but this letter made her sad...Arnav , What should I do with you.
But next ticket of happiness came on the PHONE...awww that was sooting for her soul but she made him mad...haha...equal partner in crime...She did take the revenge by not picking his phone.

Yes they both are made for each other.

But he lives on her nerves and that is why instead of going home she went to him...RM and at the top made him angry and jealous by shaking hand with NK ...and he didn't leave her there either , dragged her with him...in his heart with anger...

awww my fav NK and his international Hindi...Mami ans her family ...with extraterrestrial powers of being ajeeb ...with hinglish one side and ...and makeupia other side...

I love this over active Khushi and her extra speedy imagination which leaves Arnav in the middle of crossing but arrow always goes to Khushi's side...
Nice Update😊

Faiqa di love your comments as always.. You think even samosas and jilebis won't help Khushi? I agree.. If Payash's wedding Arnav stayed that way for more days, nothing would have worked for any of us.. haha.. his smirk.. hayee..

Letter .. phone.. thoughts.. everything connected them to each other.. but when they came face to face Khushi got busy with the chor and Lakshmiji.. parmeswari ka kya karein! I know she missed him as much as he missed her.. but she gets more easily distracted than him.. I hope am able to stick to the character traits we all love..

I didn't know you liked NK so much.. now I will pay special attention to him.. Actually it is so difficult to write mami, buaji, NK dialogues that am thinking I should only write rabba ve scenes for Arnav Khushi.. hehe wo bhi khushi hum bhi khush.. rabba ve..

Thank you Faiqa di .. very happy you are enjoying..

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: aarwen

I don't think I consciously focused on Khushi this chapter, but mostly the readers felt that.. Luckily you all like the Khushi here.. and the butterflies in her stomach 😳 Thanks for an insightful comment as always.

She is lost in his thoughts.. staying away makes it worse.. and yelling at him makes her sing.. love... and the ajeeb love of these two.. always makes me happy mehreen. Like you said whatever these crazy people do we still can see how they fit perfectly together..

Guess what... am thinking of adding in one of your guesses next chapter.. gas..gas karo kaun sa? haha.. I really really look forward to your comments. Thank you dear.

hmmm guesiing Mamiji one because I made a lot of guesses .Life runs on it what say 😆