arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya
Kya, no you can't leave us there...Nahiii

pinky_sathiya your nahiii reminds me of Khushi... haha... Angry ASR and clueless Khushi need some time alone.. that is why left them there 😆

Hope you enjoyed.. will update as soon as possible. Thanks a lot.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: zafi
Fantastic update.⭐️

I loved it.❤️

It's fascinating how much Arnav and Khushi missed and thought about each other in one week of not seeing one another.

Now crazy NK is here as well igniting the green monster in Arnav.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

That in orange lovely observation.. exactly what I tried to capture Zani..

hehe.. Isn't jealous ASR irresistible?

By the way I love how you use bright colors and smileys and the large font.. makes me feel you were excited.. and that makes me excited.. thanks a lot for leaving behind a wonderful comment.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: shiv456
fantastic

Thanks for always promptly reading shiv456. your fantastic means a lot.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: juhi611
Haii... what a chapter! From Khushi's dream... to NK's entry- I couldn't stop laughing!!! 😆 But did you have to end where you did end?😔 Really looking forward to the next chapter now! 😊

your haii juhi611.. uff...

Haha.. sorry for the cliff hanger.. but already they had missed each other too much.. fought on the phone as well.. Khushi and Arnav said .. bas.. now leave us alone together.. hahaha.. so I gave them 1 week's time while I try to think of what they say to each other..

very very happy you liked the chapter.. thank you!

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..Anita..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Not a cliff hanger :(

Can't wait for the next update

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Mehreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Absolutely loved it.😊

This chapter is all about Khushi.She was absolutely marvelous in this update.From talking to hallucinating.From singing to calling thief and from shaking his head to shaking him in jealousy.

Loved her mantra for not paying attention to his phone.And , fluttering butterflies in her stomach.😆 good one.Arnav is truly made for her and she made for him.He dragged her around , what should I say.This is out ASR. Two crazy ones .How Ajeeb we both are.Yes.Now as she scolded at him , he is angry at her but is relieved seeing her too.

Lovely

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Shalma/Suman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Hey aarween, i was reading ch 4 again and now i am confused. did khushi dreamt abt letter scene or it was real??? I m feeling it was a dream of her. By d way i m waitn for AK having alone time and rabbave in nxt chapter.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
Not a cliff hanger :(
Can't wait for the next update

😊 As soon as possible.. Thank you for getting engrossed in the story Anita..

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Absolutely loved it.😊

This chapter is all about Khushi.She was absolutely marvelous in this update.From talking to hallucinating.From singing to calling thief and from shaking his head to shaking him in jealousy.
Loved her mantra for not paying attention to his phone.And , fluttering butterflies in her stomach.😆 good one.Arnav is truly made for her and she made for him.He dragged her around , what should I say.This is out ASR. Two crazy ones .How Ajeeb we both are.Yes.Now as she scolded at him , he is angry at her but is relieved seeing her too.

Lovely

I don't think I consciously focused on Khushi this chapter, but mostly the readers felt that.. Luckily you all like the Khushi here.. and the butterflies in her stomach 😳 Thanks for an insightful comment as always.

She is lost in his thoughts.. staying away makes it worse.. and yelling at him makes her sing.. love... and the ajeeb love of these two.. always makes me happy mehreen. Like you said whatever these crazy people do we still can see how they fit perfectly together..

Guess what... am thinking of adding in one of your guesses next chapter.. gas..gas karo kaun sa? haha.. I really really look forward to your comments. Thank you dear.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
Hey aarween, i was reading ch 4 again and now i am confused. did khushi dreamt abt letter scene or it was real??? I m feeling it was a dream of her. By d way i m waitn for AK having alone time and rabbave in nxt chapter.

Oohh sorry for confusing you arhi_crazy.. yes it was her dream.. she was getting ready and looking pretty for him in sapno ki duniya.. and he scolded her.. laad governor kahin ke.. even in dreams he is scary..

You were rereading chapter? you are sooo sweet.. 🤗 fewer people read this story so I sometimes get worried. Then some of you leave behind these wonderful comments and all my worry goes..

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