arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: ipkknd12
Absolutely loved the update. Slow sweet realizations of our lead pair... was wonderful and natural. and your rendition of the famous "I Love you dammit" is simply beautiful.
You left us hanging with the last sentence there...Eagerly waiting for the next update. :)

am thrilled with this comment ipkknd12.. felt natural? yeaaa.. and thank you so very much for liking the i love you dammit. In the past few weeks they have slowly grown to acknowledge their love..it just got a name finally in this chapter.. i didn't feel the need for something major to trigger this acceptance.. like you say.. just wanted it to be slow and sweet.

cliffhanger ending.. evil shyam laugh.. will update soon.. and am looking forward to your thoughts on the chapter.

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
Lovely update !!
filled witg buaji , lakshmiji n mamiji's antics n khushis craziness of course. ..Loved the I love u dammit. .but please no misunderstandings like Ipk...that wile shy am Wat is he up to now😡 n does he know arnav has khushis phone...???
Thanks for pm

thank you barunz4ever.

oohh you liked all the sanakaness? hahaha am happy to oblige. Khushi loved the I love you dammit too.. she first smiled slowly and then it spread and became wider..only silly Arnavji walked away in anger.

and vile Shyam just had to writhe his way in.. I have no idea what he knows.. haha usually I just try to ignore him while writing the chapter.. he still manages to make his appearance.. once I know what he does know I will tell you all for sure..

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1013

Awesome update dear

Arnav told her his feelings

Wow

Why shyam is massaged her

Hope arnav won't take it wrong

And trust her

Sorry from late reply

Thanks for your pm

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1014

Arnav and Khushi's scenes were just simply magical. Your writing gives us impression that these scenes are happening right in front of us like a movie😊 Khushi's confusion over Arnav's feelings towards her was pretty justified but she shouldn't let something Shayam told her rule her mind, but eventually everything happens for a reason and that is 'the' great ASR confessed his feelings to her, so unknowingly Shayam has made their bond more stronger😊 the whole terrace scene was a good replacement for the bad memory attached on our minds of Khushi's and Shayam! I wonder what Shayam is up to now, I have a feeling Arnav won't mistrust Khushi... Waiting to see what you have in store for us😊

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Rrpdxb

@Rrpdxb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: aarwen

haha cupid in arshis life... and here is trying so hard to create mu.. daiyyo ho.. he stands no chance in front of their love.

thank you for continuing to enjoy the story Rrpdxb. Will you tell me the story behind this intriguing name?

@ Bold 😆 nothing yaar, call me Ritu, one r stands for my name and r and p , stands for my fathers name,since I am living in Dubai I made it short dxb is for Dubai. 😆 Pbm solved.

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1016

I hope arnav does not believe shyam

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1017

W*F?

A shitty Shyam is gonna cause Arnav to misjudge Khushi

Crap and double crap

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1018

Rhea, how long before we know Arnav's decision of trust Khushi or not..???

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: rk2127
Rhea, how long before we know Arnav's decision of trust Khushi or not..???

Thank you for asking me rk2127.. Now I have demanded an answer from him..He has just told me his decision and I am writing it down now... hello hi bye bye..