arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1001

brilliant chapter, great story telling. plan worked, chatt par aak miliye...

asr falling apart, is that the denouement of that?... will i be able to withstand this again? why is this young man's life so full of challenge.

isn't it enough he is dying to marry a girl who talks to goats? but then that is why he is so smart. he hears his heart... when he allows it to make any noise, that is.

the bit about not being able to read a goat's mind, fabulous.

As she continued to fume in anger her small earrings swayed catching his undivided attention.

underlined words cause heart attack.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1002

Please non miss understanding again please Arnav believe Khushi help get .

Awesome update

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Mehreen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1003

Simply, loudly, screamingly cute update.

My favourite part is his confession but above that his thinking about Babuji.He is a man and he knows better.Khushi loves him and has accepted it many times and he is right she is seeing it but ignoring it.

Hmmm, it seems Shyam is ready for more shoes after this message.

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Cynthia Abruzzo DeSiena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1004

My goodness Rhea, I have been waiting for your update all this while and it was here already? Did you not send PM's?

Anyway...I love you, dammit! good one...he has said it and I don't know what Shyam texted at the end so I really am not sure what is going to happen. When I read that he was going to the roof I prayed he wouldn't find Khushi in Shyam's arms but now a message from Shyam...what did it say? Plan worked? what plan??? Is that the translation? you are leaving me hanging!

nice...

Edited by cinthiann1758 - 10 years ago

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
My goodness Rhea, I have been waiting for your update all this while and it was here already? Did you not send PM's?

Anyway...I love you, dammit! good one...he has said it and I don't know what Shyam texted at the end so I really am not sure what is going to happen. When I read that he was going to the roof I prayed he wouldn't find Khushi in Shyam's arms but now a message from Shyam...what did it say? Plan worked? what plan??? Is that the translation? you are leaving me hanging!

nice...

oh I must have missed you in the PMs I sent out. Sorry Cynthia di. And sorry about no translations. The message said, "Plan worked. Come meet me on the rooftop Khushiji".

it has all my readers very worried. And it has me the writer worried too because I wrote it and now am trying to figure out what next. were you already worried the first time ASR made his way to the rooftop? yeaa.. as a writer it makes me feel good that my story can evoke such responses di.

Thank you as always for the encouragement. I will update soon and this time surely send you a PM.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1006

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Simply, loudly, screamingly cute update.

My favourite part is his confession but above that his thinking about Babuji.He is a man and he knows better.Khushi loves him and has accepted it many times and he is right she is seeing it but ignoring it.

Hmmm, it seems Shyam is ready for more shoes after this message.

Aah here you are with your great comment as usual mehreen.

first of all thanks a lot for all those adjectives you sued for the update. you liked it so much? am smiling widely.

About the confession I was nervous writing it. I wanted it to have a flavor of hamesha, but the scene from the show is so perfect that how do you take that and make it different yet same. asr carried it through in my version and in the show. which reminds me did you hear that sksh might be postponed? am so upset at not getting to see Barun.

thank you for noticing and liking the part about babuji. i always thought we should have gotten some interactions between him and arnav bitwa. babuji did not like shyam, but i have a feeling he would have liked his damadji for sure.

such a nice way of putting it.. she sees it but ignores it. I think long back when she imagined the start of dhak dhaks and decided it is love was when her heart had not been hurt. Also the feeling not as intense perhaps as now. As the love became stronger all sorts of emotions and thoughts that she must have never imagined are racing through her. and her immediate response is to close her eyes to them. but luckily she can still feel her heartbeats..

ooh wrote a long comment.. hope everything is going well with the business.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: hajr
Please non miss understanding again please Arnav believe Khushi help get .
Awesome update

Hi hajr.. don't worry dear.. it will all be fine for sure. ASR will finally figure out what needs to get done and Khushi will never leave his side however angry or unreachable he is. hamesha..

thank you for enjoying the chapter!

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: indi52
brilliant chapter, great story telling. plan worked, chatt par aak miliye...

asr falling apart, is that the denouement of that?... will i be able to withstand this again? why is this young man's life so full of challenge.

isn't it enough he is dying to marry a girl who talks to goats? but then that is why he is so smart. he hears his heart... when he allows it to make any noise, that is.

the bit about not being able to read a goat's mind, fabulous.

As she continued to fume in anger her small earrings swayed catching his undivided attention.

underlined words cause heart attack.

Thank you Indi di. I am very happy you liked the chapter. Everyone is really worried about Shyam and misunderstandings and an angry ASR, but like Khushi who wants the marriage for the right reasons, I couldn't have a promise of hamesha without doing something about Shyam. So for now am letting him send creepy msgs to Khushiji's phone.

the thing I love about ASR (apart from all the other things that I love about him too) is how he believes in action and handling problems. love? you want me to hear my heartbeats.. fine I will flirt with Khushi and give her bindi and be a waiter for her and in the process make every girl breathless. heartbreak? you want me to scream into the night.. fine I will do just that and then go marry the girl I love..can't really hate.. but damn if I don't try to hate her.. and fail.. atleast she is mine.

haha thanks for liking lakshmiji's part. maybe I can write another story after this. the mysterious case of the missed mutton.

do you remember Khushi's cute jhumkas? they stuck a few times to the laad governors shirt quite determinedly. they do need his undivided attention.. hehehe

I was always planning to end the story with their wedding and with a day to go that means I have lots to write. hope you continue to like it I am having so much fun with this. thank you for the inspiration Indi di.

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1009

Originally posted by: Rrpdxb
Awesome!
So shyamji started showing his true color, I hope no mu between kushi and arnav.

After all he's cupid in arshis life.

Thanks Sweety for the pm 🤗. Pls update soon.

haha cupid in arshis life... and here is trying so hard to create mu.. daiyyo ho.. he stands no chance in front of their love.

thank you for continuing to enjoy the story Rrpdxb. Will you tell me the story behind this intriguing name?

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aarwen

@aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1010

Originally posted by: mamidis
Another misunderstandingding now.. poor khushi

mostly everyone has been worried for ASR.. nice to see you worry about Khushi. yes she is floating on clouds of happiness.. smiling and blushing and dreaming.. if asr gets too angry, I will take you along with me and ensure he keeps khushi safe and happy. deal?

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