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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

Awesome concept
Loved it
Continue soon

Thanks! :)

Originally posted by: Jahnavi_KRAS

Wooohooo ur back

N yess
Prologue Accha tha ...
Continueee sooon!!

Thankyou so much! Hope you like the upcoming updates as well! :) ^_^
Keep the support!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Just got my Laptop together 😳...

U know how tempting this title is 😉 , I hope u stand up-to it 😛... I will.

Those six lines (As u said) say very much , if u know what i mean... haha, i do.
The pronoun "His" say a lot in the prologue 😉... Tu pagal hein.
No wonder the name of the story is 'Beasty' sort of 😛 😆... Haan maiya! Itni excited mat ho

Don't worry if u go off track , i'll be the first one to warn u 😎 😛... Yeah yeah, i know :P

I hope u will be updating soon , Cause i'm really looking forward to it 😊... Awww...
Nice one it is 👍🏼... Thanksh!

Thanks toh mai kehne se rahi , Love u se kaam chala le 🤗 ❤️. Araam se chala lunga me! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Heyo! I was just having a tour of the thread before I actually posted my review. Kinda time-pass sort of thing. Okay okay :P


The much hyped dedication of yours was of no need. And secondly you didn't mention the purpose or any specific reason to it. You see, it matter's a lot to be specific. Of course, I am the 'one-of-a-kind', Unique creation, But not the Eighth Wonder. Please, include me to that list. You are the eighth wonder, dont deny it

Now coming to the actual cause of this comment, Well! What do I say? I mean it is different. But you gotta make it larger than what we expect. Nothing predictable would do this time. That's a warning Girl. I'll definitely take care, and if i do stumble, the old shenz di is always there you know, saving my screwed up back :P

And please I do expect a lot of flattering for the girl. Please! Make the guy beautify the girl with his eyes. With his gaze dipping into her. With her essence engulfing him, wrapped with a sheet of pretension make him at least notice the beauty that girl possesses. Make Rey realize how gorgeous is Kria, Standing right in front of his eyes, ready to serve him the torturous time of his life.
Yes Yes ! Definitely! I'm going to make it different. I'm going to atleast try.

All I can say is let the words flow. And better make it good. There's no scope of you escaping put of this, leaving it all messed up. I won't let you do that. Yeah, as I said, saving my screwed up back always :P

And better fulfill your promises if you have made one. I will, atleast try.

PS: Seems like I have wrote something unusual comment. I do get carried away at times. Can't help it. But you have to tolerate this. You have got no other option. Now! Update! :P
And I love you! about updating, I will. and no, you didnt get carried away, not to worry :P


Last but not the least, thankyou, for everything. :) <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: So_Naley

Helloz! Heyaa!

I seem to be extremely late!So sorry! :( You're not late, not to worry.

About the concept, its very interesting! Thanksh! *grins*

Falling for the exact same person you don't want to fall for,directly walking into a trap set for you even though you have prior knowledge about it! I love you girl ! ;)

Unusual, but really amazing! Aww..

Continue soon! I will :)

PS:Remember the regular updates after every two days ka promise, I am holding you to it! 😆Hang me to death, if i don't update or hold on to my promise! :*


And thankyou! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: reyaditi

Hello...welcum back Rash... Thankyouuu! :*

I guess U dint forget me... I did not dumbo. how can I?

Lovely...Prologue was short... Lol apologies! ;)

Losing his heart for the first time sounds interesting... Really? thanks!

Do update soon... I will :)

Since every two days...I guess we will get an update today...Sorry for a late review...College projects U see... I completely understand, don't worry abt it :)

Waiting... Patience is a virtue ;)

Love Aditi...


And thankyou! :* <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Chapter 1

He seemed to be in a trance, she was so beautiful, long slender legs with nothing covering them, perfectly toned curves and the sleekest waist he had ever seen, he pinched himself again, as if to check if he were dreaming, but what was the use? She was still standing in front of him, a tee shirt which ended above her mid thighs, giving him a lot to imagine. Her hair were all scattered over her shoulders and large headphones covered her ears, he was in a complete trance, not only because she was covered in all his favourites, but because he also had this ardent desire that seemed to gallop him, and he was relishing it.

He wanted to say something, but couldn't. the words were stuck in his throat, it's not everyday that you come across an absolute beauty standing in your kitchen, barely wearing anything, or is it?

"Err" was all that came out of his mouth, he tried to put up a formal cough but the fact that she seemed deaf was another thing. She was totally deaf. He thought Music takes away your senses'

"I see this life, like a swinging ride, swing my heart across the line, in my face is flashing signs.." she was also, singing his favourite song. Okay, he thought, atleast she isn't tone deaf.

He walked towards her, in little steps. One at a time.

Gathering all his courage, he somehow managed to shake her shoulder, she was literally jumping while singing, which gave him a better view of her legs. Damn, he thought, tanning should be officially banned.

At the same moment, she turned to him, her pale grey eyes boring into his, her warm soft hands almost brushed against his, her tee was black and it very well suited her eyes. He wanted to say something, but he was afraid, and maybe that was the understatement of the year.

She undid her headphones and pulled it lower, so that it hung in her neck.

A thousand scenarios popped up in his head, somehow shooing them away, he turned his attention back towards the beauty standing infront of him.

"Uh-Hey" he said "Who-What is your name?"

He tried to put up a smile "I'm terrible with names, sorry"

"That's okay, I don't think we've met before" she smiled brightly, he could see the smile reach up to her eyes. A faint glint of happiness flickered in her bright grey eyes.

"Why are you here?" he caught himself, "I mean.."

But he couldn't see a way to recover, so repeated the question "Why are you here?"

"I-What? You mean.. No! Your mom didn't tell you?" she asked bewildered

"I afraid she didn't" he spoke, his eyes hardening.

"I'm your new tenant. I mean-i didn't know that there were people who still asked for such petty rent" she said, then caught herself "I mean.. your mom asked for little money, she's a kind spirited woman. I had no where else to live"

she's one selfish woman, you dumbas*' he thought, wishing to speak it out loud, he knew his mother was at it again. she was again finding girls for him, who were date-able' according to her.

No! Even though she was pretty as hell, he just could not allow her here, no! all he had asked for, was a little more time, he needed time to settle down in life, only then, he could have allowed himself to get into any kind of romantic entanglement.

"Sorry" she smiled "I suck at introductions! Now that I know, that you don't know me, let me introduce myself. I'm Kriya. I'm much into the computer field. What about you?"

She was a fast, but graceful talker, and he liked that. "Rey" was all that came out of his mouth.

"That's one rare name" she remarked.

"I'm one rare man" he retorted. Turning away, and searching for a breakfast in the fridge.

The smile on her face vanished, she chose withdrawal, taking up her coffee. "If you choose to act like strangers, that's what we'll be"

His jaw tightened. I have to get her out of here' was all he thought, while he saw her walking away.


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Love,

Rashi xx

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
What's with the numbering? *grins*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -shenz-

What's with the numbering? *grins*


That's my style of reserving. btw, see, i updated 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
reswaaa
unreswaaa😛
this update was awsmmm😳
the way u describeddd is just awsm👏
hehehe rey literally checking out kria 😆
aaur kriaa bina jaane coffe banayingg😆
rey is just drooling over herrr😳
and reys mom rey ke liye ladki doodingg🤣 and rey wnts some timee
poor kria usse ye nhn pataa 😆
and ab rey thinking ki kria ko gharse kaise bhagaye🤣
awsmm updateee
update next part soonn
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Aw i love the concept!! ^_^
Rey checking his tenant out
And kriya leaving rey shocked saying we'll be strangers
I'd love to see that, I can imagine aggression on the way too :P
It was lovely
Update super soon!!
Edited by shelly_Arsha - 11 years ago

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