Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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suri2610

@suri2610

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

I hope she can see his feelings too...And hope the misunderstanding clears up. But I want them to confess in private. Not publicly on a stage. It should ONLY their moment to cherish all their lives...

Amazing updates...Great dialogues from Heer Ranjha

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Awesome - super awesome
What dialogues - very touchy and apt for this ARHI - beautiful correlation smita

Rashmi, 🤗

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

That was gorgeous!! Arnav wooing Khushi through Ranjha's oh so apt poetry and her response, her breakdown, his contrition, his confession. How I wished that Anjali had not interrupted when she did. Yummie, Smita!! 👏 Waiting for the next one.

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Meera

@khushiforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

I simply loved the lines Arnav spoke as Ranjha
I found it hilarious when khushi told Arnav he could say his lines at a distance.it was also very funny when she began stammering at her own lines and arnav asked her if Heer was actually supposed to stammer.
Lovely update
Please do update soon

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

ASR is wicked. Using Ranjha to seduce Khushi.

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

wow superb updates loved them all.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

All the chapters were beautiful. I had a difficult time reading the hindi dialogues. Thank you so much for the English translations 😳 Loved all the chapters. Finally he apologized in a proper and heartfelt manner 😊