Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

Smita...

Had been wondering how this comes under OS...

Got the answer...

All shots are bound together to form an OS!

Not bad very scientifically methodical!

👍🏼

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Amazing one!!! Loved the dialogue and the way it capture arshi :) was too good:)

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: rulama
Smita...
Had been wondering how this comes under OS...
Got the answer...

All shots are bound together to form an OS!
Not bad very scientifically methodical!

👍🏼

You got me, Rash! And caught me! Each OS is becoming longer than the previous one!!!!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

^^^ lol I don't think the readers are minding it one bit!😉

Infact the longer the series, the better! I am loving this playful love, the dialogues, the emotions, Arnav and Khushi's equation, Arnav apologizing via his dialogue delivery of Heer Ranjah and Khushi's anguish, everything is so darn beautiful. I could read on and on!

Caught up with quite a few parts today and loved every part. I love how the Raizada family has created this situation for Arnav and Khushi so they can sort out their issues and to potentially match make them as well! Arnav is trying his best to earn Khushi's forgiveness, I am just glad that Khushi didn't give in easily. It is taking alot of coaxing and wonderful gestures by Arnav to wipe his harsh words and I am enjoying myself a little too much! Can't wait for more! :D

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago