Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

awesome dear

love it

w8 fr d nxt

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Amazing updates...

Loved it 😃

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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Such a torture.. cliff hanger again...Poor Khushi again n again thinks wrongly about Arnav...Hope she forgives him soon 😊 Update soon 😃 Fabulous updates till now 😊

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yoga123

@yoga123

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Awesome parts...finally ASR said sorry to khushi for the damage he has done...thanks for the PM

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Beautiful update...

The dialogues were amazing i know it's from movie but looks u

It were written for arnav and khushi...

Hopefully khushi forgive Arnav ..

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

😆

The play's lines are really helping in setting the mood and getting their feelings know to each other.

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sinak

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Loved it

Waiting for the next updates

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Awesome updates, Smita!!!! Simply outstanding!!!! The poem touched my heart!!! 😳

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hydsri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

wow great updates. Smita/Rashmi - you left us again at a critical juncture. :):):) I do hope Khushi makes Arnav grovel. Hope Khushi doesn't give in easily.