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Posted: 11 years ago
What was that??
The precap ? Ohh emm jii
Cant wait ny more...fr nxt part

N Don't feel bad dear!!!!
We love u n ur work too...

Great going sissy!!

Keep updating regularly..

Thanx for the pm
Love
Sam
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the lovely response.. Now I am very happy...hehe and I hope after reading this part eveyone becomes happy too...

So here is the 11th part

Sanyu and randhir changed clothes and got ready..sanyu was just looking amazing...



And randhir was looking just dashing.



and they went for dinner..and after that the went for a drive..(in Goa you can take cars and bikes on rent...)
They both were sitting quietly when sanyu spoke- yaar hum apne honeymoon par aaye hai aur baat bhi nahi kar rahe!!
Randhir- exactly main bhi yahi soch raha tha..pehle toh hum baat karna band nahi karte the but aaj kal kit na kam bolte hai..aur yeh sab tumhari Wajah se hai!!luch baat hi nahi Karni hoti tumhe!!
Sanyu- meri Wajah se ohh plss!!!!
Randhir- what do you mean by oh pls...
Sanyu- aur nahi toh kya ..
Randhir- dekho tum fir.. He couldn't complete
Sanyu- ranndhhirr Aage dekho
Randhir looks in front and sees a truck coming and he turns the car to save and they do not clash with the truck..
Randhir- thank god!!sanyu..she spent wake up..sanyu!!!sanyu!! Oh shit
Randhir sprinkles water on her face and then she wakes up..
Randhir- thank god sanyu tum theek ho!!
Sanyu- main kaha hui???tuk Kaun ho?!
Randhir shocked!! Main tumhara husband ...
Sanyu- main yaha kya kar Rahi hui!!!
Randhir- Arre hum Dono honeymoon par aaye hai..
Sanyu gets out of the car..
Sanyu- anshuman...kaha ho tum..
Randhir- anshuman Kaun hai???
Sanyu- Mera husband kaha ho tum??
Randhir keeps his hand on her shoulder...
Sanyu- don't touch me..
Randhir- Arre
Sanyu- I said don't touch me..
Randhir- baby listen..
Sanyu- nahi!!!!
Randhir - listen!!!!!!(shouts) and holds her very close to him..believe me main tumhara husband hui!!!
Sanyu- nahi Mera husband toh mujhse baat hi nahi karta aur mujhe Blaim karta hai..tum toh mujhse baat kar rahe ho...
And she bursts out loud..
Sanyu- hahahaha!!rand..dhir tumhari hehehe shakal !!!
Randhir- sanyu tumne tog mujhe dara hi diya tha..and sighs!!
Sanyu- hahaha
Randhir now gets irritate because he feels embarrassed - bass ab chup...!!!
Sanyu- hahaha!!
Now randhir couldn't take it more..he pulled sanyu close and sealed her lips...sanyu instantly closed her eyes and opened her mouth without taking time ..the kiss was full of love passion and hunger..they broke apart and looked into each other's eyes..
Randhir- I think actions speak louder than words( blinking eyes continuously like a small kid)
They both look at each other and and then burst out laughing and then sat in the car and drive back to the hotel...
They reached the hotel and went inside the room..sanyu entered the room and saw randhir coming close to her.. And kissed on her exposed back..and pulled down her zip.. And slid his hands in her dress..
Sanyu- randhir..
Randhir- hmm and plants a chain of kisses on her neck and shoulder..
Sanyu- randhir kya tum mujhe kuch kehna chahte ho??
Randhir- gets nervous and sanyu senses that..matlab??
Sanyu- to lighten the mood ..tum meri dress mat phaad dena.. I mean tum mujhe keh sakte ho ki sanyu dress utar do..and smiles..
Randhir- smiles sheepishly tum bhi na.. Nahi rehna do main bina phade nikal dunga Iss obstacle ko !!!
And turns sanyu around and kisses her with love..the kiss was gentle and soft!!
Then sandhir parted away and sanyu's hand went to his shirt buttons and she started opening it one by one ...she removed his shirt and randhir all the while was taking them towards the bed..that fall on the bed sanyu on top plant info kisses on randhirs shirt!!
Sanyu- i love you..
Randhir- i love you too..
And randhir removed her dress and then and kisses her on her neck then shoulder then chest and the whole boDy...sanyu removes his belt and slid down his pant..including the boxers..she kisse him on his chest and they went in nibbling kissing Each other..turn by turn..(omg I wrote turn by turn..lol)
So on randhir entered her..sanyu screamed and moaned his name in pain..but randhir kissed her to soothe all the pain..soon she started enjoying and misnamed his name in pleasure..randhir layed beside her and kissed her and told in his mind- tomorrow is a big day..

Precap-
Randhir - mujhe kuch kehna hai..
Sanyu- kya?? Bolo I am listening
Pls guys do comment..thank you for the love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Like alwaysss superb part
Lovely written next part soon..
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

its hot + cute update

thanks for pm me

next part soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yaar
precap is intresting
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Important note..
I know I have started a thread but sorry I am going to end this ff in 2-3 parts..I am planning to write on more ff..the others story line is interesting. So I will end this one and start the other because I know that I can't manage both the ff's ..already I am writing a three shot...
So guys..I am sorry those who were expecting more chapters..but main Khud hi bore ho gayi hui..toh I can Imagine main aap logo ko kitna bore kar Rahi hungi..
I love you all..thank you for all ur love..pls give love too my other ff too..I will update the prologue soon..
Love
#janavi
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Posted: 11 years ago
m so sorry dear for not reading ur ff.. i will surely read it when i will get time,,,, keep updating... love samridhi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

m so sorry dear for not reading ur ff.. i will surely read it when i will get time,,,, keep updating... love samridhi...



It's absolutely ok ..pls read and tell me how is it? 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey guys I am back with next part of the ff..probably this is the last part..will miss this ff and your love for this ff..but I will post my next ff soon..keep loving me.hehe

So here I go!!

Next morning sanyu and randhir woke up..they both were holding each other so tightly...randhir lightly kissed sanyu's hair..
Randhir- good morning..
Sanyu- good morning..
They both get up and freshen up..they went for the breakfast and then they both went for a drive..
Sanyu- kaha jaa rahe hai randhir???
Randhir- do you trust me??
Sanyu - more than anything..
Randhir- then just come along me..
They both reached a beach ..they got down of the car and then walked along the beach..
Sanyu- randhir yeh paani kitna thand a hai.!!soul ko ekdum Sukoon de raha hai..I love beaches..
Randhir- sanyu mujhe aur kuch nahi sirf tum chahiye ho...mere life complete ho jayegi..
Sanyu- I love you..chalo randhir castle banane hai..
Randhir- what????
Sanyu- pls na chalo and drag him to make a sand castle ..sanyu was making the castle and randhir was just looking at her mesmerising face...
Randhir- sanyu mujhe kuch kehna hai..
Sanyu smiles in return..and says bolo randhir I am listening and continues making castle..
Randhir- sanukta Maine tumhare saath badla lene ke liye shaadi Karo thi..But I rally love you..mujhe dada ne Jooth bola ki tumhare parents ne mere parents ko maara hai..and meri upbringings Aisi hai ki Maine Socha ki agar main tumse badla lunga toh tumhare parents ko bhi dukh hoga..I am really sorry..sab kuch galat tha but ab sab theek hai..main tumhe yeh sab lands batana chahta tha..but mauka nahi milta..

Sanyu- randhir I love you too..aur mujhe Iss sable baare Mein pehle se pata tha..Maine uss din tumhe phone par baat karte hue sunn liya tha..

Randhir- toh fir tumne mujhe Xhosa Kyu nahi..balki yeh trip plan??kya sanyu mujhe samjh nahi aa rha.!!

Sanyu- I know randhir ki tum mujhse Bohot pyaar Karte ho..isliye mani chahti thi ki tum mujhe Khud yeh sab batao..and I was sure ki tum mujhe bataoge hi.. Love you!! And Haan abhi mujhe aur bhi ghum a hai chalo ..waise bhi andhera hone wala hai..chalo and holds his hand..
Ran dhir smiles and stands up and kisses sanyukta...they were not aware of the surroundings.. They just needed each other.. Nothing else..they we're truest madly in love..

They both say in the car..and there was music playing in the car..main tenu samjhawan ki ..na Tere bina lagda jee..and suddenly it started raining heavily..sanyu opened the window once but then closed because it was hitting her face..it was very difficult to see..randhir again and again was wiping the fog..
He saw a truck coming from front..with High speed..he somehow managed to cross the truck..it was very we'll known that the breaks of the truck were fail..he sighed in relief and looked at sanyu..but the very second there was a slop area and because of water the car coming from front crashed with them..there were on the dead end ..there car fell down from the road and went in the forest..they were still a little in their senses..
Sanyu and randhir holds each other's hand..
Sanyu- I love you..
Randhir - i love you too

On news- xyz road par Bohot hi khatarnak accident hua..unme se 2 Gaadi Mein Baithi family puring tarah se injured ..and Dusri Gaadi khai Mein milli hai..investigation ke Baad pata chale ga ki woh Kaun hai..according to the reports uss couple ki death ho gayi hai..

And too love birds died holing each other's hands and going in heaven happily..because they were together..forever and ever..

So here I end..pls do comment..and I will update the prologue of the next ff soon..
Janavi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first😃
U killed them oh! No
But it was a good update
They r together forever loved it😃

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