FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30

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Hi ..I am back with a dark ff..it's based on the move Ek villian partially..I don't know how to write a dark ff story but I will try to give my best..

PROLOGUE

Sanyu was wAlking to her new house..all excited and happy..but did she knew that this happiness will get increased by itself...she shifted her house after every 6months so that she can live happily before she gets married..she thought that after marriage she will not live her life to the fulleSt so before marriage she wanted to do all the things which were her dream..
Knock knock!!!!

Sanyu opens the door..
parth kaustu!!!
Toh tumhe laga ki hum nahi aayenge Milne...(parth and kaustaki are brother and sister)
Kaustu tu toh keh rahi thi ki tum bhi shift ho rahe ho lekin out of India!!
Haan ho rahe hai lekin Tere ghar se kuch ghar chodkar... 😛
What ??thank you ...
Chal sanyu hum chalte hai humhe bhi unpacking Karni hai..
Theek hai bye!!
(She also left the house for her work)
She reached the police station and saw a man being hit so cruely.. She saw his innocent soul..she saw the pain on his face..
NEXT MORNING
Sanyu is waiting outside the jail for the person because of whom she didn't slept the whole night...but wait he didn't come..she left for her house dissapointed..she opened the door to find that person standing there..
Sanyu- Arre tum yaha kya kar rahe ho???
Toh tumne mujhe pehchan liya..I am randhir..
Sanyukta..but tum..
Shhh..mujhe Aaj tak Koi bhi Dekhti hi itna Acha nahi laga..toh main tumhe yeh batane AAya hui ki u r mine..just mine.. Aur randhir ko Jo cheez Achi lagti hai woh usse basil karke rehta hai!!
Yeh kya badtameezi hai main toh tumhe Ek Acha admi Samajh Rahi thi leakin tum toh...
Before she could complete randhir smashed his lips on hers And kissed her with all love and passion..sanyu has kissed her x-boyfriend many times but he didn't kissed her with so much live and passion so she gave in and kissed him back..they broke upart..
Sanyu-yaar yeh kya kar rahe ho??
Randhir- tumhe kiss aur kya aur aise puch Rahi ho jaise tumhe mazA na AAya ho!!
Sanyu blushed..
And told I am sanyukta..mujhe dab sanyu bolate hai..main 21 years ki hui and main apne ghar Har 6months main shift karti hui..and mere best friends mere ghar se 8 ghar chodkar rehte..
Randhir- tumne mujhe yeh sab Kyu Bataya??(smiling)
Sanyu- tumhari baari..aur isliye Bataya kyunki tumne hi toh kaha ki I am yours toh naam aur basic info toh pata bina chahiue..aur Haan tum smile karte hue ache lagta ho..
Randhir- I am randhir...main 22years ka hui and main Ek gangster hui..
Sanyu- tum gangster ho??(nervously)
Randhir-(tracing his thumb on her cheek) Haan..but agar tum chahogi toh badal jaunga..
Sanyu-( hugs him..she didn't know why but she didn't feel that he is dangerous for her she felt that he loves her to the core..and smiles thinking that love at first site) 😛

So guys here I finish..pls tell whether I should continue or not..pls do comment and buddy's me for friend request..and precap: parth and kaustaki warning sanyu !!!!
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samridhigoodiez thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaa sure dear.. Plz continue... I will be glad to read u.. N plz mention mature or 18 in the heading...
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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haww its something different continue soon nd pm me too i'd send you buddy

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cuteparsh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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actually 1 bat punchana to bhool hi gayi😆

parth nd kaustuki r couple really [jiggy aur yoyo ka kya hoga]😆

[sorry if this question hurt u]😳

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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woah I just loved the rpologue.Randhir a gangster😲😲
Please continue soon and please give long updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samridhigoodiez

Yaa sure dear.. Plz continue... I will be glad to read u.. N plz mention mature or 18 in the heading...



Ok I will do that..thanks for ur help too 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteparsh

actually 1 bat punchana to bhool hi gayi😆

parth nd kaustuki r couple really [jiggy aur yoyo ka kya hoga]😆

[sorry if this question hurt u]😳



Actually yoyo and jiggy are not of use in the further conversation because they are not serious like parth and kaustuki because she is sanyu BFF 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

woah I just loved the rpologue.Randhir a gangster😲😲
Please continue soon and please give long updates



Thank u ..and I will try to give long updates and u also pls update ur ff..keen to read next part!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenu1613

nyc😛continue soon



Thank you!! 😛 😛
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Thank you 😊 😊

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