FF- lover turned villian(mature+dark)last part on pg 30 - Page 16

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Paravi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi guys I am back with the next part..but I am very upset with the response ...this time I have updated long part but so less response ...pls people who like it I fa hardly takes two minutes to comment.. Your comments tell me that u r liking my ff..but all those who comment and love me so much thank youuu...so here I go...they both reached the platform..and randhir saw the board there..Goa!!!
They both took a taxi and then reached there hotel..randhir and sanyu were smiling throughout the journey and they reached the hotel and sandhir went to the room.. And sanyu opened the door and entered the room..the room had a beach view and was very beautiful!!

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Sanyu opened the sliding window cum door.. Then saw the beautiful view in front of her..she closes her eyes and felt the sound of the birds chirping and the waves of water...she felt hands snaking around her waists...she caught of the hold of the hands and turned around and kept her head on his shoulder..
Randhir- waise tum train Mein kuch kar Rahi thi..let's continue and he lifts her up and takes her towards the room..
Sanyu- mujhe fresh hona hai..kaafi raat bhi ho gayi hai and I am tired of a long journey..so let me take a shower..while trying to come out of his grip but he is not letting Her do that!!randhir walks
To wards the washroom..and they both stood under the shower and randhir opens the shower..they both get drench and now none of them is able to control the desire building in them..randhir hands went to her kurti zip whereas sanyu's hand went to his shirt button..they both got rid of their top layers and hugged each other..there hands moving on each other's back...sanyu turned the shower off and covered her with a towel and gave randhir a towel too..
Randhir and sanyu came out kissing each other..passionately and went to the suitcase to take out clothes..they both took clothes out without breaking the kiss..
Suddenly randhir felt sanyu sobbing in between the kiss..
Randhir- hey..kya hua?? I love you u know na..what happened tell me!!
Sanyu- never ever leave me alone..
Randhir- let out a laugh seeing sanyu's warning tone..okay baba chalo I am hungry..(In a naughty waY)
Sanyu- toh chalo muje bhi Bhook lagi his..lapse Pehen kar chalte hai..understanding what randhir meant but acting as if she is not knowing anything...
Randhir- Acha jaan kar anjaan ban Rahi ho!!chalo dinner karte hai and uske baad jaldi so jaayenge taki Baaki saari raat tum so maa pao toh Atleast weak na bano.. And they both doze off in each other's arm..

AT NIGHT IN BATHROOM...
Sanyu- randhir I love you very much...(crying sobbing badly)
Pls let's just forget everything..tell me na.tell me once..

Precap-
Sanyu- tum Kaun ho??
Randhir- main tumhara husband!!


Pls guys do comment..I am giving regular updates too..so pls kindly appreciate my work!!!
cuteparsh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

RES

UNRES

me first this time

1st i m doing a dance [vo bhi cute wala😆]🥳

its awesome janvi

precape is just maar dala type yaar

sanyu question rd??

and dont be depressed dear u r a awwesome writer

thank you so much for pm me

love u

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I hardly get time to comment on FFs these days.
But i just felt like commenting on yours even via phone...
Don't b disheartened girl..
You're going really good..
I so enjoyed reading it.
It has got kinda really very different concept..
Keep writing..👏
Keep rocking..😉

Love
Kirti <3

PS: I hope you'll remember this reader of yours.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey mast update it was! Keep updating ! I love reading this ff for two reasons, 1- because you are the writer! 2- the concept of this ff is awesome! Continue soon! Thanks for pm, love! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Itna chotuuu sa...chalo its okay...
nxt plzzz big post krna...loved it...
post nxt asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was superb Janavi 👏
sorry dear couldn't comment earlier 😔
but great writing dear👏👏
loved it
and don't be upset dear
you're doing great
the Precap:
Sany forgot everything?😲
but how ??😲
waiting for the next part eagerly
continue soon
thanks for the PM dear🤗
love
Sudeshna
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sanyu- tum Kaun ho??
Randhir- main tumhara husband!!


omg!!! I feel a storm brewing.. Really loved this interesting part dear... pls update asap...

zabel thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing 😊
precap seems intersting update soon
thnx fr pm
SWA1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
sanyu knew all rds things...oh god ab kya hoga????
Paravi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

RES

UNRES

me first this time

1st i m doing a dance [vo bhi cute wala😆]🥳

its awesome janvi

precape is just maar dala type yaar

sanyu question rd??

and dont be depressed dear u r a awwesome writer

thank you so much for pm me

love u



Thank you so muchhh...
But it's janavi...I am also doing a happy dance reading ur comment

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