Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
i thought iss bar jaldi comment kr dun
warna ek baar lazy hojaon phr comment krna muskil hojata haiii

ye baat mai bht bar keh chuki hn k i love ur OS's mostly bcx of their simplicity
tm itni ordinary si cheex ko b aisi likhti k wow factor aa jata hai

concept itna acha lagta hai
dil ko chooo jata haii

u chose journey between engagement to marriage
:P
i wanted the os to never endd

hatam hone pe dil kr rha thaaa kassh thora aur hojatttaaa

always greedy i am u knw that na

the initial scene curtain wala was well done scene
itna piara nd so full of lovee


how they were playing hide nd seeek
hehe
maze ka scene tha woo

bbt they are lucky k unho ne pyar kiya nd their families agreed to it
mostly parents mante hi nahiii

awww at the juice sharing scene
*blushes*

oye hoye hero k liye tyar hoa gaya
loved ittt

loved the teasing scenes
armaan b maukaa nhi chorta taaarne kaaa

understanding love care yehi sb matter krti hai
one shd share its problem wd other tou he wo support kre gi na. u shd be true to ur partner

glad he told her
the bench scene was <3

nd see wd the support of ur partner u cn cross any hurdleee

loved the OS

keep postinggg



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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful and amazingxs update👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
so cute...
love it...
so simple and beautiful...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute os...!!!
Realy enjoyed reading it..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww it's very nice thanks for the pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww chooo cutee os..!!!!
Armaan is sooo adoracle...
and so sweet is Riddhima./.!!!
i so love them both as a couple..!!
and so sweet story..!!
simply superb...!!!
and i just love this song alot..!
u have fixed each lyrics of the song so perfectly in the story..!!
loved it..!!
good job..!!
do pm me ur other works..!!
take care..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Di 🤗
Apne yahan kinne dino baad update kiya n mai bhi ussi waqt aagai 😎...
Tough mera ek pending OS ka review rehta hai 😳...
Sorry 'bout that...

OS # 22 :

The poetry is Wondeful , Aj kal mera ur mere doston ka hal perfectly describe karti hai 😆...
U are also Wonderful , Ek poetry se pura ka pura OS bana chora n that to a Fabulous OS 😉...
Ek normal zindagi , Normal couple ki puri life portray kardi 👍🏼...
Shilpa-Armaan's individual characters and their characters as a couple are described very well...

Shilpa's Self-less , obedient , polite character , Overall a very Sweet character...
Apne 'Sweet-Heart/Hubby' keliye left her old life & stayed behind to be with 'His n now their family , How sweet is that...
N in return she just wants to be connected to her Husband But hubby g hain woh bhi nai de sakte 🤔...

I like their Family i.e Teeji N Daddy g , very supportive 😉...

Now Armaan , the passionate , a little bit self-centered , a little bit ignorant character 😛...

But acha hai sahi waqt be akal aagai & do did the loving , caring hubby came back 😉...
Like literally came back to his family 😆...

What attitude Shilpa ne dikhaya , Me liked it 😉...
But then kab tak naraaz rehti...

I like the Romantic wala Armaan more , apni biwi ko toh khush rakhta hai 😉😳...

Their little club moment , Honeymoon pe , i was literally gaping at my screen 😲...
Gosh!!! Armaan ki Shilpa ab larkiyon se bhi safe nai 😳 🤣..

N then there was this Sweet end to a Perfect story ...

I absolutely loved it ❤️.
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Posted: 10 years ago
OS # 23 :
Beautiful is the word i'll use for this work of your's 👍🏼...
The song selected waise toh acha hai he , yeh parhte hue suna toh ziyada acha laga 😆..
Start mein i thought k 'Neighbor-Love' type of kuch hoga But yahan toh 'Neighbor-Fiance-Love' type ka chakkar nikla , Double Bonanza!! 🤣...

Their relationship was described so sweetly , Sweet hai bhi 😉...
Har ilfaaz se pyaar jhalak raha tha ...

University se pick karna , Date par le jana , Ek glass se peena , How sweet n Innocent sa love it is 😃...

N the usual teasing - Embarrassing & Exciting 😉😆...

Then comes the main part , Pyaar , Romance toh sab kar lete hain but sensitive times pe ek doosre ko support karna is very important which you described perfectly 👍🏼...

Kaise apni families ko bataye bina dono ne problem solve karli , Perfect for each other 😉...

I like the 'Soniye' endearment Armaan uses 😃...

Superb it is 👍🏼...
Loved it ❤️...
& Thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Plz cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late comment
But I was occupied with some work and coudn't comment before :(

I love love your writing you know that and I cant stop praising it <3

I have decided to comment to review both OS 22 and 23 in this comment only

Talking about OS 22 I found the story simple sweet and heart touching ..it was very sweet how Ridhima was alone away from Armaan and missed him ..Armaan's attitude made me a little sad his ignorance was upsetting though it was unintentional later his realization and coming back to Ridhima , their reunion was too cute the only complaint I have is that I thought the pace of the story which was good in the beginning became too fast till it reached its end ..I wasn't expecting Ridhima to forgive him that soon and easily :( end made me :( still I LOVE it <3

OS 23

Extremely cute realistic concept it was something I could totally relate to..mediocre families 2 lovers neighbors engaged enjoying their courtship time <3 ..pure love love <3 , the only complaint I have is same like previous OS , its about the ending..in this one too I felt it was kinda incomplete I feel you should have included their wedding in it ..it just abruptly ended :(


Finally I commented feeling relieved ..much better

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