Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55 - Page 14

Originally posted by: LoveArsh

Awesomeee os,loved it,it was cutee n sweet,u have beautifully shown their relationship,really loved it,n thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: ZIKRASHAH

Nice os dear.
they were so cute.
the way she helps him and understand him.
she convinced her family.
thnx fr d pm.
do write more.

Originally posted by: sameera_12

Ana!! This was too sweet and adorable!! Especially the morning sequence.. whole curtain part!! very cute yaar!!😳

What i loved the most is the kind of relationship you have portrayed.. Zahir hai donow taraf se na ho to gadi nahi chalti..
Understanding, respect most important ek doosre ko space dena!! saari achi achi cheezein dikhai hain tumne... Warna aj kal jo dekhne mein aata hai ussne mostly restrictions hoti hain!! Apne uss cousin se na milo... apne uss frnd ko chordo.. yeh pehno! wo na pehno! ufff!! matlab jahan jao ek na ek case aise zaroor dekhne ko milta hai🤢

The bench scene was the sweetest!! aurrr haan!! i really liked the way their scenes progressed from the beginning paragraph towards the end... what can i say everything was too good!!

And finally!!! Bohat time baad mein kuch padha hai aur uspe comment bhi kiya hai!!😉

You are an amazing writer i always say... but abhi mein add karna chahungi you are very versatile aswell... Your work is inspiring anddd kum se kum mera to kuch likhne ka mood bana he deta hai!!😆

Keep up the good work!!
Love,
Sameera
😊😉
😳

Originally posted by: ksgandjsg21

awesome os...

Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz

beautiful and amazingxs update👏👏

Originally posted by: sakshiksg

so cute...

love it...

so simple and beautiful...

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

sweet one

Originally posted by: little_angle

Cute os...!!!
Realy enjoyed reading it..!!!

Originally posted by: arreeba

wowww it's very nice thanks for the pm list

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

are we gettig new OS... excieted..

all ur works amaze me... i loved all ur workkk

Originally posted by: ..oneOone..

hha...yup...
but just one part of the new OS...
hope u will like this one too :)

Originally posted by: teenorchid

i thought iss bar jaldi comment kr dun

warna ek baar lazy hojaon phr comment krna muskil hojata haiii

ye baat mai bht bar keh chuki hn k i love ur OS's mostly bcx of their simplicity

tm itni ordinary si cheex ko b aisi likhti k wow factor aa jata hai

concept itna acha lagta hai

dil ko chooo jata haii

u chose journey between engagement to marriage

:P

i wanted the os to never endd

hatam hone pe dil kr rha thaaa kassh thora aur hojatttaaa

always greedy i am u knw that na

the initial scene curtain wala was well done scene

itna piara nd so full of lovee

how they were playing hide nd seeek

hehe

maze ka scene tha woo

bbt they are lucky k unho ne pyar kiya nd their families agreed to it

mostly parents mante hi nahiii

awww at the juice sharing scene

*blushes*

oye hoye hero k liye tyar hoa gaya

loved ittt

loved the teasing scenes

armaan b maukaa nhi chorta taaarne kaaa

understanding love care yehi sb matter krti hai

one shd share its problem wd other tou he wo support kre gi na. u shd be true to ur partner

glad he told her

the bench scene was <3

nd see wd the support of ur partner u cn cross any hurdleee

loved the OS

keep postinggg