Thrd-2:AR/ARSH OS#30: Khoobsurat Hai Wo Itna/Page55

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Oindrila B.

@OindrilaVirgoan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

This was such a sweet oneshot..and that too with one of my fav songs in it..very beautifully done..the whole engagement period..all the teasing and blushing..and yet every happiness is fraught with some tension and problems..so glad to see them both so very understanding and compatible..they love each other so very much..indeed, this one was a beautiful os..great job 😃

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shreya

@Shre28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Awww... a very cute one. Loved how supportive they were of each other

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

lovely

thanx for pm

plz pm me for other

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Awww.. This was such a cute OS! ❤️

ArSh...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Aww Ana,

You're the best. You know you've put up a smile on my face with this one that too when I was feeling low. So so lovely. Thank you so much for writing this down.

Honestly bohat maza aya parh ke. Plz write more often. I love it when you do.

I've fallen in love with Armaan once again. oh how I love this guy.

Love lots..

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Hiii...Awesome os...Loved it...sooo cute...ArSh were adorable...beautiful concept...thanks 4 da pm

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Anu

@tacker_karan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Heyyy

It ws so so sweet and beautiful...

All d romance of the engagement period ws woww...

N i loved d punjabi touch in between...

Yr just one suggestion...I think u shd write either shilpa ir Ridhima. ..Shilpa/Ridhima is distracting...though I try to imagine one but dono imagination mein aa jati hai n break d flow...use any name but 1...c if dis can work

Waiting for the nxt os

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Priya kashian

@LoveArsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Awesomeee os,loved it,it was cutee n sweet,u have beautifully shown their relationship,really loved it,n thanks for the pm :)

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ZIKRASHAH

@ZIKRASHAH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Nice os dear.
they were so cute.
the way she helps him and understand him.
she convinced her family.
thnx fr d pm.
do write more.

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Sameera

@sameera_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Ana!! This was too sweet and adorable!! Especially the morning sequence.. whole curtain part!! very cute yaar!!😳

What i loved the most is the kind of relationship you have portrayed.. Zahir hai donow taraf se na ho to gadi nahi chalti..
Understanding, respect most important ek doosre ko space dena!! saari achi achi cheezein dikhai hain tumne... Warna aj kal jo dekhne mein aata hai ussne mostly restrictions hoti hain!! Apne uss cousin se na milo... apne uss frnd ko chordo.. yeh pehno! wo na pehno! ufff!! matlab jahan jao ek na ek case aise zaroor dekhne ko milta hai🤢

The bench scene was the sweetest!! aurrr haan!! i really liked the way their scenes progressed from the beginning paragraph towards the end... what can i say everything was too good!!

And finally!!! Bohat time baad mein kuch padha hai aur uspe comment bhi kiya hai!!😉

You are an amazing writer i always say... but abhi mein add karna chahungi you are very versatile aswell... Your work is inspiring anddd kum se kum mera to kuch likhne ka mood bana he deta hai!!😆

Keep up the good work!!
Love,
Sameera
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