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wow... luvng it... cont soon...!!!😊😊
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Hello All...

Thanks for your responses... here goes the part.


Chapter 5:

Both left the place and went to their rooms. Randhir thinking about his & Sanyu convo. what happened to you dude??? why are you much concerned about her? why you are not even able to bear a single word against her? why you felt your blood boiling?? God this girl is driving me crazy... and slept with her thoughts.

In the morning all went out to have a discussion with villagers. same routine work and came back to camp house.

R: Guys, I feel electricity is more useful for this village, still they are using lamps. Let us make a generator and it will be very useful. they can use electronic goods, electricity will be there in the houses.. & lights will also be there in streets. So I think we should make a generator.

P: But Randhir even CITE people are also making the same.

R: So what let us make it with more efficiency. He looked at Sanyu who lost in deep thoughts. Oye day dreamer... Are you here? we are discussing about the project & where are you?

S: Randhir, I feel making generator won't be a good idea. here people can't afford a generator. and use electronic goods as they are daily basis workers. they can't use such expensive things. So let us think something else which might be helpful in their regular life like making Chimney will be useful for ladies while cooking, Ghaanss katne machine etc.

R: Damn Sanyukta, come out of such stupid thoughts. this is a competition just keep your thoughts out of kitchen.

S: Randhir, is it necessary to argue with me in all, just think once. Our presentation should be different and useful to others.

R: I know it, & don't need your suggestions in this

their fight started and both argued a lot. then Vardhan sir came.

V: So guys have you decided what you present?

R: Yes sir, we have decided what we have to do.

V: Interesting, so what's your idea?

R: Sir actually we thought of preparing Generator, but now decided to make a Chimney & a Ghaans Katne machine.

Hearing this Sanyu looked at him surprising & others were shocked as till now he fought with Sanyu & now why has he agreed

A small smile crept on Vardhan's face as he understood whose idea it might be and left from there saying they have only one day and has to complete it soon.

R: Ok sir, we will do and give you final report soon. So let us form as a group & divide the work so that we can finish it soon.

All started work. Randhir saw Sanyu smiling at him.

R: hey Farzi, wat happened? why are you smiling like an idiot. Oh wait wait are you thinking I have agreed to you. Never, I am doing this just for FITE, don't you ever think that I will do what all you say, don't be in such misconception.

S: Randhir, I haven't said anything then why are you giving so much of explanation??.. Anyways thanks for accepting my idea. & now get back to work.

Saying this she went to start her work.

All were doing the in the mean time Randhir was struggling in his machine on some frequency.. Sanyu suggested Randhir's about it. rest other thought again there will be world war now, but to their surprise, Randhir listened to her and she helped him in the problem. All were shocked to see such a rare scene. the same happened & Randhir helped Sanyu viceversa.

Sahil: yaar look at them, while working together they looks so perfect. the output will be perfect one and together they are unbeatable. He got a glare from Vidushi saying whatever.

In the night all left one by one saying they are tired and will finish the rest in the morning. But our Sandhir were working determined as they wanna finish to asap and show to Vardhan sir so that he can give some suggestions.

Sanyu while trying to check whether Chimney is working properly or not, she burnt her hand. Randhir came running there.

R: Are you blind? Can't you do any work properly, see you got hurt, saying this he took a cream from his bag & applied on her hand & blow on it just to reduce the pain. Sanyu was staring at him. He noticed it & smiled. Oye Farzi, I know I am handsome, but pls na don't stare at me like this...

Sanyu came out of her dreamland & felt embarrassed.

She started working again. After sometime Randhir went out and came back with some rotis & curry in a plate. On seeing the food Sanyu also felt hungry.

Sanyu POV:

dunno whether food is there or not. now I am feeling hungry, seems like this idiot brought food only for himself, what shall I eat now, I don't even have any biscuits also, she came out of trance by Randhir calling her.

R: Oye bimbo, why always you will be in lost of thoughts. come & have food now or else it will become cool.

S: you brought food for me also. She asked him like a kid, seeing her expression; he can't do any but smile.

R: Yes, now come & have it soon don't waste the time now. She then realized the kerosene & grease on her hands and still the smell will be there.

Randhir also noticed it. With a puppy face she thought how will I eat now, its smelling a lot, have to wash again my hands & the smell won't go soon, though she said low, it is audible to Randhir. He brought the plate near her and sat beside. Apni muh kholo.

Sanyu was surprised by this action.

R: Oye don't stare like this again. you can't eat as the smell will be there for some more time. so let me feed you. saying this he starting feeding her. She had one roti & said I am done with it.

R: Oye are you doing any diet??? eat some more... I have brought enough rotis so eat some more.

Sanyu was surprised by such behavior of Randhir. he composed himself saying, if you won't eat properly you will become unconscious and again it will be double work for me to take care of you. so now better you have some food. saying this he made her to eat much more.

She has a teary in her eyes remembering how her dad used to feed her, Randhir noticed it.

R: hey is that much spicy? Have some water. She nodded no & said her stomach is full and asked him to eat. she thought herself and said dunno why but I feel like home in his presence and went back to work.

Randhir also started doing his work. After sometime he felt something on his shoulder and noticed its his Farzi sleeping peacefully. he got lost in her beauty & tried to wake her up. she moved a lit bit saying sone do na and slept in his lap. Randhir couldn't do anything but smiling. he worked carefully so that it won't disturb her. later he also slept.

In the morning Kaustu woke up early & noticed Sanyu not there. She went out searching and seen both are sleeping together. She just smiled, took a pic of them and felt how cute they look together and came in & called her name. By then both woke up & realized their sleeping position and felt very embarrassed.

R: Stupid girl, dunno anything except sleep... if you wanna sleep that much next time go to your room, I am not your bed and always make me uncomfortable. He realized what she said and went out of the room immediately.

Sanyu still embarrassed and excused herself and went out.

In boys room Jiggy saw Randhir coming

J: Arey Randhir bhai kaha ho aap?

R: Am here only just gone out for some fresh air.

J: Bhai can I ask you one thing, for that Randhir nodded yes. Bhai you & Sanyu will always fight na, even your idea is very good then why have you agreed to her's suggestion. Busy in some other work & said

R: Because I knew her very well, her planning will always be perfect. She wants to help, for her Only winning is not important. we got a chance to do something better and lets do some useful ones.

Jiggy is surprised by Randhir's answer,

J: but Bhai, if you also know the same, then why you fought with her?

R: because I love fighting with her & she looks so cute when she is in angry & surprised expression. hearing this Jiggy's mouth opened in O shape.

Randhir realized what he has said and in Stern voice, If you are done with your interrogation then start doing the work. This made Jiggy very scary & ran away from there.

In the work area of FITE:

R: Guys listen, we have only few hours and we have to finish everything, So I wish Parth & Kaustuki to work with Sanyukta and rest others help me.

Vidu to herself- wow wat a chance.. working with Randhir... yeah I can get some time to get close to him and impress him.

Sanyu surprised as why Randhir asked Vidushi to help him as he always hates her even her presence also. All were working silently & fastly.

Sanyu came out & saw Randhir drawing something on papers.

S:Randhir...

R: ha

S: you already have much more work to do, then why can't you ask Parth or Kaustu to work with you. why Vidushi? as you also know she won't do much help.

R: Look I have my own ideas and no need to answer you and no need your interference, just leave and finish the work soon. Sanyu left from there irritated.

(Randhir's thought: Oye Farzi, I know Vidushi will never leave a chance to comment & argue with you and also will disturb you a lot. becoz of that you can't concentrate. So I took her in my team as she doesn't have that dare to argue with me)

All worked without any break and almost done with the project. Meanwhile Vidushi tried to impress Randhir but poor girl got a stern reply & a sharp glare from him.

Then Vardhan sir came.

V: so guys are you done with the project? Now we need to go to Panchayat office and present it.

All said Yes Sir.

CITE, FITE students and mentors and all villagers also gathered near the Sarpanch office. Sarpanch came & all greeted him.

S: Toh Baccho, I think you are done with your work, now please explain what have you done.

CITE team members came front, operated and made generator work. It started working and all lights were on. Adi explained them the use of power and he did his presentation very formally & in perfect way. All clapped him & were happy to see the lights on in their village.

Now its FITE turn. all were working on. Kabir saw this & made fun of the project saying this is Higher lever competition not school level.

S: Sir, you are mentor of a team and we respect you. So could you please allow us to do our work and please be patient we will definitely explain you our project and won't let you down.

Adi got a smile hearing this on how sarcastically she said even in polite way.

Randhir explained each & everything of the project and also showed the project designs in pictorial forms, how to prepare them, how useful they are and the expenses.

R: Sanyukta, please explain them more clearly, for a bit Sanyu surprised but started explaining them.

S: I know electricity is important, but compared to that our health is more important. this is very helpful for the ladies while cooking, and she has explained their whole project in such a way that all people were impressed. Even Sarpanch was amazed by her explanation and very impressed. We kept your health & also economic status in mind & made this so that can keep you healthy and afford this.

Sarpanch came forward.

Sarpanch: aaj tak meine socha girls can do only kitchen work. but this girl she has proved me wrong. and blessed Sanyu. and announced the winner as FITE undoubtedly. All clapped & FITE students happiness is on cloud 9 as they all were worried as they knew about cunningness of Kabir & thoughts of Sarpanch. Sanyu was jumping like a kid, laughing and hugged Kaustu.
Adi saw it and had a broad smile of his face and clapped for her. Ami noticed it & irritated.

Ami: Adi, what's wrong with you, we lost the competition and here you are smiling and clapping.

Adi: she deserves a lot. look at her how happy she is.

Ami: Irritated again said What??

Adi came out of this thoughts said nothing. all were about to leave but Sarpanch has an announcement.

Sarpanch: All, as you people did this much for our village so now its our turn. We are arranging a small party and I request both teams to participate in that & I hope you will enjoy our village celebrations.

All agreed and went to their rooms.

In the evening Party is full on swing. All were enjoying village food & local drinks. But Adi is just looking Sanyu, as he wants to capture all the moments when she is happy as in future he won't meet her again. he then noticed a poll is about to fall and Sanyu is standing near it, without thinking he screamed her name and pulled her. But unfortunately got injured. holded her safely and stood between her & the pole. his head and shoulder are bleeding. All rushed to him and took him to the village doctor and he dressed him & gave some medicines,

IN the CITE camp room:

Ami: walking here and there.. trying to control his anger. Kya jaroot hai se sab karne ke liye?? Haven't you even think it will hurt you?

Adi: Ami, relax, I am fine nothing happened to me.

Ami: Relax??? how can you say that, ye sab us ladki ki vajha se, why the hell have you tried and hurt yourself, she doesn't even notice or care you such a bi he didn't completed his sentence

Adi: Armaan, stop it not a single word again.

Ami: Armaan, now he was in tears, from when have you started calling me Armaan? Am I became that outsider?

Adi felt bad: dekho Ami I didn't mean it, please don't blame her,

Ami: abhi bhi... you are supporting her? why shouldn't I blame her? she has never responded, because of her you fought with your friend, she didn't even care for you. then why are you doing all this. & how can you think I can see you in such condition?? you know how much it pains me?? I will never leave her. Us ladki ki chakkar me u have gone mad.

Adi: Ami, don't even think of such things.

Ami: I will see her and about to leave Adi screamed stop Ami

Adi: I am doing this because of guilt. Guilt which is killing me inside. Ami stopped and turned back.

Ami: guilt?

Adi: yes guilt, you know why???? because because of me she lost her parents. I am the culprit of her parent's death, because of my stupid prank they met with an accident and died.

Hearing this Ami froze.


Guys, please do share the comments. there are many views but only few comments :( :( :( Pls do comment. Criticism is most welcome. because it helps me a lot to improve. your comments motivates me a lot so pls do write...

Love you all,
Mickey

Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Arey main to baar baar first aa rhi hun...😉

key coming to udate


just loved it...

tune meri baat maanli..he listened her and even respeted her... great..
.aur wo sath mein soye bhi...😆
jokes apart, loved it yaar...
and ye Adi to OMG... due to his prank her parents died? no...
Please update soon...
Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh the twist was mindblowing; i thought abhi as sanyus cousin...
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

ohhh the twist was mindblowing; i thought abhi as sanyus cousin...



thanks dear... he is Adi 😊
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Originally posted by: reet21

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Arey main to baar baar first aa rhi hun...😉

key coming to udate


just loved it...

tune meri baat maanli..he listened her and even respeted her... great..
.aur wo sath mein soye bhi...😆
jokes apart, loved it yaar...
and ye Adi to OMG... due to his prank her parents died? no...
Please update soon...



darling... love u so much... yup u r first... great 😊😊😊😊

As promised changes will be there so happies??

arey ur naughty thoughts... 😉😉😉 here Randhir shareef hai :)

am happy u liked it. & is the twist expected or this is good one????
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woww!!..mickey i enjoyed ur update a lot yr!!😛
so much happened in just one update!!😃
aww sandhir cute moments..😳
ab randhir aisa karega to sabko yehi lagega ki use hua kya hai?😆
he helped her whole-heartedly ..amazing update yr..👏
atlast they won!!!..
oh so this is the secret!..due to adi's prank she lost her parents!
waiting for next part dear😊
love u🤗
-suchi
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thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

woww!!..mickey i enjoyed ur update a lot yr!!😛

so much happened in just one update!!😃
aww sandhir cute moments..😳
ab randhir aisa karega to sabko yehi lagega ki use hua kya hai?😆
he helped her whole-heartedly ..amazing update yr..👏
atlast they won!!!..
oh so this is the secret!..due to adi's prank she lost her parents!
waiting for next part dear😊
love u🤗
-suchi



Thank u so much Suchi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yup that's why he is in guilt...

Love u a lot❤️

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