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coolishparul

@coolishparul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

omg omg ur truly an amazing writer Yar.
what a storyline and as mentioned sanyu rd been parents of someone and they lost her.
this is really a different concept

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shefali

@heartbeatz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

mysterious!!!!!

loved it...

u have written it brilliantly...

a totally totally out of the world concept...

keep up the good work and update soon👍🏼

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Mahdin

@mahdin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

it was amazing
so it seems there daughter has died
but it seems interesting
will be waiting for ur update ...!!!! 😊 😛

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Shreyasi Ganguly

@123456me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

its sooo goood!!!!!!!!

i sooo loved it...

great post!!!!!

update soon

love,shreyasi😳

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow
Amazing update
Love it
It's really a dark ff
Love it
Can't wait for the next part
Thanks for the PM

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Sushmita

@sushie166

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Chap 1 was awesome...
I liked it very much, specially those lines

'Like that kiss. Like every kiss that his lips had stolen from hers.

Like every night she had spent in the cage of his arms.

Because that was what he was, wasn't he?

A gilded Cage.

He'd kept her like a songbird.

And then she'd been stupid enough to fall...'

Parth calling Sanyukta was hilarious!! 🤣
Emotions jotted down so nicely...
Update soon...
M waiting...!!

Love
-Sushmita

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Irij55

@Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

amazing loved it upload next part soon

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

woah... this sounds damn interesting... m definitely ready for the ride.
so the backdrop is same as the show ri8.. n she had a daughter too thenn.. guessed it already from the date mentioned... 4yrs n 9 months..
n parth called her Bhabhi... sai badla nikala rd ne fevicol se.. 😆
me already lurrvvv dark stuff... waiting for more.. :D

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: shwetarandhirho

Hey... sorry but I dun know ayesha... Oops! My Bad
Just read title of ur ff... read d prologue ... it ws fab.. 😊 Thanks

Read part 1 ... it ws amazin... some mystry is going to unfold.. You bet!

Someone died.. 😔 Yes sorry for that

N gilded cage..

Ur words r awesum... would luv to read more.. update soon...

Thanks for reading dear!