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Ashley.Rhea

@Ashley.Rhea

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

My goodness ... What was that???? :o

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

No need to be nervous. The update was awsumm as usual :)

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

When will u update???

Please update soon!!!

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Anamika2692001

@Anamika2692001

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

OMG!!! What the hell did I just read???!! 😕

Suspense, desire, pain, love...all blended into a smoothie which is just perfect! :D

Dark Randhir is of course amazing...

And Dark Parth... 😈

He is dangerous, commanding, temptingly evil and yet you can't hate him because he hides pain and love deep within.

I loved the plot twist in chapter 6! :D

When Randhir was romancing (supposedly) another girl, the SanDhirian inside me was like- 😭 😡

And now that it's been revealed that my SanDhir are together, I'm like-

"Hil ke naacho naacho! Hil dul ke naacho naacho!"

"Lungi Dance, Lungi Dance, Lungi Dance!"

"Arre abhi toh party shuru hui hai!" 🥳

Wah! Tussi great ho! Sadda dil khush kar ditta! 🤗

Oh wadiya! :D

VidArth should be together. They BELONG together. :)

I love the way you describe the angst and passion of both the couples.

You've done complete justice to VidArth and also to my SanDhir. 😳

And I love you for that!! ❤️

Your poems are too good to be praised in words.

You= Pure literary talent

This FF is the best one on SanDhir and on VidArth too!

👏

I'm proud and honoured to know you and really lucky that I'm reading your work. :)

Next update...FAST!!!

Your writing inspires me. I hope I can become as good as you. :)

Phew! I'm tired!

See...maine cell phone se itna bada review type kiya! I'm so great! 🤣

I also want lamba lamba reviews from now on. 😈😆
xoxo
Amreen 😉

Edited by Anamika2692001 - 10 years ago

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Anamika2692001

@Anamika2692001

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Reserved

Unreserved. This will be a LONG review.

First, the SanDhir part.

I loved it. The little couplets were so poignant...dark, yet beautiful. You expressed Randhir's guilt so well. Even Sanyukta's forgiveness. Wanting to trust him again. Putting her heart and feelings at stake. Again.

Simply because she loves him. Despite everything that ever happened.

Randhir's willpower to control his anger issues and become a calmer and better person is really good. As you said, her voice soothes his demons.

Simply because he loves her. And he is guilty for the things he did.

They are broken and damaged...but not destroyed. I am so happy that they have gone for counselling.

Fixing their relationship will take time and patience. But they will pull through and make it.

Simply because they love each other. :)

SanDhir are meant to be...<3

Now...the VidArth part.

I love the dark Parth. Seriously. Dangerously tempting. Like brownies and ice cream.

OK...maybe that is a weird comparison. 😆 But I am sure you are getting what I'm trying to say.

I love it when Vidushi blushes.

That is the thing about VidArth. They bring out sides of their personality which are hidden from the rest of the world. SHe brings out his aggressive and dark side. He brings out her coy side.

And of course, they love each other to bits.

I loved Vidushi's confusion and how she was worrying about SanDhir and their relationship. Her dear brother's reaction to her kidnapping.

The last lines made me smirk and smile.

Randhir approved of the plan! Ah! Now that is what you call a wonderful cliffhanger.

I loved this chapter. It was written spectacularly well...like always! 👏

Update soon!!

xoxo
Amreen

Edited by Anamika2692001 - 10 years ago

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Anamika2692001
Reserved

Unreserved. This will be a LONG review. Yay!! I love long comments!

First, the SanDhir part. 😆Your favie!

I loved it. The little couplets were so poignant...dark, yet beautiful. You expressed Randhir's guilt so well. Even Sanyukta's forgiveness. Wanting to trust him again. Putting her heart and feelings at stake. Again. I had trouble with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it girl!

Simply because she loves him. Despite everything that ever happened.Yep

Randhir's willpower to control his anger issues and become a calmer and better person is really good. As you said, her voice soothes his demons. He had to learn. For her, for them.

Simply because he loves her. And he is guilty for the things he did. He's only human and he feels pain too.

They are broken and damaged...but not destroyed. I am so happy that they have gone for counselling. The rational thing to do, my inner psychologist approves!

Fixing their relationship will take time and patience. But they will pull through and make it. Will i have time and patience to write it?

Simply because they love each other. :) 😃

SanDhir are meant to be...<3 😳

Now...the VidArth part. 😆 My favie😉

I love the dark Parth. Seriously. Dangerously tempting. Like brownies and ice cream.Yumm.

OK...maybe that is a weird comparison. 😆 But I am sure you are getting what I'm trying to say.

I love it when Vidushi blushes. 😳😳 You and Parth Both 😆😉

That is the thing about VidArth. They bring out sides of their personality which are hidden from the rest of the world. SHe brings out his aggressive and dark side. He brings out her coy side. 😆 They are perfect na?

And of course, they love each other to bits. 😳Guilty

I loved Vidushi's confusion and how she was worrying about SanDhir and their relationship. Her dear brother's reaction to her kidnapping. 😊 Caring Vidu.

The last lines made me smirk and smile.

Randhir approved of the plan! Ah! Now that is what you call a wonderful cliffhanger. 😆I learned from the best.

I loved this chapter. It was written spectacularly well...like always! 👏 Thanko My utterly butterly delicious Amu!😆😆

Update soon!! I try, You know I do. i try as hard as you 😆😉

xoxo
Amreen

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kyara7

@kyara7

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

i just read this story...n its fabulous...loved it...plz continue soonish

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Finally yr u updated
I was eagerly wtng for an update
Loved it

Everything seems getting cleared
Vidharth finally together .this kidnapping idea really worked
Sandhir going to get through this
They both love each other so much

The fb was superb

Omg precap sounds scary
Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling