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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
It was a sign that Sanyukta Shekhawat
still loved her husband. Screw what those
papers said. There was going to be no
divorce... Awesome.. Interesting concept...
Looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
I love Dark ffs!!

Update asap!! Waiting!!

Prologue was superb!

Love,
Sam.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
oye...!!!!
interesting .. very interesting..
jaldi update karna n please pm karna..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
it was awsm...i love dark ff ...do update soon...and plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
this is very interesting Do pm me as I have send buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
prologue seems interesting
can't wait
update asap
n pm me if possible

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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
res!!!
😆
its damn interesting!!!!!!
i luvd it
Edited by 123456me - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Prologue is very intriguing
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
The prologue is awesome
I luv dark ffs and this is too good
Plz update soon and pm me plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: infernofyre

Ok, So I'm back with a FF again.
This time it is dark. Not explicit, but dark.
*jumps in excitement* and also *says sorry for not giving the review fast enough*
There will be moments you will curse at me.
There will be moments you will hate people in this fic.
There will be war.
On your screen.
Is it weird that I am actually excited but I have butterflies in my stomach. I don't even know what to expect... it makes me jump more.
This dark FF is not for the ones who want anything lovey dovey.
This is for the ones that want to read something that makes them go "What the hell are they doing?"
I don't mind reading that *rubs hands together in evil way*
This one is intended for all those who crave a little something different.
This one is
Mine for the taking.
oh gosh. I don't know. There is something about the title that makes me want to cringe. Like it's scary... but at the same time, I am so so so ready for it.
The prologue is down below.
Read and enjoy. And comment maybe?



Okay... that pic. Has two elements: seductive and mysterious. It's a good combination!
Beginning of an End


She let out a long breath as she finally got into the lift.
Another day gone. Another battle won. Another night to be conquered.
Another night to be conquered? what does that mean... like? (sort of confused... but knows it will be explained later) I have a confession...again. (you must be thinking... I have loads of confessions. It's true. I always confess... and so I keep my life a open book because I just can't keep some stuff within me😆) sorry... I know I cheated. I read it all before reviewing... but you know... I can't help it. I wanted to read it ASAP ... and so I read it the say I got the pm... I just haven't been able to comment. 😳😳
She smiled as she pushed the button marked '10' and let her ponytail-bound hair loose. Her head hurt from the 6 hr meeting she had attended a few hours before. The mirror in the lift showed her a tired but relieved face. It also showed a woman who knew how to handle a business but not her own true path.
But not her own true path... hmmm. alarming!
'One more year. One more year and I will quit the desk job and go into on-site work. I swear if I have to do anymore of these stupid presentations or transcribe another interview! ...It will pay less and I will have to rent an apartment in a less luxurious area. But I swear I will quit my job!'
whyyy does she want to quit her job... and why wait a year!😆 I know I know... I already know.
She took off the long sleeved business jacket and tucked it under her arm. The image was everything. Show a moment of weakness and they will break you. It was a lesson she'd learnt at the heart of her family. Her family that had turned into a set of complete strangers now. She let out a sigh and busied herself with the thoughts of a cold drink and her favourite cake. She had bought it early morning before she had left for work and it had been sitting in the fridge, getting cold so it could cool her down.She smiled, already imagining chocolate on her tongue.
Why is her parents and family complete strangers? Gosh. I don't know. But I think your intro has made my stomach hurt😆😆. hahahah! I want to know and there's just too much suspense.😃😃
The sudden stopping of the lift jolted her. She looked at the display screen in confusion. The lift was still on the 4th floor. Why had it stopped.
The doors of the lift opened to reveal a figure in white. A figure in white that replaced all her thoughts in a mere moment. He entered the lift and suddenly the very spacious lift felt like it had shrunk to the size of a ...all coherent thoughts were...wiped.
In white... ooo😉. But did someone stop the elevator...😲
The doors shut tight and she felt a shiver run down the length of her body.
She has a shiver... that means she is affected by him.
He was here. Clad like an angel when he was anything but one.
Anything but an angel...mhmm.😆
She could feel him judge her with those expressive eyes of his. Eyes that were now engaged in giving her a judgemental look. Like she was nothing but a piece of furniture.
"You changed" his disapproval was overpowering the air.
That's just who he was. Powerful. Demanding. Controlling.
That's who she had fallen for.
Randhir Singh Shekhawat, CEO of Sanyal and Shekhawat Solutions (SASS).
She fallen for him... and she knows that he is bad. and CEO and all... sweet. afterall, he is a prodigy...
Her Boss. Her Boss and nothing more . Not anymore.
Was he something before... gosh. who am I kidding... I already know! Her boss...😉
"I said that you changed. Won't answering me be the polite thing to do?" That familiar smirk on his handsome face sent her into a flurry of emotions.
Red heat coated her face and she felt the temperature rise. She had forgotten how much power he had over her.
SHE IS SOOO STILL AFFECTED BY HIM...
"Since..since when have I ever been polite, Sir?" her tone was curt and formal, betraying nothing whatsoever about the storm that was raging within her soul.
Hug him. Kiss him.
Tell him you miss him.
Tell him you want him back!
YES! Tell him. Gosh. I have a bad feeling that he has done something bad...or has he, or has she...
"Sir? Come on, I know you are all into being Miss.Business woman these days. There is no need to pretend in front of me. Stop trying, Sanyu." the way his lips caressed the sound of her name. The desire in his eyes.
Does he still love her... gosh. He probably does. "desire in his eyes"
It would be too easy to give into.
And they never did easy, did they?
"Fine.Randhir. Happy now? Yes. I have changed. People change. Feelings change. Change happens okay? It's a fact of life. Let's face it today! We wanted different things. You wanted the Perfect family and I wanted my career. We wanted different things." It was breaking her to say it. But those words had to be said before something broke. Like her heart. Again. She turned her face to the mirror, scared to look into his eyes and be caught in a lie. Nothing had changed. Especially not the way she felt about him.
THIS PARAGRAPH! I LOVED IT. A LOT. I really don't have a reason why. I just loved it. The way she said that she changed and doesn't have feelings for him... BUT INSIDE... she hasn't changed. That's just really beautiful.
"Nothing has changed. Not really. You just put on some fancy clothes and picked up fancy words. But inside you are still that same girl I fell in love with. The girl who wanted me for who I am and not my name. You are still my Farzi." Randhir turned her around gently and looked into her tearfilled eyes. "We want the same thing Farzi. Accept it. We both want each other. Why is it so hard for you?" The turmoil in his eyes cracked open the cage she had locked her heart in.
IF THEY LOVE EACH OTHER?!?! THEN WHY AREN'T THEY TOGETHER. LIKE. WHAT HAPPENED. RANDHIR STILL LOVES HER. AND SHE LOVES HIM. GOD. THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER!!!😭😭
"I..I..It's..Main ..Woh.." She was robbed of her words, unable to express herself in any language.
Love is dumb.
She grabbed him by his collar and pulled his lips over hers, frustration and emotion driving her like it had a mere 5 years back.
It was like he had been expecting that, his lips quickly joined hers and he fought for control, finally winning and making her moan in desire.
It was she that initiated it. They love each other! 5 years... so they've been married for 5 years? Or were together or what?
"Oh..Oh..god what did you just do...it..I..." her hair was disheveled, her cheecks red. She was a picture of serenity, her words a hot mess . Just like her.
"We shouldn't. There's no 'we' anymore" She scolded herself, her hands covering her eyes in shame.
What's stopping her yaaar. They need each other. IT'S SANDHIR FOR GOODNESS SAKE. They're perfection.
The opening of the lift and the floor number announcement made them wake up from their thoughts.
She hastily picked up her blazer that had fallen on the floor and the ran out, not looking back.
Her fear and her desire. The kiss she had pulled him into.
It was a sign. It was a sign that Sanyukta Shekhawat still loved her husband.
Screw what those papers said. There was going to be no divorce.
A DIVORCE? WHAT! NO! THERE SHOULDN'T BE DIVORCE... They need to be together... AND THE FACT THAT SHE SAYS "SANYU SHEKHAWAT STILL LOVED HER HUSBAND." I LOVE IT. Oh gosh. There are just too many things that are underlying...AND I WANT TO KNOW.

You need to update both of these ff... like seriously... I am just so puzzled at what's going to happen next. Like. gosh. Okay... I got to go and sleep. BUT! HURRY UP AND UPDATE
👏👏👏👏😃
LOVE YA.
Kri🤗

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