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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay and Congratulations wala RES ⭐️

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Did I mention how glad I am that my lady ASR finally decided to write a story for us. The only thing that was stopping me from pestering you to write was your crazy work-life balance and now for you to fit this in as well, Gosh you truly are a super woman!👏

What can I say about the prologue, it is just amazing. No one will be able to tell that this is your first writing venture and what a venture too! I Love, Love, Love a corporate setting for romance, it is just so exciting! On top of that you made Khushi so freaking relate-able it is not funny! I love her already!
The opening scene with Khushi running reminded me of Kal ho na ho with PZ running in the very first scene, it is then and there that I got intrigued and completely immersed in what you were describing. Props for the very vivid description of everything woman!

Your Khushi is confident, smart and independent. It is quite clear that something happened in the her past that she doesn't want to talk about. She loves her parents, wants to see them happy and at the same time seems to share a close bond with her father! ( I can so totally relate to that as well).
She joins Arnav's company, has an interview with them and Khushi being Khushi cannot help but fall in Arnavji's arms from the get go and we get ourselves the staring session. I was already imagining the great big pause as Arnav steadies Khushi and looks into her eyes while Khushi is too busy admiring her new boss!

I cannot cannot wait to see what transpires next, bring it on whenever you can Jigs!



PS. *sniff* where is the OS that didn't make it to the forum! Why don't I have the link?!💔
Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Great start. Congratulations!
Can't wait to read more.
Bring it on!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
what did you say,is your first attempt to write?! no way!!! is one of a piece and i'm glad you accepted the challenge! we ,readers,have a lot to gain! thank you and congratulations !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Jigs first I want to thank Juhi and Choti for motivating you to write a story👏
Fantastic start👍🏼🤗

Loved the independent Khushi you created. Loved the way you wrote about her love for her parents, her education and her backdrop of her in first update.

I am very curious to know about Khushi's past

Finally Arnav and Khushi met first time. Khushi falling and Arnav helping her... current... Rabba ve ... loved your writing style

Waiting to read more

Best wishes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of all congrats jigs.
great work. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Hi Jigs

Good Story. No one would believe this is your first. You have written like pro.👍🏼

A thousand mile journey starts with a single step
Edited by dev25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Great start. Looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Yaaay!
So glad that you were persuaded to share your work with us,
Prologue is very interesting and I can't believe you have hid your writing for so long 😲
Your writing is simply wonderful.
Can not wait for the first update :)
Edited by Skyfall - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
So now there is another story to look forward to...awesome start!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome prologue 👏
Loved it ⭐️

Eagerly waiting to read more ;)

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