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rith123

@rith123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

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My unres couplet.

I am so excited to read Stripped
My heart went dhak-dhak- when Khushi slipped.

👏 👏 👏

LOL! Now that that is done.

I am so glad that you are writing a story! I am very excited because this sounds so promising. I can't wait to see how this love story unfolds :D

Waiting for chapter 1 already!

P.S.: I love the relationship she shares with her parents. And I sort of already like Lavanya too!

Edited by rith123 - 11 years ago

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@...ASB100...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hey Jigs!

That was amazing! Your Khushi is very strong and independent--I like that a lot! And you described NY so vividly--I could see the buildings and the park in my mind! And the first Rabba Ve...electric, most definitely! :D

That tantalizing thing about the past though...are you going to reveal that any time soon?😉

Can't wait to read more...and get to know more about Arnav! :D

Waise, I find it hard to believe that this is your first story here! You write so well!! 👏👏👏👏👏

I'm so stoked for this story...can't wait to read more!!!

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Great start.totally new concept. Please PM when you update. Looking forward to reading this story

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

The title got me intrigued :)
Glad I didn't ignore it ..Quite a wonderful start..
NY city...love it and love the independent strong Kushi...
So, the first meet was electric...now can't wait to see how this progresses.
Doesn't look like a novice writing at all.

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MsDroolKanthan

@MsDroolKanthan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Ding!

I won't say your Prologue is really good for a first time writer. I'll say it's really good and that's that because it rarely shows that you are a first time writer. LYKWIMR?

I already love all Arnavs even before the intro in a story so I'll leave it there. But this Khushi, I am sure will surely be a favourite with her independent spirit and vivacity.

The vivid desription of the corporate world was a pleasure to read and shows the kind of research you put in or maybe how you are accustomed to it all . Bring it on Jigs . Let's get this Strip Show started;)

I highly demand that secret OS to be posted . Seriously.

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

First thing first..CONGRATULATIONS to the new writer and my heartiest WELCOME. muahhh ( I can't make wonderful sound as Arnie ;) ..

Wharton Vs Harvard. Love corporate dramas..love NYC..love central park..I will b living my dream of living in NYC close to central park thru this wonderful story..thxxx Jigs for making this dream come true..

Love u

Shailaja

Btw loved the title..its exotic ;)

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Great start
plz do pm me when u update next :)

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

OMG!!! Jigs! That was really good. I can see a superb story shaping up...
The setting is right up your alley so I know you will do great there,

But you brought out the intrigue and chemistry part really well also.

I can see this is going to be one superb story.

Loved the family background too... I am so ready to start spamming on this one...

Bring it on Girl!!!!!!!

Woohoo!!!! Jigs is a writer now!!!!!!! 🤗