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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice start literally by khushi n also you.. looking forward to read more..

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Congratulations on your first story Chokri ji. It doesn't look like your first story at all. The prologue was fantastic and I loved your writing style. Can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for the PM 😃

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pravallika

@pravallika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome start dear...
Ur writing style is really appreciable...
Looking forward to read more...
Plz pm me when u update dear...

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Sweta

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

read your story.
nice one.
thnks for the Pm

Edited by Arnav.Sweta - 11 years ago

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Jigs Di🤗

What were you doing all this time? I'm grateful to Writerji and Choti for constantly motivating you to produce this splendid piece of work..

Now, that's a perfect start for this classical love story. Can't wait for the next chapters Di! A new start, in a new city with hypnotizing molten caramel eyes.. What else do we need?😉

Btw about the other piece, securely stacked in the vault, when will we poor souls get a glimpse?

Love it👏

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sarb

@sarb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow, Itz superb start. Plz pm me...

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Yippee its finally here! And we all in for a treat...

It was brilliant!

The way you described NYC was amazing I could picture everything in my mind. Loved this Arnav and Khushi in a corporate backdrop.

Khushi is a strong independent women I love that and I'm so happy she's career orientated.. Her past has left me intrigued..

Can't wait to read more about Mr molten caramel eyes.

The first electric meet has left us all saying Rabba Ve!

Excited to see how you unfold this story :-)

YKWIM?

When will we get a glimpse of that OS...

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EXPELLIARMUS

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Unresed Page 1 😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

The prologue is very intriguing

I like the bond of Khushi with her parents.

Looking forward to read the story

I think Khushi will get the job.

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Shalini

@tvmania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hi,
Just came across your fiction and I must say its just amazing...
This is the most beautiful beginning of an wonderful story... I will be looking forward to read this...

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