Arshi FF: losing your memories - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
awesome...
omggg poor khushi...feelin bad fr her...why is arnav crying now...he dint even thnk of her bfre...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
my heart broke when arnav went to chek his di leaving khushi behind...
Khushi's heart sank seeing that arnav grasped anjali's hand when she was coming...
Already her 6th sense was telling her that something amiss is gonna happen...
Now what will happen to her..??

Nd about the update, its fine for me... If people insist then u can re-write it...

but personally i liked the update...
Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Very nice story and I really want arnav to pine for khushi like he had made her suffer for his precious Di, why is he crying now when she is hurt when he never cared before breaking her heart on numerous occasions... waiting eagerly to read the rest of the story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Amazing update...
Khushi poor soul :( felt so bad for her
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
its late arnav.. you need her and you think that you can't live without her but when she have tried to hold your hand you have avoided and given your hand to your di and you didn't want to comfort her for your di's sake.. good you are saved now.. you don't have to do anything for khushi.. arnav you be with your di and your family who cares a damn for khushi but again khushi gave her life to save your di.. hope khushi is able to get the peace which was looking for.. nice update..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#36




Here is the rest of chapter 2! Don't forget to comment***



For the first time in his life Arnav prayed. He pray that if DM existed he would spear the life of his wife. He also prayed for there to be a heaven, so if Khushi didn't survive she would find peace. He sat in the waiting room barely containing his tears, he tried to appear strong in front of his family, specifically his Di. Anjali hadn't stopped crying since the ambulance had drove of with her dying sister-in-law. Khushi has saved the lives of her and her unborn child, something Anjali will never be able to repay her for in this life time.

"What happened!" Buaji entered the waiting room screaming with a distraught Gupta trailing behind

It hadn't taken long for the entire Gupta family to fill the waiting room. There was a blanket of silence that fell over the room upon their arrival. No one could find the words to speak, what would they even say?

A Surgeon had come out of the operating room with his eyes down cast. The entire family stood in anticipation for the news he would deliver. The doctor felt the words die in his throat. The girl was too young to be fighting for her life. They had lost her several times and he didn't know if she would be able to pull through.

"Which one of you gentlemen is the husband." The doctor question

With shaky palms Arnav put his hand in the air "I am."

"She received a massive blow to the head, and severe blood loss."

"What are you trying to say, doctor?" Mamiji stuttered

With a sad expression the doctor went on "Her chances are not looking good. Please prepare your minds." With that the doctor was gone.

"This can't be happening, DM please save my child!" Buaji exclaimed

Arnav fell to his knees too weak to keep up the charade of being strong. He placed his head in his Di's lap looking for comfort, but who would comfort his wife? Who would tell her she's strong enough to pull through?

"You had better pray that my sister makes it through." Payal spit the harsh words at the Raizada family. Turning to her husband she gave a harsh glare. "If my sister doesn't make it then this marriage is over."

"Payal, honey..." Akash whispered

"No I refuse to live in a house where my sister was hated! None of you ever believed in her, you were to caught up in your own emotions to see the truth in front of you. Instead you passed the blame on her!" Payal yelled

"I tried to be a good sister-in-law to Anjali but if your asking me to chose her or Khushi, I will always chose Khushi!" Payal shot at Akash "You know the entire time Khushi was thinking of you Anjali? She didn't tell you about your husbands betrayal for the sake of your happiness. You go around insisting that Khushi ruined your life, your happiness; but Anjali you've ruined her life." Payal spat before leaving the room

"She's right. Anjali, Khushi only ever thought of you." Buaji confirmed

"Everyone just needs to stay calm. Khushi will pull through, I have faith in her and DM." Nani spoke trying to defuse the situation.

Arnav stayed in the waiting room long after the others had left for the night. The doctor has said the damage was sever so they had to preform multiple surgeries that had span over 13 agonizing hours of of waiting, and pleading with DM to save his wife. The love of his live, the woman he knew he wasn't good enough for. If she made it he would spend the rest of his life proving to her that he was.

When to doctor came out if the operating room look tired but somewhat proud. A weight had been lifted off Arnav heart.

"She made it Mr. Raizada. However I regret to inform you that she is in a coma."

"But she's safe right?" Arnav questioned

"She is not yet out of the danger zone, but if she makes it through tonight she should be in the clear."

"When will she wake up?" Arnav inquired

"That's the thing Mr. Raizada she could wake up days from now, weeks even months or years." Clearing his throat the doctor delivered the finale blow to Arnav sinking heart. "There is a good chance that she may never wake up."

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A/N Updates will be around Wednesday and Fridays from now on. ALSO IF YOU WANT PMs ABOUT UPDATES YOU MUST ADD ME TO YOUR BUDDY LIST!
Edited by Yadech - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Update was amazing... really sad for khushi... :(
So if she stays alive Arnav will prove that he loved her?? Bullshit...!!!
Payal go baby..u r on right track
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Very sad update...
Poor girl...
Why she has to pay for others...?
Payal blasted the raizada's nicely...
Now that she is in coma...
Anjali must be happy... Anjali has to regret...

But its not anyones fault... But it is arnav's fault...
Hope khushi wakes up soon...
Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Thanks for the pm... The update is short if u decided to update once or twice a week.. Give a long update pls... Sad update.. Hope khushi is fine
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
sad.. but hope khushi is fine.. liked payal she spoke her heart out and stood for her sister.. hope anjali the fragile doll of raizada's understand what khushi did for her.. loved the update..


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