Arshi FF: losing your memories - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
a beautiful story loved it the emotions the anger the dialogues excellent keep up the good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesome FF. Poor Khushi always the sacrificial lamb. ARNAV why are U so insensitive where Khushi is concerned. I hate U. That poor girl loves U n your selfish family. U never had any feelings for Khushi. You are the most selfish man. Once six months are over, Khushi should leave you.. Payal dont spare this family, especially Arnav.
I hope she never comes back to Arnav. 😡
Incredible story. U MADE ME CRY. 👍🏼 ⭐️
Edited by lara3110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

sorry for my late reply

I love your style of writing, you are a very good writer.
I feel so sad for everyone because it was not entirely their fault...
And khushi in coma???!!!!!!!!!! what will happen now? cant wait to read further
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Firstly, please add me to your PM list!Thank you.

Secondly,you have a beautiful and well written story!

Thirdly,read all your chapters and one go and omg it was so emotional! I really felt for kushi..I hated the way arnav ignored kushi...his excuse of ignoring her was absolutely absurd!when kushi wanted to hold his hand but held anjali instead...I actually felt hurt for her and when he ran to anjali not realizing kushi was the one hurt I was so disappointed. The way he treated kushi is not right!whatever he goes through now,he deserves it.

And

Lastly,kudos to payal!!!!I am glad she stood up for kushi...and yes the raizadas need to realize their mistake and pay for it. I am eagerly waiting for your next update.

emotional, interesting and one entertaining story you have here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
interesting. i'd like to follow through!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Loved this story n eager to know what happens to Khushi. Will she come out of the coma n if so, what next. What will the effect be on Anjali, since Khushi saved her from the accident. Will Anjali tell Arnav about this??

Incredible writing. 👏
Edited by lara3110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
I'm glad Payal took a stand.
Khushi gets out of coma, I want her to leave Arnav.
But I'm wondering if she'll lose her memory.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
nice story. Please give it a happy ending. Anjali and arnav have realized their mistake. thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
I guess this was needed for Raizada's to get a reality check .
At least Anjali think she did great by saving her life
As for now background isn't really clear to me that hw Payal was wd them
Bt I liked the way she choosed her over Anjali n Raizada's that's what she has learnt from them .
Nani n all are believing nw that she wll come bck where was this damn belief of them ?
Arnav oh man y to cry nw when u never really cared her as ur priority . I hp she get bck to life soon by loosing her memory of Raizada's
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
nice story.
feeling bad for Khusi.
Anjali needs to repent.
I wish Payal makes the whole raizada family pay for what they have done to khusi.

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