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Posted: 17 years ago
helllllllllllooooooooooojiiiiii farahjiiiiiiiiiii.. lol
vaise ur stry is gng gr8... 😛 its rckng.... 😉
last part was too good.... 😃 Akkkiii is very very cute... 😛
n last to last part was like.... 😳 aha.... 😉 finally kash admitted dat she loves sujal.... 😉 my my... 😛 yeh akele akele aadhi neend mei bolne ki bimari..... 😳 kabhi kabhi kitna achha kaam kar deti hai..... 😆 hahahahhaaha lolzz.. 😃 aur us k baad ka sujal ka attitude.... 😛 it was simply amazing..... 👏 uuuuuffffff ek aap bharambaaz 😉 aur ek yeh sujal bhi.... 😛 lolz..... 😆
waiting for next part...... cont soon.... 😊 roz ek part post kiya karo yaaraaa... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow faru dear awesome parts tooo tooo gooood loved them continue soooom can't wait more/....oeee hoeee sujal keh dilogzzz masth hain kashsih toh usssi mein khooo gai.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome going, cant wait for the next part
hopefully kashish will realize her mistake soon n seems like shes half way there lol
cant wait to c wats their plan

PLZ CON'T SOOOONNNNNNNNNN 😃 😃

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Edited by Kashish_88 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr888 part farah 👏can't wait 4 aki's plan 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wowww great part par iss mei kashish bohot kam thi inn ka plan kya hai muje tu kuch esa wesa hi lag raha hai lagta hai koi sharart karny walye hai charun mill kar sum thing special! Ye akshat bi na kajal ki waja sy pareshan hai paar chupa raha hai sub sye,agar kajal ki sagai ho gai tu akshat ka kya bany ga....I hope ky sagai na ho aur sub kuch normal ho jaye anywaz very nice part continue soooooooooooooon plzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr888888888888888888 parts!!!!!! i guess caught up... 😃 plz continue soon!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Herez the next part of agar tum kahoo….

Recap:….akshat sujal and kamal make a plan…they are caught by veena so they have to tell her everything…..ab agaye….o hehe..kajal and kashish leave their life upto destiny…


veena:..(stands up)…par sujal…nahi nahi…yeh sahi nahi hoga..
akshat gives a pleading look to sujal..
sujal:..ma…ap ko hum peh bharosa hai na..(holds her hand)
veena:..haan..par…..kajal k bauji peh kya guzre gi…..aur kajal….(makes a worried face)…..kahin kuch upar neeche ho gaya…to hum log kisi ko mun nahi…

kamal:…bhaabie….ap aise kyun keh rahi hain….hum to apke apne hi hain…aur kajal jaisi beti agar humare ghar bahu ban k aye to kya apko khushi nahi hogi…(he puts his hand on akshat's shoulder)

veena looks at akshat…and gives a weak smile…

veena:…mein to bus…apni dono betiyon ki khushiyan chahti ho…..agaye tum logon ki marzi……mein saath de saku ya na de saku…mera ashirwad tum dono k saath hai

sujal and akshat smile..dono jhuk k uske pair chute hain….

Sujal:…apko ma kaha hai….bete hone ka farz hum dono nibhayenge….itna yakeen rakhiye ga…
Kamal:…(wipes his tears and joyfully speaks)…to phir DONE……ab to us ghar barat hum hi layenge…..woh bhi..

Akshat and sujal both speak at once….:..BAND BAJE K SAATH!!!!

All were happy at this end….veena was about to leave when sujal stops her..
Sujal:…ma…ap ghar ja rahi hain??
Akshat and kamal exchange a stare…
Veena:..haan….
Sujal:..umm….woh…
Akshat:…keh lo jo kehna hai…hum nahi sun rahe (he giggles)
Sujal:…(looks at him and then smiles)….woh..ek message dena tha…
Veena:..kiisse?/
Sujal:..umm…k…kashish ko…(he was blushing)
Akshat couldn't control his laughter….
Sujal:..usse kahiye ga…k….(smiles)…meri tabiyat kuch theek nahi hai…
Veena:..array…(comes forward)..kya huwa tumhe??…
Kamal:..pyaar ho gaya hai…aur kya…

Akshat sofe peh gir jata hai hans hans k….while kamal laughs too…sujal is all embarrassed..
Veena:..oo..acha acha..samaj gayi mein….(she finally leaves)

Sujal:..(turns around and imitates akshat)..ha ha…..kya masla hai??
Akshat:….masla?/..abay sale….dil to kar raha tha aunty ko waqai keh do…k teri tabiyat nahi shuru se niyat hi kharab hai….

Sujal:..(saath para huwa ek pillow leta hai and aims it at akshat)…teriii too…..

Par takiya kamal ko lag jata hai…

Sujal:..oH…sorry mama jee
Akshat:..mama jee dekha apne….baro ka lehaz tak nahi raha…chiii chii sujal…
Sujal runs after akshat….akshat agaye agaye…..while kamal tries to chase sujal…..

All three enjoyed themselves thoroughly…aur finally shaam hogayi…..

Khanna house..

Veena enters kashish's room
Veena:..kashish!

Kashish:….mumma…koi kaam tha to muje bula liya hota…
Veena:…koi kaam nahi hai beta…mein bus dekhne ayi thi tum tayar hui k nahi

Kashish:..tayar kya hona…(she was about to move away)
Veena:..(holds her hand)…..tumhara is ghar mein pehla din…tumhari khushiyon ka akhri din tha…..(kashish looks at her…stunned)…..aur is sab ki waja hum hain

Kashish:..mumma!!! yeh ap kya keh rahi hain
Veena:..sahi to keh rahi ho…..us din se le kar aj tak….mein ne tumhare chehre peh sunapan….ankhon mein udasi aur dil mein naumeedi dekhi hai……kehne ko to tum khush ho…par kya mein janti nahi….keh yeh akelapan tumhe andar hi andar khaye ja raha hai

Kashish:….ap sab k hote mein akeli nahi ho mumma…(her eyes were filled with tears)..mein bahut khush ho…bahut khush ho

Veena:….yeh sadharan libas…(points at her ordinary se clothes)….na koi zewar…na koi shinghar……yeh sab dekh k to nahi lagta k tum khush ho

Kashish turns away..she didn't have any answers

Veena:…(makes her face her again)…..beti mana hai tumhe…hai na
Kashish nods
Veena:..to phir kyun…kyun tum ab bhi humare bete ki vidhwa ban k jeena chahti ho

Kashish k chehre peh dhamake hote hain

Veena:..tumhe is tarah dekh k…..yash ki yaadein seena chaali kar deti hain…..ek ek manzar yaad ata hai

Kashish closes her eyes..and her tears drop..veena was also in tears…

Veena:…kya tum…zindagi bhar apne bauji aur mumma ko….issi takleef mein dekhna chahti ho??
Kashish:…(siskiyan leti hai)..nahi…na nahi mumma..
Veena;….to phir…zindagi mein agaye baro kashish…

Kashish:….ap sach ko kabhie nahi bhula sakte…yash…yash ko kaise bhula sakte hain

Veena:…bhula nahi sakte….manti ho….par roz…tumhe zinda hote huwe bhi pal pal marta bhi to nahi dekh sakte…..yash ja chukka hai…. …(she wipes her tears)….humein uski yaadon mein jeene do….usse dard bana k…..hum sab k beech zinda mat rako….
Kashish cries bitterly…
Veena:…agar tum humein apna manti ho…to kya tum humare liye itna nahi kar sakti
Kashish looks at her…tears rolling down

Veena:..kya tum….humari beti ban k….humein woh khushiyan nahi de sakti…jo yash dena chahta tha…
Kashish again closes her eyes…

Veena:..humein yash k ghum se bahir nikalo kashish……tum khush rehna seekho…zindagi ko jeene sikho….shayad tab humein lage k hum tumhare gunaghar nahi hain……tumhari is halat k zimidar nahi hain…

Kashish doesn't say anything….she keeps on crying…
Veena:..(she could understand kashish's pain…akhir it was her son…she was talking about)……

veena:...agar tum humein khush dekhna chahti ho…to aj……tum apne ussi dulhan k jore mein neeche ana…(kashish k chehre par ek aur dhamaka)…..

Veena:…(pyaar se uske sar peh haath pherti hai)…aj mein apni bahu nahi….beti dekhna chahti ho….(she gives a weak smile between her tears)….beetii!!!

Kashish holds her around her waist…aur phuut phutt k rotti hai….veena too joins her…..

Back to kamal's place…

Akshat:..(infront of the mirror)..mein kaisa lag raha ho??
Sujal:..(fixes his shirt)….mere se thora kum handsome..
Akshat:…haah….jal gaya na mujse..
Sujal:…abay aye…mein tujse dus gunna bhetar lag raha ho…

Akshat:….(turns around and faces him)…kis ne kaha???..
Sujal:…(smiles slightly tteri…lrl mein aksar deta hai hehe)….kashish ne!!
Akshat:..KYAA??..WHAT??..KAB??..kahaaaan?? (eyes wide open)
Sujal:…(points at his heart)..abhi…yehi…yahaaan..

Akshat:…kya baqwaas kar raha hai?? (turns around)
Sujal:..is dil mein rehti hai…abhi abhi yehi se awaaz ayi…..
Akshat:..achaa!!..(looks at his heart aur phir sujal ko dekh k smirks)
Sujal:..kyaa?
Akshat:…kajal keh rahi hai….kashish tayar ho rahi hai…
Sujal raises an eyebrow…
Akshat:..to tere dil mein kaise ayi??..jhoot bol raha hai mujse??
Sujal looks at akshat….and laughs:…u r such a….
Akshat:..handsome guy…I know…(they both laugh at their stupidity lol)

Kamal:..tum log hanste raho ge…ya phir chalo ge bhi…waise..(comes infront of the mirror)..mein kaisa lag raha ho???
Sujal and akshat hit their forehead aur saath bole:…uffffffffffffff
Kamal is left confused lol….

……….
Kajal was all set….veena bhi tayar ho gayi thi…kajal was in her room…while veena and bauji were downstairs…receiving the guests…

Itne mein kashish steps down…(muje pic upload karni nahi ati ..so sorry….😔)…
Veena and bauji both look at her…actually hall mein khare sab usse hi dekh rahe the…kashish kuch sharmayi..kuch ghabrai neeche utar rahi thi…fixing her duppata....she was wearing her wedding lehnga….choli..and duppata pinned on her side…..baal khule the…aur jab woh stairs ki taraf dekhti to uske chehre par bikhar jate….kashish was looking absolutely stunning….

She came down…aur ek ek kar k sab ke pair chuti hai…..bauji was sooo happy
Veena ki ankhein bhar ayi thi…and even ramu kaka had a smile on his face…and tears in his eyes..khushi k ansoo…

…………..yeh part bahut lamba ho gaya hai lol…isiliye cutting it short….will update asap…..coming up….the engagement party….and lots more…do comment …and thank u all those who commented earlier….luv yaaaa
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Posted: 17 years ago
uffffffff kya plan hain kya....sujal ka kya hal hoga jab woh dekhe ga...plz conitnue soonnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEy
"even ramu kaka had a smile on his face"🤣
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awesome gr8 job...yaar ...wht s there plan...?kahin kashish kki bhi shaadi karwa rahe hai kya?lolzzz cont soon
Edited by dhvanisoni - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

hehe...shuak hai kashish ko aqal aiiiiiiii 😆 ...well i luv the sujal-aki talkk...as alwayssssss 👏 👏 👏 10/10 👏 👏 👏


cont soon... n ya am i invited in the engagement ?????😉 😉 😉


rajeev rox 👏

Edited by me2kool - 17 years ago

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