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Posted: 17 years ago
HEY
are ...yeh sujal ko kya hua...ab kahsish no bol hi diya hai naa...hehe.,,I wonder wht sujal-aki r gonna do...kahin kajal ko bhagane ka irada toh nahi...hehe...ya phir koi aur ladki ko mandap mein akash ke saath bitha do...or else ...akash ko kidnap karo aur khud mandap mein baith jana,,,
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Posted: 17 years ago
kya baat hai kashish ko akhir pata chal hi gaya!!lekin tab tak mere sujal ko bahar baarish aur toofan mein chhod diya 😡 😡 ...lekin chalta hai...pyaar asaani se thode hi milta hai....n sujal is correct in thinking....wo khud uske paas ayegi... 😉

poor aki...i hope their pair doesnt breaks!!

cont soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwww that was a very nice part 👏 . but i am not getting this girl 😡 . why is she lying to herself that she doesn't love him 😡 . i wish aisa kuch ho ki jisse kashish sujal ki ehmiyaat apni zindagi mein samje and she confess her love soon to him 😳 .otherwise it's impossible i think,cause jabb tak isse jhatka nahi lagega na she will not move any further . anyay the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Next part:..agar tum kaho…

Recap:….sujal and kashish get back..and sujal gets to know..aj kajal ki sagai hai

Sujal:..par…kajal aur akshat!!…akshaat….(he suddenly realizes that he should get to akshat…so he parks the car aur apne ghar mein ghusta hai……………)

Sujal:..AKSHAAAAAT!!..(he looks around…)…AAAKSSHAAAT!!!….(finally his eyes land on akshat who was sitting on a sofa…holding his head down…kamal was sitting next to him…

Kamal:..sujal tum chila kyun rahe ho??

Sujal:…mama jee..akshat akshat chila raha ho…matlab akshat ko dhund raha ho na! (raises an eyebrow)….aur tu…(looks at akshat)….bol nahi sakta k yahan bheta huwa hai!

Kamal:..yeh kya bole ga…raat se yunhi khamosh bheta hai…

Sujal:…(looks down)….kajal ki waja se??

Kamal:….nahi to kya tumhara intezar kar raha hai! (stands up)
Sujal:…mama jee..apka masla kya hai?? (puts his hands on his waist)….
Kamal:…mera masla…??..mera kya masla hoga….?? (frowns)…jabse tum dono aye ho..masle hi masle hain…..

Sujal:..kehna kya chahte hain aap?? (comes forward)…

Kamal:..kuch bhi nahi!!!….tum dono se baat karna hi fazool hai!!

Sujal:…mama jee..bus bahut huwa….agar ap chahte hain to hum dono abhi isi waqt yeh ghar chor k chale jate hain…..kahin aur….(before he completes kamal bolne lagta hai)

Kamal:..baqwaas bandh karo apni

Sujal looks at him

Kamal:..dimaag kharab ho gaya hai tum dono ka……aur saath hi saath mera bhi kar rahe ho!!! (he was angry…frustrated…)…..mein ne zindagi mein jisse chaha…usse kho diya…..aur aj wohi halaat tum dono k samne hain…..(sujal looks down….he understands that kamal is upset because of their condition)……pyaar to karna seekh liya tum dono gadho ne…par usse jeet nahi paye….(looks at sujal and comes towards him)..aur…aur agar yehi halat rahi na..(now points at a sobbing akshat)….to meri tarah hamesha k liye akele reh jaoge…….pashtao ge us din ko jis din tumhe pyaar huwa….(his voice gets low)…meri tarah!….jeene ko to mein jee raha ho….par kaise woh sirf mein hi janta ho……(looks at sujal)…..mein to ab bhi kehta ho….isse pehle tum log devdas ban k kisi chandarmukhi k gano k muhtaj ho jao…….laut jao….

(Sujal puts a hand on his shoulder)….:..chandarmukhii….(simles at kamal)

Kamal wipes his tears and shakes his head..:…ab sambhalo isse…raat se na kuch khaya hai…na peeya hai…yunhi bheta hai….

Sujal looks at akshat…he actually couldn't believe what kamal was saying…..akshat aur bhooka rahe…woh bhi kisi k liye….it was impossible….

Sujal walks near him and crouches on the floor….he puts his hand on akshat's knee..but before he could say anything….akshat springs up…

Akshat:….MAMA JEEE…U R GREAATT!!….

Kamal looks at akshat with amazement…and sujal gives an expression…of..."I knew he was faking it" lol…….he hits his fingers lightly on his forehead!!

Kamal:..yeh…yeeeh…..achanak….

Akshat:…sujaaal..mere yaar…dildaaar…janebahaar….(picks him up and hugs him)…..shukar hai tu laut aya…

Sujal:..(gets back)….tujse bara nautanki mein ne aj tak nahi dekha…

Akshat laughs…

Kamal:…abhi thodi der tak to tum sog mana rahe the..yeh achanak…..kya ho gaya??

Sujal:…mama jee….muje yakeen hai yeh is tarah bheta yahan sog nahi…balke koi khichdi paka raha hoga……ap isse jante nahi ….bara shaitani dimaag paya hai sallle ne……(looks at akshat)

Akshat:…aye sujal!….baz aja…mein to ek ache maqsad k liye plan kar raha tha…par kal se kuch samaj nahi arahi thi…..par dekh…tere ate hi dimaag ki bati jal pari…

Sujal smiles:…to….kyaaa karega??

Akshat:..wohi jo abhi abhi mama jee ne kaha…

Sujal and akshat look at mama jee… and a mischievious smile appears on their faces…

Kamal is totally lost:…kya..k..kyaa karne wale ho???
Akshat:…band bajane wale hain!!!!…(winks at kamal….then gives a high five to sujal!!!!)

…………….

Cut to khanna house…
Kashish enters….ghar mein kafi kuch ho raha tha….bauji was on the phone…

Bauji:..haan haan purab..sab tayariyan hain…(laughs)..tum to aise fikar kar rahe ho jaise larki k baap tum ho….(laughs again)

Kashish looks on her side and sees veena…

Veena;..ramu kaka…yeh thali udhar rakh dein….jab woh log ayneg to aarti k liye laiye ga….

Ramu kaka:..jee…

Veena:…..2 baje gaye….aur kashish abhi tak nahi ayi…..mein sab kuch akele kaise sambhalongi…

Ramu kaka:…malkin…..betiya agayi…(points at kashish)

Veena:….array kashish!!…(goes upto her…kashish pair chuuti hai..)….jeeti rahe…kitni der laga di ane mein…sab theek hai na
Kashish :..(smiles)….sab theek hai mumma….

Veena:…sujal nahi aya ?

Kashish: (looks down)…woh….kamal uncle k yahan gaya hai

Veena:..acha acha…..(smiles)..kal pata chala k tum akeli reh gayi ho wahan

Kashish looks at her..jaise koi chori pakri gayi ho…

Veena:..par dil ko sakoon tha k sujal tere saath hai……

Kashish:…jee….woh mumma….kajal kahan hai??
Veena:..kamre mein…tum uske paas jao…mein neeche sambhalti ho….
Kashish:..jee mumma…
Veena:…suno kashish…(kashish turns around)…umm..kuch nahi……
Kashish smiles and leaves….
Veena:..(to herself)…najne kyun….jo adhurapan tumhari ankhon mein yash k jane k baad tha…..woh aj nazar nahi araha….(gives a peaceful smile)……aur mein janti ho yeh adhurapan kaun pura kar sakta hai…..

………………….
Kamal:…dekho….is mein risk hai

sujal:..kis baat ka risk??

akshat:..humari jo bachi kuchi izzat thi woh to waise hi nahi rahi

sujal:..hum..ari???…(raises his brow .and...points at akshat)

akshat:..haan haan..(uski ungli neeche karta hai)…meri!!….mere akele ki waise bhi koi izzat nahi karta us ghar mein….

Sujal and kamal smile…

Akshat:..aur phir….kya jata hai try Karne mein…..

Kamal:..yeh sirf waqti toor peh kaam ayega…

Sujal:…waqt ko hi to kaboo karna hai mama jee….ek bar yeh ghari tal jaye…agaye ki dekhi jayegi….

Akshat:..that's the spirit!!!

Kamal:…chalo phir….yeh bhi kar k dekh lete hain!!
Sujal:..great!…lets get back to practice…..

Just then veena enters…

Veena:….yeh sab….kis cheez ki tayari ho rahi hai??

All the three men…sujal akshat and kamal freeze….

Kamal:..bha bha bhaa

Akshat:…bha bha bha nahi…bho bho bho bhoot hota hai…(giggles)

Sujal (hits akshat on the back of his head)….:…yeh tumhe bhoot lagti hai gadhe!!

Veena folds her arms….she knew they are cooking up a plan..

Sujal:…ma….ayi na…..kaise ana huwa

Veena:..mein to dekhne ayi thi k tum theek se pohanch gaye….par…..yeh sab kya baatein ho rahi thi……..

Kamal, sujal and akshat all stare at each other one by one….while veena gets suspicious…

Akshat:..(speaks first after gulping down his saliva)…aunty wooh asal mein…

Veena:..tum log bata te ho ya phir mein…inhe (yani bauji)…ko bhejo…

Sujal:..array kaisi baatein kar rahi hain…unhe bata diya to plan shuru hone se pehle khatam ho jayega…

Veena:..plaaaaan????

…..well idhar finally the three men have to tell veena their plan…..they take her in confidence….as unki team ki fourth member veena aunty hi to thi!!

…………………..

back to khanna house…
kashish enters kajal's room….

Kashish:..kajal!!

Kajal was standing by her window…holding yash's picture….she turns around

Kajal:…diii….(comes running and hugs her)….

Kashish:…kaisi ho??

Kajal:…(gets back)….jee rahi ho…

Kashish:..kajal..(pyaar se uske chehre peh haath pherti hai)….tumhari khushi hum sab ko bahuuut azeez hai…

Kajal:….janti ho dii…aur khush kaun nahi rehna chahta….par kismet ka kya karein….khushiyan ane se pehle mun pher leti hain

Kashish:..aisa nahi kehte…kismet ko dosh mat do

Kajal:..jo sach hai…woh to sach hai…..bus abhi abhi yeh baat mein bhaiya se bhi keh rahi thi…

Kashish looks at kajal…who places yash's picture on the table…

Kashish:….tumhare bhaiya to tumhe hamesha…har haal mein khush dekhna chahte the…

Kajal:..(turns around)….dii….bhaiya sirf muje hi nahi…apko bhi hamesha khush dekhna chahte the….

Kashish looks down:…meri khushiyan kahi ruth gayi hain…

Kajal:..(smiles)…muje samjha rahi thi…aur khud hi kismet ko zimidar bana rahi hain…..

Kashish looks at kajal….

Kashish:…meri baat aur hai…

Kajal:…baat wohi hai dii….aj hum dono ek hi majhdar peh hain……..jo dil chahta hai….woh pa nahi sakte….aur jo dimaag kehta hai…..woh hum kar nahi pa rahe…..hain na???

Kashish and kajal look at each other……

Kajal:..kaun si rah chune….yeh na mein teh kar par rahi ho…aur na hi aap……

Kashish:..(comes near kajal and holds her hand)…..to phir…kyun na aj hum dono…..ek bar phir sab kuch kismet peh chor dein………

They both smile at each other…tears in their eyes and then looks at yash's picture….

Kya kajal aur kashish ko unki khushi mile gi…..ya akshat aur sujal phir koi naya karnama karenge…jisse kismet inka sath chor degi………..janne k liye..kath likhiye hehehe…lol…parte raheye….thank uu to everyoneeeeeee
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey dhamki...thank u 😳 continue kar diya hai...

heyy farvashi....thank u sooo much for reading and commenting.. 😃 😃 lol....agaye kafi kuch hona baqi hai.....keep reading 😉 😳 thank u once again...

hey liquidfantasy...haan pata to chal gaya 😉 ..par woh sahi wale confession mein abhi time hai 😆 ..thank u sooo much for reading and commenting

hey dhvanisoni... 😃 thank u for the comment 😳 😳 lol...bus plan next part mein ayega..hehe...lets hope for the best 😉 😆

hey vandu...thank u 😃 😃 ...yup....she is finally understanding him 😉

hehe heyloo saraa.. 😆 delay nahi kiya..next part post kardia hai...jaldhi comment karna 😆

😳 hii me2kool...sab se pehle to bahuuuut bara thank u.....an sorry for having you wait....lol..loved your rating heheh..bus yeh 10 se neeche na ane paye 😆 ....do comment agaye bhi 😉

heyy goodkashish...thank u for posting such a lovely comment...this part is for you 😉 ....keep reading.....i have thought of a tragic end....but lets see 😃 😳

heyy golu...thank u very reading and commenting.. 😳

hey ami_princess....thank uu sooo much... 😳 😳 😳 ..i have continued..do comment 😉 .....yaar akshat is anything but poor 😆 thank u once again 😳

heyy anam azhar...pehle thankkk u..aur uske baad sorry as i couldnt thank u earlier...welcome to the story hehe....hope you continue to read further 😳 😳 ..loved ur comment.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEy
great part...I wonder wht sujal-aki r having in their minds...very eager to see whts next...cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhh wowwww so they r cooking some plan huh.... which is going to rock maybe in the next part on kajal's wedding 😆 . this is awesome 😉 . and lolzzzzz....veena is also in their plan 👏 . they all a best yaar serioulsy ⭐️ . now just waiting for when kashish and kajal will understand sujal's and akshat's love 😳 . eagerly waiting for next part 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg it was such a wonderful part.......i cant believe that those guys r cooking a plan right before shaadi.......i think kashish made her desicion to stay with sujal bcoz her heart is also falling for him.......ple kashish and kajal need to get their love back bcoz they have also right to live happy........ple continue soon.....cant wait any more..........it is getting more and more interstring.......thanks for making it quick.......take care

love

kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
najanay agay kya hogaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😕 ...well am realllly eaggeeerrr to read ahead asusual 😉

sujal-aki10/10 👏
sujall... 👏
plan.... 😕
part... 👏


cont soonnn 😊


rajeev rox 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
woa!!ye aki bhi na...bohot shana hai....aur haan nautanki mast hai uski!!

oh god wat they hv cooked up now...n included veena too!!
ye veena uski har jagah madad karti hai...
well kashish is right in saying...ki kismat par chhod dete hain...lolz!!...sujal aur aki aa rahe hain unki kismat sudharne....

amazing...cont soon!!

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