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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#571

haila!!!! we dont mind long long loooooooooong parts yaar!!!! jaldi post karo!!!! 😆 😆 😆

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Shahida

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Posted: 17 years ago

#572

ppplllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up n post da nxt prt 😊 by da way im inshia n jus caught up wid ya story u r an amazing writer 😉 ppppppppplllllzzz write da nxt prt soon 😆

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

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Posted: 17 years ago

#573

very nice part i luved sujal veena scene n then kashish n veena ka emotional scene aur akshat sujal ka liek alwayz pyaar bhara jhagra 😃 shukar kashish ne koshish to ki khud ko badlne ki atleast thori bohat 😭

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Hana

@HhAaNnAa

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Posted: 17 years ago

#574

awesome part dear loved it continue soooon 👏

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#575

farah yaara tum itne zyada dhassu parts likh kaise lethi ho.. meri tho samaj mein bilkul bhi nahii aatha... har baar itna achcha likhthi ho kii me tho totally tumhari writing mein kho hii jaathi hoon... aur is baar bhii it was nothing different... as usual it was the same... the part rocked without any doubt... kya baat hai... farah tum tho poori tarah se chah gayi yaar... kahaan hum yeh sochthe the kii bechara akshat kitna udaas hoga , bechara akshat najaane kitne aasoo bahathe hoga lekin humare achche suprise ke liye yeh akshat ka dimaak ko koi nayii khichidi pakane mein laga hua hai... farah yaar agar koi us akshat the great ko samaj saktha hai tho woh sirf humara sweet sa sujal aur tum ho dear... sachchi... hahaha... ab sujal ka dimaak bhi shaitaani se peeche kahaan hai... even his brain is scheming a plan to get kashish close to him.. wah jii kya baat hai...ab veena ka bhii sujal , akshat aur kamal ke saath unke plan mein shariik hona.. yeh baat tho aise hui jaise kii sone pe suhaga..tooo goodddd... mazaa aagaya... sujal aur akshat achche beto kii tarah unka veena se promise karna kii sab theek hoga... how nice.. very goodd... ab then sujal ka zara sharmaathe hue veena se kehna kii kashish ko woh message de kii ab uski tabiyat theek hai.. then akshat ka usse chidana... sujal , akshat ke beech kii chaidkaani... all were too damn zabardast... fulltoo mazaa aagaya.. loved all the scenes... they were just too damn nice...👏 ab phir veena aur kashish ke beech ka scene.. yeh scene ek typical ek maa aur beti ke beech ka scene tha... it was so emotional.. kashish ka rona.. mujhe bada bura lag raha tha jab kashish aise bilak bilak ke ro rahii thi..all i wished while reading that scene was kahiin se sujal wahaan aaye aur kashish ko apni baahon mein chupa le.. i know this thought of mine is too funny but i really wanted that too happen.. lol... hehehe...aur phir veena ka kehna kii she wants her daughter to live naaki woh har pal aise marthe hue jeeye... this scene was too toughing mere dil ko choo gaya....this scene exactly showed though veena aur kashish ke beech ka rishtha is off saas aur bahu lekin unke beech mein ek maa-beti ka bond bann gaya hai... & last mein kashish agreeing to veena... this is very good... very well potrayed... 👍🏼 ab the next scene between akshat & sujal... this scene was soo funny... unka ek doosre se yeh behas karna kii un dono mein se kaun zyada achcha lag raha hai.. sujal ka kehna kii kashish ne abhi uske dil mein aakar usse kaha kii he is looking good... aur phir akshat ka iss baat par counter karke kehna kii kashish kaise aa sakthi hai woh tho taiyaar ho rahii hai.. ab sujal is like usko kaise patha.. tho akshat ka usse kehna kii kajal ne uske dil mein aakar yeh baat kahii...hahaha....ufff..yeh dono bhi na... ab phir kamal ka aakar phir wohii baat poochna kii main kaise lag raha hoon... this scene was really shoo funny... main apna pait pakad pakad kar has rahii hoon.... 🤣 ab then coming to the last scene... where kashish getting down all dressed up... veena , aur bauji ke aankhon mein aasoo... very goodd... very nice... atlast kashish ne sajna savarna tho shuru kiya... aur mere hisaab se tho woh din durr nahii jis din kashish apne sajan , saawariya sujal ke liye sajegi aur savregi... me sure of this... ⭐️ ab coming to the next part... mera guess for the next part yeh hoga kii shayad kashish ko kuch log aise dekhkar comment karenge.. kashish ko bura lagega.. & then sujal un logon ko kuch baatein sunayega , taane maarega jiske kii woh log chup ho jayenge.... phir i think us engagement party mein tushaar aur kajal kii nahii balki akshat aur kajal kii sagayi hogi.. may be akshat aur sujal tushaar kii koi sachchayi saamne laayenge...aur phir kya tushaar kii bisti hogi.. tushaar will vow a vengence aur wahaan se chala jaayega... ab akshat aur kajal kii sagayi ke saath saath bouji will announce kashish , sujal kii engagement bhii.. kashish will agree because she will not want to create a scene... sujal har woh koshish karega to win over kashish's heart...akshat aur kajal will be happy.... ab farah yaara yeh hai mera guess for the next part.. ab bolo me sahii ya phir ghalat... 😉 farah next part jaldi se post karna.. me waiting for it eagerly... & yaa i have to give you some ideas for this story jab ym pe aaogi tab bataoongi.... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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@anni_23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#576

Wah ji wah gr88888888888888888888888 farah ji ab zara juldi sy continue kary we r wa8ing kashish ne lehnga pehna wowww gr8888888888888.Hmmm i think ab charun ki sagai bullay bullay bus kashish ya koi aur na na keh dye Continue S0000000000000000000N