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Posted: 17 years ago
hey what a wonderful part..........i wish ke ab kashish ka dimag kuch kaam kare....ple continue soon...cant wait any more...thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part...sujal rocks...ab kashish shud clear everything..".maafi mango miss kashish."..cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey an amazing scene bet kashish and sujal jaldi se cont kardo na yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry for the long wait….net problem….herez the next part..agar tum kaho….

Recap:…sujal argues with kashish again…and leaves…kajal tells akshat she is getting engaged to aakaash….ab agaye….

Kajal:….ab mein kisi aur ki amanat hon…….kal meri sagai hai mr akshat shergill…….(gives a taunting smile)…aakaash k saath!!!!!! (her eyes got num..but before akshat could notice it…kajal turned around…and ran away…back home…………….akshat ka dil toot jata hai…..kal uska pyaar..uski zindagi..kajal usse hamesha k liye dur ho jayegi…….)..

Akshat stood there still……background music ho jaye…..kajal k saath guzare pal usse yaad ate hain..the first time he kissed her hand….then how he shrugged her away from himself..when she wanted him to confess infront of everyone…aur last mein last part wala thapar….akshat's eyes fill with tears…..

Akshat's background……the wind blows in his hair

Sou dard hain….sou rahatein..sab milaaaa dil nasheeen…ek tuuu hi nahiiiiii iiii iiiii iiiiii iiiiii iiiii iii (hehe)….(he watches as kajal disappears…away from his sight….

We shift to sujal…who is standing next to his car…getting wet in the rain….(music…baj rahi hai)…..

he remember kissing kashish……then their friendship….then kashish listening to sujal while he told akshat about yash…...kashish misunderstanding him……(achanak badal garajte hain and sujal comes out of his thoughts………the song continues on him now)

Sujal's background:….sou dard hain…….sou rahatein….sab milaaaa…dilnasheen..ek tuu hi nahiii iiiiii iiiiiiii iiiii iiiii iiiiii iiii (he closes his eyes..aur uske ansoo barish k saath mil kar gum ho jate hain…)

Kashish ka room……she is all shocked…..depressed…..she wants to call sujal but doesn't….

Kashish sits down on the bed…holding her head in her hands…..and remembers her marriage with yash….par achanak uski ankhon k agaye sujal ka chehra ajata hai…..she opens her eyes……and to her surprise she sees someone standing near the window with his back towards her…

Kashish:..yaash…(she whispers….a smile appears on her face….she quickly runs upto him…and hugs him…)

Kashish:..tum kahan the?…kahan chale gaye the muje akelaa chor k??….kahan…?? (she cries)…..

the guy turns around….and holds kashish's face in his hands gently..

Man:..mein janta tha tum mere bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti…

Kashish:..(awaaz sun k foran se ankhein kholti hai…and is shocked to see….its not yash…its sujal)….Suujaal!!!!….

She steps back….sujal comes forward……and holds her by her arms…....kashish ankhein bandh kar leti hai…..but within a second she opens them…aur sujal uski nazron k samne se gayab ho jata hai……………she was imagining him around her………she looks around the room…par wahan uske ilawa koi nahi tha……….

Kashish:..sujal…(she calls out…but no one responds…..kashish khirki se bahir dekhti hai to she finds sujal near his car….)

Sujal:…(song continues…)……rukhi rukhi si yeh hawa…(sujal closes his eyes)..aur sukhe patte ki tarah…..shehar ki sarkon peh main…lawaris urata huwa…

(he looks down….sad….tears in his eyes…and then gradually looks at the window…where he finds kashish staring at him)…..…..sou rastee…par teriiiii raaah nahiiii iiiiiiii iiiiiiii iiiiiiiii iiiiiiiii iiiiiiiii iiiiiiiii…..(he looks at kashish with love..hope……but then turns around…. as kashish rolls away to the side….

Kashish's background:…….Sou dard hain……sou…rahatein….sab milaaaaa dilnasheeen….ek tuuuuu hiiii nahiii iiiiiiiiii iiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiii iiiiiii iiiii….(she crouches down on the floor and cries……)

Back to akshat…...he paces behind kajal…..ek last try karne…is umeed mein k shayad woh usse maaf karde……kajal on the other hand was crying….and walking back home….

Akshat came from behind…and grabbed her by her hand…..pulling her towards himself….kajal was stunned…she didn't even get time to wipe her tears…….they both stared at each other……tears in their eyes…

Background:…bheta hai pani…bhene de…...waqt ko yunhi rehne de….(kajal looked away)….darya ne karwat li hai to….sahilon ko sehne de…(akshat tried to wipe her tears….but kajal stopped his hand….)……...sou hasratein par teraaa ghum nahiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiii iiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiii…….

(finally she came out of his grip and ran away…….tears still flowing down her eyes…)

Akshat was left on the road…all alone……..:…..Tan ha tan ha tanha hai..tanha chal tan ha tan ha….(hehe)

Sujal ki halat bhi akshat jaisi thi…bus sujal was also getting wet…:………..sou dard hai…sou rahatein…sab milaa…dilnasheeen…ek tu hi nahiii iii iiiii iiiiiii ii iiiiiiiii…..

The screen is divided in four sections…sujal…kashish…akshat and kajal…all crying….hehehe….and frustrated….

Finally suba ho jati hai………….

Sujal gets up…sari raat usne bahir guzari thi…gari mein bhi nahi bheta tha…..he looked up..asmaan saaf ho gaya tha…..he yawned….aur phir dekha k woh kamre se bahir hai…..

Sujal:..oH!!….muje kamre mein pohanchna chahiye……(he quickly got up aur khirki k through enter huwa…..he looked around but couldnt find kashish…..)

Sujal:..yeh kahan chali gayi??..(he questioned himself…k achanak nazar khirki k saath parti hai…and he found kashish sitting by the window….sleeping in an awkward position……)

Sujal crouches near her:….kashish!!….

Kashish ankh kholti hai..and sees sujal infront of her…..she carelessly puts her head against the wall….thodi si neend mein thi……:…kyunn….kyun bar bar tum meri nazro k agaye ajate ho…

Sujal looks away….he thought phir suba suba jhagre gi….

Kashish:….jab ankh band karti ho….sab se pehla tumhara chehra samne ata hai sujal…..

(sujal looks at her with surprise)……

kashish:...aur ankh kholti ho tab bhi tum samne hote ho…….mein tumse jitna dur jana chahti ho……..utna hi tumhare nazdeek ajati ho….

Sujal couldn't believe what he was hearing…….but he didn't want to stop her….

Kashish:….(closes her eyes aur sar phir se haathon mein leti hai…trying to get sujal's face out of her vision)....mein janti ho yeh sirf mera wehaam hai….ab ankh kholongi to tum kahin gayab ho jaoge….

(sujal gets it…she was thinking that shez imagining him)

kashish:………tum yash k gunaghar ho…apne kano se suna hai mein ne…par kyun phir bhi dil mane ko tayar nahi hota……nafrat karna chahti ho tumse….par tumhare pyaar k agaye meri nafrat kamzor par jati hai……

(her voice breaks…she was losing control over her emotions aur ankh se ansoo bhene lage….)…

kashish: mein tumse pyaar karne lagi ho sujal…shayad mein tumse pyaar…. …

(before she could complete….darwaze par knock knock hoti hai……..kashish suddenly lifts her head up and finds sujal sitting infront of her………sujal's expressions were just out of the world…..she did love him….he was stunned…surprised……

Aur kashish….well…hehe….ek bar phir knock hoti hai…and sujal looks at the door…thats when kashish realizes that its not her imagination………its sujal….right infront of her….and she had just confessed everything to him………DHAMAAKEEE…..(hehehehe such and embarassing moment for kashish heheh…her mouth fell open……she couldn't move…..toooo shocked….

…bahir darwaze se awaaz ati hai…

abhi:…apki awaazein sun k laga shayad ap log jag chuke hain….
Sujal: (smiled at abhi…he stood up and walked to the door….kashish was still in the same position)
Sujal:..good morning…
Abhi:…goooood morning……and howz the morning?
Sujal:…bahuut achi!..(sujal smiled)
Abhi:…(whispers)..yani raat ka jhagra khatam??
Sujal again smiles…
Abhi:..hum to pehle se hi jante the…..ap bare dil wale admi hain….paat se bhabie ko paatta leinge…

Sujal:…par ap itni suba kaise uth gaye??
Abhi:…array hum to roz suba itne baje hi uth jate hain…..humari dharmpatni ko suba suba pooja karne ka bara shuak hota hai….lage hatthon hum bhi unka saath de dete hain….(smiles)…

Sujal:…how nice!
Abhi:..woh to hum hain hi!
Sujal:…mein bhabie ki pooja ki baat kar raha tha…(smirks)
Abhi:….tareef unki ho ya humari…baat to ek hi hai…akhir we are husband and wife…..koi shak??
Sujal:..bilkul nahi!….(raises his eyebrows and grins…)

Peeche se awaaz ati hai…
Suman:..abhiii….unhe nashte peh bulaya ya nahi???
Abhi:..leejiye..apki baton mein hum jo kaam karne aye the who karna bhul gaye…
Sujal:..meri baton mein???
Abhi:..aur nahi to kya….waise nashta tayar hai…ap log agar tayar hon to ajayen…
Sujal:..(looks back at kashish who was sitting still)….hum bus abhi aye….
Abhi smiles..nods and leaves….

……..
suman:….unhe bulane gaye the ya wohi nashta kar wa rahe the?? (she puts the plates on the table)
abhi:…suman…..yeh sujal….isse bolne ki bahut adaat hai…
suman puts her hands on her waists..:…really????
Abhi:..haan…muje kehne ka mauqa hi nahi de raha tha…(sits down)
Suman:…(puts a plate infront of him)...:….mein duniya mein sab kuch maan sakti ho sivaye is baat k ….k koi tumse bhi ziada bol sakta hai…..
Abhi:..kya matlab??….hum zaida bolte hain?? (raises his eyebrow)
Suman:..nahi nahi…..baqi sab bus zaida sunte hain!! (she gives a smile and leaves)
Abhi:..(to himself)…zaida sunte hain??..matlab??..(gets confused)..sumaaaan…(gets up and follows her into the kitchen hehehe..uska dimaag khane lol)….

………
back to the room…
sujal:…kashish!…(he stands infront of her….kashish doesn't look up..she wasn't able to…..she didnt have the courage…

sujal:…woh log nashte peh intezar kar rahe hain….tum fresh ho k ajao….phir ghar k liye nikalte hain…..

(he turned around….kashish looked at sujal as he left…..she was confused….sujal ne kuch kaha kyun nahi usse…)

sujal:..(outside…to himself)…mein janta ho tum bahut kuch suna chahti thi mujse…par abhi nahi kashish….. mein us din ka intezar karunga…jab tum khudh chal k mere pas aogi…aur mujse yehi sab kahogi….jo aaj anjane mein tumhare mun se nikal gaya!!!…..(sujal smiled….and walked away….)……..

kashish baqi ka time chup rehti hai…nashta bhi chup chap karti hai…sujal se kabhie galti se nazar mil jati to sujal khud hi apni nazar side peh kar leta….abhi kept on talking on the breakfast table….while sujal and suman laughed…..kashish was lost in her thoughts….

Suman:..kashish…tum har waqt aise hi khamosh rehti ho??

Kashish looked up:..nahi woh…

Sujal:…..yeh kabhie kabhie chup hoti hain…(he chuckled…while abhi and suman too giggled..…kashish shared a glance with sujal ..par sujal foran se took a glass of juice and started to drink it….ignoring kashish…

Nashta khatam ho chukka tha…sujal and kashish thank the couple for their help….

Sujal:…thank u soo much…agar ap log na hote to….
Abhi:..ab is formality ki zarurat nahi hai…

Kashish:..(to suman)….…ap logon se mil k waqai bahut acha laga
Suman:..muje bhi!….dobara kabhie yahan ana ho…to humare yahan zarur ana…
Kashish:..zarur! (they hug….and tata bata hota hai…sujal and kashish leave finaaalllyyyyyyyyyyyyy)…hehehe

…….
Gari ka sara safar khamoshi mein guzarta hai…kabhie kashish sujal ko dekhti…to sujal kashish ko….but both of them didn't say anything

Kashish:..aj tumhari khamoshi se daar lag raha hai…(she said it to herself)

Sujal:..pyaar karti ho…to ek bar kehti kyun nahi mujse….(said it to himself)

Kashish:…..yeh muje kya ho gaya tha?? (talks to herself….looks outside)

Sujal:..(looks at her and then says to himself)….tumhe mujse pyaar ho gaya hai…..u love me!! (agaye dekhta hai)

Kashish:..(chupke se sujal ko dekhti hai and says khud se)….mein tumse pyaar nahi kar sakti….

Sujal:….tum mujse kabhi nafrat nahi kar paogi…

Kashish:…(feels like crying..questions herself)….tum kyun aye meri zindagi mein…kyun…

Sujal:…tumhe tumhari khoyi huwi khushiyan lauta donga kashish…bus ek bar muj peh aitbaar karo….bus ek bar kehdo….tum mujse…...sirf mujse pyaar karti ho…(he smiled…..lol….apne aap se baat karna dono bandh karte hain…as they finally reach home…)

Khanna house mein bari chehal kadmi thi…sujal gari rokta hai…

Sujal:..ghar agaya!
Kashish:..haah…
Sujal:..ghar!
Kashish looks at her house…and then opens the door…
Sujal:..kashish…
Kashish ruk jati hai…her heart skips a beat…
Sujal:..yeh…tumhare yahan kis cheez ki tayariyan ho rahi hain??
Kashish feels a bit disappointed….she was expecting something else..nevertheless she spoke…

Kashish:..aaj…..kajal ki…sagai hai…
Sujal was shocked…DHAMAAKEE…
Sujal:..kajal…..
Kashish:..thank u…(she adds and steps down…and leaves in a hurry….sujal was taken aback)…

Sujal:..par…kajal aur akshat!!…akshaat….(he suddenly realizes that he should get to akshat…so he parks the car aur apne ghar mein ghusta hai……………)

Coming up….sagai…what will sujal and akshat come up with…will they be able to win their love….or not!!!!!!!parte raheiye…….thank u all for commenting…I am sorry mein detailed comment ek ek kar k dongi…bus net sahi se chalne lage ek baar…inshallah!

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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhh my god..i cant belive and kajal are apar.... 😭 poor akshat...and sujal is happy today b/c he heard what he wanted to hear but not as how he wanted to....plz conintue soonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow great part plz bring them [sk]together i'm w8ing 4 that os k badh chahye lardtye rahy duno par plz duno ki shadi juldi honi chahiye cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg what a part........finally kashish realised that she did fall in love with sujal......i hope kashish confessed her love for him soon..........i love the scene jo subah wala tha na........i am really curious to know what will happenen with our four beautisul hearted people........hopefully they find love.......bcoz i know how it feels when u lost your love.....thanks for updating such a wonderful part after so long.......ple contiune soon this time.......cant wait to read next part.......thanks

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Posted: 17 years ago
yar ye sujal itna acha kyune hai??????...kashish ho na ho...am falling for himmmmmm 😳 ...he is so sweeeeettttttttttt 😳

kashsih 8/10 cuz of her berkhi
sujal 10/10 cuz of hisluv...n all..actually hez a complete package 😆 😆 ..an allrounderrr 😆 😆

poor akshattttt 😭
kajallll 😡 ..ab karbhi dey maaffff

sujal-kashsih chemistry 10/10 👏

plz cont soon


rajeev rox 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yaayyy!!! 😛 😛 😛 Finally Kashish agreed that she loves sujal!! wow!!
I loved the partt...!!! It was awesome...!!
Maza agaya...!! plzzz.. ab delay mat kernaaa.. warrrnaaaa... 😆

Jaldi continue kernaa... me waiting... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 awesome part!!!!

finally kashish is beginning to realize that sujal is not wrong!!! post the next part soon !!!

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