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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
caught up with the part...awesome...cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
kahaan gayee yaar?? jaldi post kerooo..!! Tumhein set kertiii hoon .. wait kero zara... 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
i ams oooo terribly sorrry everyone...my net isnt working since weeks...aj pata nahi isse kaise taras agaya lol....thank u soooo very much every one....will update as soon as possible..kal tak.....sorry once again...
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Posted: 17 years ago
finally farah u replied!!!
plz cont soonnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
we r waiting....
do updt soon!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
……herez the next part…sorrrrryyy for the long gap….par is part k baad bhi bara sara gap ane wala hai…. I will continue after 20 days….really sorry once again…..luv ya all….

Agar tum kaho:…..

Recap:…sujal aur kashish barish mein phas jate hain…..sujal tells kashish to stay in the car..while he'll spend the night outside……

Sujal:…. Mein tumhara ghusa bardasht karsakta ho….nafrat she sakta ho…..par kashish…..khamosh mat raha karo……tumhari khamoshi bardasht nahi hoti……tumhare chehre ka sunapan bardasht nahi hota………mein dobara apni safai dene ka mauka nahi manguga…….kyunki mein janta ho……k agar mera pyaar sacha hai…..to yeh sach bhi khud samne ayega……(he opens the door…)….tum araam se gari mein so jao……….mein bahir raat guzaronga……(he stepped out….then turned back)….aur yeh coat yehi hai…sardi lage to oorr lena!!…(he left …aur bhaag k ek ghar k chajhe mein khara ho gaya…….bechara hehee raat bahir hi guzare ga…..)

Kashish just looked at him….and his words echoed in her ears….." agar mera pyaar sacha hai…to yeh sach bhi khud samne ayega"…………………kashish's eye get num……

Kashish watches sujal… jo barish se bachne k liye kabhie idhar to kabhie udhar ho raha tha….she felt bad for him……while udhar sujal was enjoying it….he knew kashish was looking at him……isiliye aur over acting kar raha tha bheegne ki lolzz…….
Kashish:..(to herself)….is tarah to sujal beemar par jayega….
Sujal:..(to himself)…kaise pathar dil se muje pyaar karwaya..insaniyat k nate hi puchle….huh…(he glances at kashish…who immediately lowered her gaze…)

Kashish:…usse wapis bula lo??? (questions herself)
Sujal:…kashiiishh….mein mar jaongaaa….(he hears the thunder)….mein mar gaya to ghusa kis peh karogi???…..(looks up at the sky …then at kashish and makes an innocent face)

Kashish finally decides to call him inside…..who gari se utarne hi lagti hai when she sees someone opening the doorof the house jahan sujal khara tha….

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abhimanyu (hehehe….gaurav chopra….who plays abhimanyu in left right left….special appearance):….BHAI SAHAB????

Sujal turned around…all wet….
Abhimanyu and sujal stare at each other for a moment…then abhi (lets call him abhi lol) raises his eyebrows…questioning sujal of what he's doing outside his house…

Abhi:….itni raat gaye…ap humare ghar ki rakhwali kyun kar rahe hain??
Sujal:…jee…who..(smiles)…actually barish bahut tez hai…
Abhi :..(apna sar bahir nikal k dekhta hai asman ki taraf)….yeh baat to muje bhi pata hai…(gives a mischievious smile)…..par ap yahaaaan????
Sujal:….agaye jane ka rasta band hai…..
Abhi:…obviously!! Apke agaye to mein khara ho…
Sujal:…mera matlab….(he got confused)
Abhi:..(laughs)….array ghabrayi mat….hum to bus apki tang kheench rahe the….
Sujal:..smiles at abhi's weirdeness…
Abhi:..andar se apko kafi der se notice kar rahe the…..lagta hai kahin raat guzarne ki jaga nahi mili…
Sujal:..kuch aisa hi hai…
Abhi:..(points at the car)….apki…
Sujal:..(looks at the car too)…jee haan…meri gari hai!
Abhi:..(smirks)…mein…gari k andar bheti larki ki baat kar raha ho…
Sujal:..Oh!….who meri…..
Abhi:…biwi to nahi hain…(cuts in smartly)
Sujal looks at him….trying to get abhi's point…
Abhi:..warna….aise mausam mein ap….yahan…humare saath nahi balke….unke saat hote…(smiles again…..)
Sujal:…nahi…aisi baat nahi hai….hum dono actually…
Abhi:…Ooohhh…I see…..matlab yahan badal ap pas mein garaj rahe hain….wohi ap dono k beech mein garaj chamak ho gayi…
Sujal ko yakeen nahi araha tha…koi abhi jitna kaise bol sakta hai……so sujal maintained his silence…let allowed abhi to assume everything…

Abhi:..(continued)..hota hai hota hai…..humare yahan bhi aksar aisa hi hota hai…suman aur hum bhi…
Sujal:…kaun??
Abhi:…suman!…my wife…better half…ardhangini….par bhai sahib…mein to suman ko hamesha kehta ho…jahan pyaar wahan takrar…..kyun?..apka kya khayal hai…
Sujal:….matlab…takrar hai to pyaar hai??
Abhi:..ofcourse…

Now someone comes from behind…
Person:..abhiiiii
Abhi turns around….still holding the door…
Person:..kisse baatein kar rahe ho??
Abhi faces sujal:….dosst hain humare…
Sujal smiles at abhi's humbleness…
Abhi:…waise naam kya bataya apne apna??
Sujal:…mein ne naam to abhi tak nahi bataya
Abhi:….dhaat tere ki…….yani itni der se ap mujse baat kar rahe hain…aur naam abhi tak nahi bataya…
Sujal:..(smirks)….ap mauka dein to bataon…
Abhi:…leejiye diya mauka……(apna haath agaye karta hai)…I am abhimanyu…..abhi….archietect by profession…
Sujal:..(shakes hand)…sujal garewal…..hum yahan ek site dekhne aye the….par barish ki waja se wapsi ke raste band ho gaye…
Abhi:…fikar karne ki zarurat nahi….ab ap humare mehmaan hain….bhabi ko le ayiye….aur aj ki raat bina jhijak humare yahan guzariye….

Sujal:…umm…
Abhi:…takaloof ki zarurat nahi hai…..ap unhe andar le ayiye…
Sujal gives in….mar mar k to rehne ki jaga mili thi…and then…abhi seemed like a nice guy…so sujal ran towards the car…

Sujal:…kashish….
Kashish:..kaun hain who??
Sujal:…yahan peh architect hai……rehne k liye jaga mil gayi hai…chalo
Kashish:…..tum jao….mein yehi theek ho
Sujal:….tum neeche utarti ho ya mein…
Kashish looks at sujal….:…..mein ne kaha na….muje nahi ana….
Sujal tightens his fist…….kashish kitna irritate karti hai isse hehehe

………….
Abhi was watching them when the person…yani suman comes from behind….
Suman:..kaun hai abhi??………..(suman…played by suman of sathi re…don't know her real name….)

Abhi:..(looks behind…)…koi couple hai….raste band hain…..mein ne socha bahir bheegne k bajaye unhe andar bula lo…
Suman:…kyaa??
Abhi:..(wraps his arms around her)….don't worry….ache log hain…
Suman:..tumhe to sab ache lagte hain…(a little worried)
Abhi:…(kisses her forehead)….ek raat ki to baat hai…..aur phir is zindagi mein gara kisi ki madat na karein…
Suman:..(cuts in)..haan haaan…to phir yeh zindagi kis kaam ki….(smiles)….
Abhi:..array wah……tum itni intelligent kab se ho gayi
Suman:..abhiiii…(hits him lightly on his chest)…….

……….
Sujal:..kashish…who log wait kar rahe hain…
Kashish:…to tum jao na sujal…
Sujal:…mein tumhare beghair nahi jaonga…
Kashish looks at him again…
Sujal:..plz kashish…
Kashish looks away…..(who gari mein nahi reh sakti thi..to sujal k saath ek kamre mein kaise rehti)
Sujal:…fine….tumhe andar nahi jana to na jao…par gari se utro…..
Kashish:..kyaa??
Sujal:….(bends down at her….uske darwaze peh khara tha)……yeh gari meri hai……MERI bari se neeche utro….
Kashish was shocked:…..par…
Sujal:..par …waaar…I don't care……step out…
Kashish couldn't believe it…how could sujal be soo rude…
Kashish:..theek hai…..tumhari gari…tumhe mubarak….(kashish stpped out…..and slammed the door hard…..both were getting wet in rain….staring at each other…..when suddenly sujal came near kashish…..and picked her up in his arms…

Kashish:..SUUJAALLLLL……(she tried to get down)….how dare you!!!…neeche utaro muje…
Sujal:..sorry….par aur koi tareeka nahi tha….
Kashish:..sujal meine kaha muje neeche utaraoooo….(she hits him on his shoulder…..tried to get down….par sujal was holding her a bit tooo firmly…

Sujal:…kashish!!..hum andar ja rahe hain…..
Kashish:..NAHII
Sujal:…mein ne tumse tumhare raye nahi mangii…
Kashish:..STOP ITTTT….neeche utaro muje…
Sujal:….agar tumne chilana band nahi kiya……to un logon ko hum peh shak ho jayega….aur agar shak ho gaya aur unhone police ko bula liya…to humein ek nahi….kayiii raatein yehi guzarni parengi….
Kashish looked at sujal with frustration…..
Kashish:…I hate you!!
Sujal:..i know!! (smiles)….ab chup chap…andar chalo….
Kashish:..muje neeche utaro…mein khud bhi chal k ja sakti ho…
Sujal:…(looks at kashish…..barish dono k chehron peh par rahi thi…sujal ko kashish ghuse mein bhi bahuuuttt khooobsurat lag rahi thi…)

Kashish:..dekh kya rahe ho…mein ne kaha mein khud chal k ja sakti ho…
Sujal:..(smiles and starts walking)….mujse larne ka…muje galat samajne ka ek bhi mauka nahi jane deti tum………to phir mein kyun pyaar ka….tumhare kareeb ane ka ek bhi mauka gawa do….
Kashish gives him a dirty stare:…u r sick…
Sujal:…and u r sooo beautiful…..
Kashish could do nothing but tolerate sujal….while sujal smiles mischievously….

………
suman:….yeh…is tarah se….godh mein kyun uthaya hai?? (asks abhi)
abhi:….humein inspiration dene k liye…
suman:..kya matlab??
Abhi:..(looks at her)…yeh baat hum apko bedroom mein explain kareinge…(winks at her)
Suman:…abhii…kuch to sharam karo…
Abhi laughs…while suman blushes….
Abhi:…welcome….. …(says to kashish…kashish smiles)
Kashish:.. ….sorry…humne ap logon ko takleef di…
Suman:..nahi nahi….takleef kaisi….ayiye..andar ayiye…
Sujal walks inside with kashish

Sujal:…namaste bhabi jee…umm....sorry who mere haath…(hehe…kashish ko utahay huwa tha na…..abhi crack up)
Abhi:..koi baat nahi…..par apka yeh andaz acha laga…
Kashish feel sharmindofied…
Sujal:..actually…inke pair mein chot ayi hui hain…..(abhi and suman see the bandage)…
Suman:..ohhh…..
Sujal:…isiliye….yeh chal nahi pa rahi thi….(kashish was looking at him…sujal winked at her…)…..
Abhi:…apko to araam karna chahiye…
Suman:..ayiye mein apko kamra dekha do…..in fact…abhi….first aid box le ana….inki bandage sahi se kar deti ho…

Suman takes sujal and kashish to a room….while abhi gets the first aid kit….
Sujal kashish ko bed peh bhita hai……
Abhi:..suman..yeh lo…..
Sujal:…muej de deejiye…..kafi raat ho gayi hai…ap log bhi araam kar lein…
Abhi:..(smiles)….acha tareeka hai bhai…humein yahan se bhagane ka
Suman:…abhii…bus bhi karo…..yeh log waqai thaak gaye honge…
Sujal and kashish smile at both of them….
Suman:..ap log be fikar rahiye….aur kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to….humein bata deejiyega…
Abhi and suman bid bye bye…while sujal closes the door……he turns around……and looks at kashish………kashish wraps her hands around her knees….trying to protect herself….sujal smiles at her……swings the first aid box…and walks towards kashish…….kashish looks worried….while sujal k dil mein shararat suj rahi thi…….

….lets end it here…kafi lamba ho gaya……….sorry guys will update after a few three weeks inshallah…..tab tak..take care..do comment….luv ya…and thank u t all who commented earlier….thank uu sooooo veryy much!!!

mistakes k liye sorry mein ne edit nahi kiya....
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhh wowwwww that was an indeed cool update 👏 .very nice 😉 . waise i knew that she would think about sujal like this jab woh barish mein bhig raha tha 😆 . hey and nice special appearance of abhi and suman 😉 . loved it very much ❤️ . waise sujal is sooooo romantic 😳 . ufffff!!! usse apne godh mein uthata hai aur ghar mein lekar atta hai 😳 . and she is protesting it but he is not listening to her 😆 . he is right 😉 . sunna bhi nahi chahiye 😉 . kashish is so much stubborn 😡 . usse samaj na chahiye that sujal loves her like anything 😭 . he is so caring and sweet 😳 . lekin nahi she is sooooo rude with him and that too always 😡 . god!!! i loved the way sujal said that she never looses a chance to mistake him and suspect him then how could he miss a chance to come near her and romance with her 😳 . aur abb kya woh usse kamre mein lekar aata hai and that too with a first aid box ⭐️ .aur kashish bhi abb kuch react nahi karrahi cause she knows that woh abb kuch nahi karr sakti and i know that she likes sujal being near her 😆 . and now sujal ko kuch shararat sujti hai 😉 .hey i wish ki unki thodi toh durri mit jaye aur woh paas aajaye 😳 . continue soon yaar plzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
what an beautiful part...ple continue soon.......cant wait for sujal's naughtiness.......cant believe sujal is doing this to kashish.......thanks for updating this wonderful part. 👏

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kashish 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
fabulous farah 👏 can't believe this sujal 😆 😆 😆 he never give up 😆 😆 nd this abhi...he's sooo funny 😆 lovely part.

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