agar tum kaho...sujal kashish - Page 4

third part........agar tum kaho....

recap:....sujal and akshat discuss sujal's dream girl...while another girl is introduced...
....now agaye...

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India.....

the girl enters the kitchen...

larki:....ramu kaka...bauji uth gaye?
kaka:...haan betiya....woh to subah subah walk peh chale gaye.....maaji mandir mein hain...
larki:..(smiles)...theek hai....
kaka:.....(puts the bartan on a side)....par choti betiya ka kuch karo....abhi tak ghore bech kar
so rahi hai....na jane is mein yeh adaat kahan se ayi....aj phir der se jayegi college...aur dante gi humein....(chir k bule)
larki:....(smiles at him).....nahi dante gi kaka.....mein uthati hon usse...(she turns around)....
kaka:..haan ek reh se k tum hi ho jis ki woh baat manti hai....( he mumbles.....the girl smiles all the way to choti betiya's room)...lolx

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kamra bikhra para tha..kahin books ..kahin kapre..kahin jute....to kahin....Charu...hehe....charu choti betiya hai....(as my intelligent readers might have guessed hehehe)

the girl goes near charu aur uske sar peh haath phirti hai.....charu nend mein karwat leti hai....

larki:;...charu.....uth jao tumhe der ho jayegi....
charu:....hmmmm....
larki:....mama bhi mandir se ho ayi hain....
charu:...achaaaa.....(she tilts on the other side....)
larki:.....(thaak ke jaldhi se boli)....ARAY BAUJI AAPP??
charu:..(instantly jumped from her bed)....BBBBAAAUU BAAAUJI...kahan.....??
the girl cracked up laughing......bus yehi ek formula kaam ata hai.....ab jaldhi uth ja warna sach much mein bauji ajayenge

charu:..(rubs her eyes)...kya dii.....ap bhi na....abhi to soyi thi....
larki:..teri yeh roz roz late sone ki adaat muje bilkul nahi pasand.....( lolx..)...late soti ho aur..late uthti ho...aur...
charu:..bus bus dii....samaj agayi.....ab ap jayen mein ati hon....
larki:...(shakes her head and gets up from the bed....when charu grabs her hand...hehehe...yeh charu cum sujal lag raha hai hehehehe)

charu comes and hugs her...:...luv u dii....
larki:..(hugs her back)..chalo ab tayar ho jao....

they were about to move to their respective destinations when an oldly male..voive echoed in the house...

voice:...KAAASSSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISHHH.........

charu and the girl looked at each other....
charu:..oh shiit....bauji agaye...
larki smiles
charu:...aj to mein gayi di.....plz ap sambhal lena....plz...
larki:...sambhalongi....(she leaves)....

(charu is played by surveen chawla)
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so the voice was of bauji...lolx....(anupam kher...)...he had just entered the house...

the girl comes and takes his ashirward.....
bauji:..jeeti raho....kashish.....
the girl smiles....(as if u guys didnt know who she was hahahaha..khair)...

bauji:..yeh cahru nazar nahi arahi....
veena:..(comes out of the mandir with the parsad..gives it to bauji)....so rahi hogi ab tak....
kashish takes her blessing
kashish:...mama...woh to kab ki uth gayi hai......

kaka puts the morning coffee on the table and glances at kashish....

kashish:....raat ko college ka kaam karte karte der ho gayi thi....
bauji and veena listen to her....
kashish:....aj kal ki parhai bhi to kitni tough hai.......ab mehnat nahi
karegi to kya karegi.....(she gives them the coffee)

bauji:..(ek haath se coffee lete hain aur dosre haath se ek form kashish ko dete hain)

kashish:..yeh kya hai bauji..??
bauji:..khol k paro....
kashish opens the letter......shez shocked.....embarrassed....:...wowwoh...woh...(uski zaban larkharati hai)

itni hi der mein upar se charu chehakti hwui neeche ati hai....she knew kashish ne sab sambhal liya hoga...

charu:...goood morning everyonee...
all of them stared at her.....
charu:...(comes near kashish as she knows something is wrong...)....kya huwa di?
kashish hands her the letter.....charu goes through it...

bauji:...kuch khaas nahi huwa charu.......bus is saal tum phir fail hui ho....(he picks up his stick
and walks off in anger.....veena is quiet...bauji k agaye woh kya bule....she goes away too where bauji was...

while charu has tears in her eyes and looks helplessly at kashish................

.............................ok here was the next part.....yahan k sare characters ka
intro ho gaya............now lets see how will sujal and kashish meet up/..lolx...tc and commentofy...plshh

hey great part
maza aa giya charu fail huwi na es liye 😆 😆 😃

hey cool part continue soon warna tapkadoongi

farah dear very very gooddd.. like always me tho fulltoo love ur fanfics..keep up the good work... a very damn nice..different..intresting..story concept... tooooooooooo coolllllllllllllllllllllllll.. 👏
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me will be waiting for the next part eagerly.... 😃

GR8,AWESOME,MINDBLASTING,TERRIFIC,AMAZING

dont have any more words

THE PART WAS JUST TOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD i loed it and especially the part where kashish says tht baujii app and charu gets up with a jerkk i loved it i was nearly laughing my head offf 😆 😆 but now its baq on its place 😆 ABH SUJAL AND KASHISH KI MULAQAAAT JALDI SEY KARWA DOO ME WAITING for tht...... 😳


CONTINUE SOOON



Saraa

Awesome...yeh Charru to tumhari tarah nalaik hai...lolz..i mean meri tarah..continue soon!!!!!!

farah jii
great going
👏
likin charu...........1 request.........if not aplicable then not need to worry.........likin phir bhi.......app plz mehek ko lay aoo na charu ki jagha.........i love mehek
newaz..........kashish is so sweet
hope k kashish ki meeting jaldi hoo
luv ya
😳
lol
ana

fourth part..........agar tum kaho...

recap:..intro of bauji..veena..charu ..kashish and ramu kaka hhehehe....charu has failed in her college...

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charu:...di yeh...
kashish:...hadh hoti hai charu....har baat ki hadh hoti hai....aj tumhari waja se mein ne jhoot bola...har bar tumhari waja se jhooth bola
yeh soch keh k shayad is bar tum samaj jao...ab ki bar sudhar jaogi.....par har bar tumne muje galat sabit kiya hai..(she turns awaY)
charu:..di plz....agar ap nahi samjho gi to kaun samjhe ga.....(her eyes are filled with tears.....kashish looks at her.....and realizes what
charu meant.....kashish ki ankhein bhar ati hain.......she quickly wipes her tears....jaise kisi karwai yaad ko mitana chahti ho)

kashish:..(rests her hand on her face)...beeti baaton ko bhula do.....jo rishte baqi hain kum se kum unki taraf to apna farz to nibhao.....(pauses)..mein bauji se baat karti hon...
(she turns around to leave when charu speaks)
charu:..ap bhula payi hain??....(a tear rolled down her eye)
kashish is baat par stops....couldnt take a step forward....
charu:...bhulana itna ahsaan hota...to kab ka bhula chuki hoti di....(she wipes her tears and runs out of the house)
kashish:...(kashish apne saath pari hui ek family photo ko uthati hai....and touches it....)....sahi kehti ho....yaadein kabhie saath nahi chorti...(her tears rolled down.. )

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knock knock...kashish peeks into the room...
veena signals her to come in...
kashish:..aheem..(clears her throat)
bauji looks at her....he was marching across the room
kashish:..bauji woh...
bauji:...tum uski khatir jhoot bolti rahi...
kashish apni nazrein jhuka leti hai....
bauji:...mein ne tumse yeh umeed nahi ki thi kashish....
veena:..ab is mein kashish ka kya dosh....(she inetrruptes)
bauji gives her a stare....
kashish:...woh choti hai.....maaf kar deejiye na...
bauji:..choti hai is ka matlab jo dil mein aye kare.....is ghar ki nak kat wati phire..
kashish:...nak to tab kat ti jab woh fail na hoti......is ghar ki parampara tut jati....(she giggles)
bauji looks at her....
kashish:...bauji....ap bhi to ek bar....(giggles)...
bauji:...(coughs)..woh.....meri baat aur thi.....
kashish:..yeh kya baat hui...??..waise bhi is ghar mein sab k sab ek bar fail zarur huwe hain....to phir
charu peh itna ghusa kis baat ka....
bauji:....mein do bar fail huwa tha....(he touches his moustache)
...veena and kashish laugh at him....

veena:...(adds)....jab yash pehli baar fail......(veena k yeh kehte hi kamre mein khamoshi cha jati hai...veena bhi chup ho jati hai...)
.......after a while....
veena:...mein charu ko dekh k ati ho...
kashish:..mama woh college chali gayi hai....
bauji was still quiet...
kashish:...umm..mein bhi chalti hon....(she was about to step outside when bauji calls her)
bauji:..kashish..
kashish:..jeee..
bauji:..mere zehan se nikal gaya....aj purab ka beta araha hai.......america se...
tum ja ke usse airport se le ana....
kashish:...purab?
bauji:...mera doost....woh charu ko apni bahu banana chahte hain...larka aaj araha hai...
kashish:..(smiles)...par bauji...charu ne mana kar diya to?
bauji:...woh mana nahi karegi.....yeh mera faisla hai....
veena and kashish exchange a glance...

bauji:..flight land hone wali hogi.....kashish tum ja k le ana...khaas mehmaan hai woh....
kashish:..naam kya bataya apne?
bauji:...larke ka naam.....kya bataya tha usne?....haan...akaash...
kashish:...theek hai...mein chalti hon..........

.............idhar kashish airport ki taraf nikli to udhar sujal ka jahaz land huwa....wah je wah what a coincidence hehehe

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Aiport.....do teen flights saath land hui thi....bahut rush tha....kashish was waiting in the arrivals...

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akshat:..agaya tera india..
sujal:..( yawns and stretches his arm...breathes in the air...)
akshat:...abay haath sambhal k.....kahin ate hi ghari ka nuksaan na uthana pare...
sujal laughs....:..tu nahi samjhe ga....apne mulk ane ki khushi kya hoti hai...jazbaat kya hota hain...
akshat:..haan haan...ek to hi samaj dar bacha hai....(someone pushes akshat...rush tha na)...
akshat:...ek to log yahan dekh k kyun nahi chal sakte....
sujal laughs at him....
akshat:..kabhie idhar se ate hain..kabhie udhar se ate hain....(he is pointing in all directions...and looking around..)....aur abhi tak jo humein lene aye the
woh kyun nahi aye??
sujal:...tu chup ho ga to mein dhundu ga unhe...
akshat:...kyun....tere paas apni ankhein nahi hain....
sujal..shut up!...
akshat laughs....and suddenly stops when he sees someone...
akshat:..suujal...woh dekh...
sujal:..agaye??
akshat:..agaye nahi...agayii.....woh larki......(he points at none other than kashish hehehe....sare crowd mein she was glittering like a star
hehehe..make up ki waja se nahi....bus uski khoobsuriti kuch aisi thi.....sujal ki nazar us peh pari....and the world just stopped for him.....aisi larki to woh sirf apne
khayalon mein dekhta tha......aj woh zameen peh kaise utar ayi........??....)..back ground score.....

hmmm hmmmm hmmmm hmmmm hmmmm hmmmmm hm hmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...(thoda sa pyaar huwa hai heheh)

akshat:...india itna bhi bura nahi hai...(laughs...he looks at sujal whose eyes were glued on kashish...)
akshat:...ab tuje kya huwa??
sujal didnt respond....
akshat k shaitani dimag mein idea ata hai....he hits sujal on his shoulder
sujal:..kya hai??..
akshat:..kidhar khoya khoya haiii??..(teases him)
sujal:...baqwaas na karo.....mein to bus yunhi...
akshat:..haan haan yunhiii.....chal na...yunhiii us k paas chalein
sujal:...kis k pass?
akshat:..wohiiii....(winks)....yunhiii wali...
sujal:...tu pagal ho gaya hai kya....
akshat:..chal na sujal .....baat karte hain usse...
sujal:..muje nahi ana...
akshat:...dar gaya....tu larki se dar gaya....
sujal:...pata nahi kaun hai woh....muje koi interest nahi hai....
akshat:..(smiles)..chal na aa....mein ja raha hon....(he begins to walk)
sujal:..akshat ruk....(pauses and picks up his lugage)...mein bhi araha ho
akshat smiles.....:...interest....ting....(he laughs and sujal feels embarrassed)

.........they both walk towards kashish......who was looking for bauji k dost ka beta...hehehe

thanx everyyoooneee.....ana yara...woh charu specail purpose k liye rakhi gayi hai hehehe..luv ya all...

chaa gayi....matlab CHAA GAYi!!! rocking...mujhe laga yeh purab ka beta Sujal hoga...shukar hai woh nahi...main bataon aggya kia hoga..i think yeh kashish sujal ko purab ka beta..i eman akshaat ko akaash samajh ker gahr leuy jayegi..then akshat charru n sujal kashish...lolz 👏 good work!!!!

👏 achi part hai ab jaldise cont karo warna tapka doongi samji