agar tum kaho...sujal kashish - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
Charu kaunse khaas purpose k liye rakhii gayee hai... uhu uhu.. lolz...

😉 😉

Fantastic....
yaaar... tumharrii sab ff's ki tarah.. yeh bhi Classic hai... each one has its own taste... 😛 😛

Maza agayaa...
I wonder wht will Akshat and Sujal do ..when they will meet Kashish... hehehe...
And glad to know tht Charu is a failure.. hehhe 😃 😃

Continue sooooooon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
Farrah jani gr8 parts yar 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
😆 dafa ho jaooo kiran hehehee....kahani pata thi to apne pait mein rakho na hehehehehe 😆 ..chal yaar thanx...hehehehe
hey dhamki thank u karun gi continue hehehehehe
chalo sara gald you liked it hehehe 😆 😆 😳 .....haan mulaqat achi hogi hehehe
rs jani...me gald u liked it...no thanx for commenting 😉 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
hey farah jiii
great part jiiii

kia baat hai

👏

is sujal a flirt 😉 or akshat ki company main ho gaya hai 😆

ok jii...............charu name agar purposely hai than ok

😳

is it akaash or akshat................kahin uncle ji larkay ka naam tau nahin bhool gaye 😆

lolz

great part jiii
luv it

lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
OMG!...Im finding out about this...You started a new fan-fic...yessss.....Your last fan-fic was greaaaaaaaaaaaaattt!!!...Cant wait too read this fan-fic.......Continue Soooooooooooooon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
farah this was wonderful. Lovely part. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
MINDBLASTING,TERRIFIC,AMAZING,AWESOME AND GR8 work dont ave anything else to say except for saying tht THE PART WAS AMAZING and CONTINUE SOOOON




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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
nice story farah....jus read da whole thingy now.....its really gud......i hope akshat is purab's son.....lol.....keep it up n update soon.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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agar tum kaho...

recap:...kashish goes to the airport....sujal and akshat spot her there.....

.......

kashish was still looking for the guest...while akshat and sujal were coming towards her...
sujal a bit nervous....

sujal:..akshat..yahan ki larkiyan bari tez hoti hain...
akshat:...tu bus ruk.....aur dekh mein chakkar chalata hon
sujal:...agar pitta na to meri madat na mangna...
akshat:...tune ki hai kabhie meri madat....

baat karte karte dono kashish k kafi nazdeek ajate hain.....achanak hawa chalti hai....aur kashish ka dupatte k pallu ur k sujal k upara ata hai....and it covers his face.......kashish tires to get hold of it..but too late...

(hmmm hmmm pyaar huwa haii.....hmmmm hmmmm hai baqiii)

.....sujal already has his hand
on her dupatta......and slowly brings it down...smelling its fragrance and feeling kashish around him.....

kashish just observes him......and feels embarrassed...

kashish:...woh..(looks at sujal)
akshat:..oh!..(looks at sujal)
sujal:...um....(holds the dupatta)
kashish:..mera...(...brings her hand forward)
akshat:...inkaaa....(smiles mischieviously and puts a hand on sujal's shoulder)
sujal:...aaapka.....(smiles at kashish....dreamingly)

akshat burst into laughter at seeing sujal get attracted towards kashish ehehehe...
kashish jaldhi se agaye ati hai and grabs her pallu...
sujal sharminda hota hai hehehe

akshat:....umm..sorry ma'am woh hum kisi ko dhund rahe the...
kashish fixes her hair:...its ok....mein bhi kisi ko dhund rahi thi....(she looks at sujal)
sujal:..kis ko...(he adds)
kashish:..jeeE?
akshat:..jeee...woh....kuch nahi.....(whispers in sujal's ear)....mein nahi par tu muje zarur
pitwaye ga....ab chup reh!!

akshat:...by the way....hum yahan naye hain....(kashish was ingnoring them lolx)
akshat:..yeh hai tera india ...log lift hi nahi karate......mein ne mana kiya tha dad ko....yahan ki larkiyan naa...(he looks away)
kashish k kaan khare hote hain...:....aaap??
sujal:...mein??
kashish:....um...aaak
akshat suddenly turns around...:..akshat!...par apko kaise??...(confused)
kashish:..akshat?...from america??
sujal:..na....
akshat (cuts in)....right...akshat from america....
kashish looks at him for a moment suspiciously....while sujal and akshat exchange a glance....

kashish:...ap purab uncle k bete??
sujal:. puraaab??...(looks at akshat)
kashish gives him a wierd look

akshat:.(to sujal)..mere dad ka naam lete sharam nahi ati tumhe...(mock anger)
kashish:...oo..i am soo sorry mein ne ap logon ko pehchana nahi...asal mein bauji ne to koi aur naam bataya tha.....akaash!!
sujal:..hum pyaar se isse akaash kehte hain....(smiles)

akshat smiles...:...aur aap?
kashish:...mein...kashish....
sujal:..kaaasshiiish.....(achanak hawa phir chalti hai hehehehe.....par is bar kashish apna dupata tham leti hai..sujal smiles at her)

kashish:..(smiles)...waise to charu ane wali thi...
akshat:..charu?
kashish:...charu...ussi ko dekhne ayen hain na ap...ya safar mein bhool gaye..(she giggles...sujal and akshat giggle too lolx)
kashish;..khair..ap log thaak gaye honge....
akshat:..bahuuut
kashish:..to chalein
sujal:.kidhar?...(confused)
kashish:..ghar...
akshat and sujal ek saath:....ghaarr
kashish:..(smiles)..haan...bauji wait kar rahe honge ap logon ka...

akshat and sujal look at each other again....scared:..(together)...BBBAUUJI!!!!
kashish:..haan bauji...
akshat:..nahi..um...hum...phir kabhie
kashish:..aray....ap log ghabra kyun rahe hain....chaleiye...gari bhi agayi hai...(she turns around)

sujal:... bol na...hum woh nahi hain...
akshat:..hum woh nahi hain...
sujal:..muje nahi ....usse bol..
akshat:....tu kyun tension le raha hai
sujal:..kyunke tu tension de raha hai
akshat:...sujal...kuch nahi hoga....ao zara hum bhi to dekhein hum kis charu ko dekhne ayen hain
sujal:.. mein nahi araha
akshat:...(smiles)....apki..."yuuunnhiii" ne apko itne pyaar se bulaya hai..
sujal:..(smiles)....teri in harkaton se mein tang agaya hon.....kahin bauji ne...
akshat:..wah..sahi ja rahe ho beta...woh tere nahi......kashish k bauji hain....
sujal:..haan wohi...(smiles)
akshat:...dekh humein lene to koi aya nahi.....aur jinhe yeh lene ayi thi woh bhi nahi aye....shayad apni kismat mein yeh likha hai
...ab tu mera sar na kha....woh wait kar rahi hai....(winks at sujal......)

.........sujal and akshat both walk towards the car....and now their heading to....their destination..

lolx....thank u guys hehehe....commentofy p 😃 lzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
YAY!!!! i am the first one to comment!!!


FARAH DII too gooood it was mindblasting part uffff kiran ney pehley hi bata diya tha THANKX KIRAN 😆 i like the convo btw sujal and akshat it was just toooooo goood i was laughing on the YUNHIII part 😆


CONTINUE SOOOON



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