Saffidi...my mind is only doing this right now...š
First of all... there are so many things I want to say that I am not sure if I can put all of it together... loool! so I made a quick list of the topics I wanted to talk about ...
kaustuki the ending of chapter nine
sorry
rd knows
sanyu loving rd more
the challenge and predictions
~Yaar... chapter 9 is fresh in my mind so I am going to start with it. I love ya sooo much! SO SO SO MUCH. You made Kaustu realize that this challenge is dumb. And that you don't want anyone hurt. That is perfect. I just want to thank you that you made the characters realize the severity of the situation. And playing with feelings is a big no no. haha!
One thing about your works is that there is always a sense of realism. Sorry yaar... I didn't mean to make it sound that I was too serious about it. Lol. I finally saw that reply to my review. Lol, I was frustrated with Sanyu because I didn't think "she'd stoop low to do with a friends with benefits situation"... and I am sooo glad that you put in that chapter where Sanyu is like "this isn't me." I can't explain how happy I was. like, I mean I am glad you put in these topics in your writing because it's topics that should be discussed and weighted morally. Haha, I guess I am sounding like an old aunty. But it's true. And knowing Sandhir... they aren't just that type. So thank you so much for that. It's amazing...
~Sorry... I am sorry yaar. I feel like a jerk. haha! I haven't been able to review in the longest time... and every time I said that I will get it done... I always fell asleep. Yaar... I have just been extremely busy. So yeah. I am extremely sorry for that. I know you well enough to be like "don't be sorry" and probably remind me of the maine pyar kiya dialogue.. dosti mein no sorry no thank you... but yaar. Mujhe aacha lagta hai.. .I like having a clean slate in my mind that I have apologized about things that I felt bad about. haha!
~At this point... you've made a lot of subtle hints that RD knows. And I wouldn't be surprised if he did because he's a prodigy after all. and I wouldn't be surprised if you make him not know because I said that he'll know.š I was joking... okay, Jokes apart...and I think he just gets her so well that he can read her mind through her expressions. I think he understand that she only feels lust for him. But... the fact that he knew that she was trying to make him in a challenge... will make him go along with it. the rest of this is in the last topic under my predictions.
~He's already succeeded in making her fall for him. And at this point... she's fell for him hard. I love you so much again for making her say that she isn't going to leave him... because like they have had so much physical intimacy that if they aren't together its crazy... (crazy.. lol. I know they'd be together anyways because it's a Sandhir ff afterall... but that's not the point yaar that I am trying to make hehe) I am so glad that you put this last chapter because it was definitely needed. For me as the reader... I needed some kinds of confirmation that says "heyyy! sanyu loves RD" ... and this chapter did just that. She felt bad when she thought of him in pain. She felt bad when he didn't acknowledge them as a couple... she felt bad when he didn't talk to her... she felt bad thinking that he'd be heartbroken. there were more signs now that I think about it... you just weaved it in so well that I totally skipped over it... but yes. I am so happy that now I know Sanyu loves RD loads... it just makes me REALLY happy.
~AHH! This challenge... kya yaar. lol. I shouldn't make it too complicated... but yaar. I can't help it when I get too involved in it.. haha! But this challenge is both going to make them heartbroken and together. Obvio! because it's not the end if they aren't together! heheh! But my predictions... hmm. I have this strong feeling that RD knows... here's my analysis of RD's situation...
LOL. He knows that she was upto something. And at night... he heard about her challenge about making him fall for her... and at that time... he thought of making her fall for him... and along the way... he just can't help but falling for her and being concerned for her... because half of the time... the emotions that Sanyu (and even he himself) feel are true... and real. And so... he's knows that her feelings aren't genuine. But with Sanyu... this last chapter has confirmed that she wants them to have something... and that she isn't going to leave him... now. She says that she'll complete the challenge... but that's because she wants a relationship for herself. So now... her priority isn't about the challenge... it's about making RD love her... and be sure about her... the challenge is just there for the sake of being there... holding no clout over Sanyu now... and RD... hmm.. it's going to be interesting... very interesting𤣠(GOSH! EVERY PUN I USE HAS TO DO WITH REFERENCES TO OTHER CRAP.. in this case.. talking about the SH characters itself) ... interesting to see how he'll react. Will he reveal what he knows... will Sanyu tell him the truth... after knowing the truth, how will RD react... are they going to be the stubborn people that they are and not confess until everything goes out of hand... hahaha! (lol. those questions are for the silent readers that are reading my review so their mind starts boggling... lol. I don't want to know those answers.. I love my surprises)
~wow. this is officially my longest review that I have ever written... but yet again... it's over the 9 chapters that I (ashamed) haven't been able to review properly... I can't believe I didn't get to review this right away... ahhh! but whatevs... I hope this OFFICIAL longest review makes you all happy... btw.. I still haven't got to everyyything that's running in my mind. but. I think I will probably hit the maximum limit soon. So I will leave!
Well... you're not up. I tried getting a hold of you... but ... hmm... I don't know. I guess... I will post this.. here ya go. my longest review. love ya!
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