Originally posted by: kri1
Saffidi...
my mind is only doing this right now...👏
First of all... there are so many things I want to say that I am not sure if I can put all of it together... loool! so I made a quick list of the topics I wanted to talk about ...
kaustuki the ending of chapter nine
sorry
rd knows
sanyu loving rd more
the challenge and predictions
~Yaar... chapter 9 is fresh in my mind so I am going to start with it. I love ya sooo much! SO SO SO MUCH. You made Kaustu realize that this challenge is dumb. And that you don't want anyone hurt. That is perfect. I just want to thank you that you made the characters realize the severity of the situation. And playing with feelings is a big no no. haha!
One thing about your works is that there is always a sense of realism. Sorry yaar... I didn't mean to make it sound that I was too serious about it. Lol. I finally saw that reply to my review. Lol, I was frustrated with Sanyu because I didn't think "she'd stoop low to do with a friends with benefits situation"... and I am sooo glad that you put in that chapter where Sanyu is like "this isn't me." I can't explain how happy I was. like, I mean I am glad you put in these topics in your writing because it's topics that should be discussed and weighted morally. Haha, I guess I am sounding like an old aunty. But it's true. And knowing Sandhir... they aren't just that type. So thank you so much for that. It's amazing...
~Sorry... I am sorry yaar. I feel like a jerk. haha! I haven't been able to review in the longest time... and every time I said that I will get it done... I always fell asleep. Yaar... I have just been extremely busy. So yeah. I am extremely sorry for that. I know you well enough to be like "don't be sorry" and probably remind me of the maine pyar kiya dialogue.. dosti mein no sorry no thank you... but yaar. Mujhe aacha lagta hai.. .I like having a clean slate in my mind that I have apologized about things that I felt bad about. haha!
~At this point... you've made a lot of subtle hints that RD knows. And I wouldn't be surprised if he did because he's a prodigy after all. and I wouldn't be surprised if you make him not know because I said that he'll know.😆 I was joking... okay, Jokes apart...and I think he just gets her so well that he can read her mind through her expressions. I think he understand that she only feels lust for him. But... the fact that he knew that she was trying to make him in a challenge... will make him go along with it. the rest of this is in the last topic under my predictions.
~He's already succeeded in making her fall for him. And at this point... she's fell for him hard. I love you so much again for making her say that she isn't going to leave him... because like they have had so much physical intimacy that if they aren't together its crazy... (crazy.. lol. I know they'd be together anyways because it's a Sandhir ff afterall... but that's not the point yaar that I am trying to make hehe) I am so glad that you put this last chapter because it was definitely needed. For me as the reader... I needed some kinds of confirmation that says "heyyy! sanyu loves RD" ... and this chapter did just that. She felt bad when she thought of him in pain. She felt bad when he didn't acknowledge them as a couple... she felt bad when he didn't talk to her... she felt bad thinking that he'd be heartbroken. there were more signs now that I think about it... you just weaved it in so well that I totally skipped over it... but yes. I am so happy that now I know Sanyu loves RD loads... it just makes me REALLY happy.
~AHH! This challenge... kya yaar. lol. I shouldn't make it too complicated... but yaar. I can't help it when I get too involved in it.. haha! But this challenge is both going to make them heartbroken and together. Obvio! because it's not the end if they aren't together! heheh! But my predictions... hmm. I have this strong feeling that RD knows... here's my analysis of RD's situation...
LOL. He knows that she was upto something. And at night... he heard about her challenge about making him fall for her... and at that time... he thought of making her fall for him... and along the way... he just can't help but falling for her and being concerned for her... because half of the time... the emotions that Sanyu (and even he himself) feel are true... and real. And so... he's knows that her feelings aren't genuine. But with Sanyu... this last chapter has confirmed that she wants them to have something... and that she isn't going to leave him... now. She says that she'll complete the challenge... but that's because she wants a relationship for herself. So now... her priority isn't about the challenge... it's about making RD love her... and be sure about her... the challenge is just there for the sake of being there... holding no clout over Sanyu now... and RD... hmm.. it's going to be interesting... very interesting🤣 (GOSH! EVERY PUN I USE HAS TO DO WITH REFERENCES TO OTHER CRAP.. in this case.. talking about the SH characters itself) ... interesting to see how he'll react. Will he reveal what he knows... will Sanyu tell him the truth... after knowing the truth, how will RD react... are they going to be the stubborn people that they are and not confess until everything goes out of hand... hahaha! (lol. those questions are for the silent readers that are reading my review so their mind starts boggling... lol. I don't want to know those answers.. I love my surprises)
~wow. this is officially my longest review that I have ever written... but yet again... it's over the 9 chapters that I (ashamed) haven't been able to review properly... I can't believe I didn't get to review this right away... ahhh! but whatevs... I hope this OFFICIAL longest review makes you all happy... btw.. I still haven't got to everyyything that's running in my mind. but. I think I will probably hit the maximum limit soon. So I will leave!
Well... you're not up. I tried getting a hold of you... but ... hmm... I don't know. I guess... I will post this.. here ya go. my longest review. love ya!
Oh man Kri. I don't even know how I deserve such a long, beautiful, amazing, fabulous, heart-touching review from you. You are seriously fabulous. I don't know how much more I can praise you for being an amazing reviewer! You truly make my work seem valuable! I love you so much!
Kaustuki isn't heartless... I didn't ever think she was. In fact, I always thought that Sanyukta was more insensitive and inconsiderate than her. Kaustuki is a loyal supporter of Sanyu, but Sanyu initiates all the humiliating plans in the show. Just like that, Kaustuki is going to continue to support Sanyu throughout the challenge and help her when she needs it, but she won't necessarily think what Sanyu is doing is right. I tried to keep the characterization consistent here. She wants Sanyu to drop the challenge, because she realizes that this is a big deal... at first she was like, yeah right... RD won't fall for you Sanyu, because it seemed impossible. But now that it's actually happening, she is feeling guilty about challenging her in the first place. This is from Sanyu's point of view, so I can't go into Kaustuki's inner turmoil here (nor Randhir's for that matter =(). I like to keep my fics as realistic as I can... I mean sometimes I do like to take creative liberty (the excessive making out for example), but in the end, there are repercussions with everything I do... I make them genuinely have to pay for mistakes they make. So now since Sanyu and RD are making out... a lot, they're going to be even more attached with each other (obviously, since Sanyu doesn't go around making out everyone, and neither does RD), and then they'll eventually have to pay for that. About whether what Sanyu-RD is doing, is morally correct or not, I don't want to get into that, because everyone's perspectives differ on that matter, but the feelings and consequences that come associated with it for characters like them will be shown in future updates...
Don't apologize. I genuinely didn't want you to review so much because I thought you would over-exert yourself, but you managed to do it and that too, with amazing dedication and time. I love you for that! You are truly brilliant! But from now on, if you miss an update (or 5), just telling me you read it and liked it will mean a lot to me too... I just don't want you to feel stressed out because of all this reviewing, when it should be something you do for fun. So only do it if you like it! And yes, I told you to not apologize, because you shouldn't be apologizing! -_-
Hahaha Kri, I wouldn't make him not know just because people think he knows if I was planning to make him know this whole time. He is a genius, you are right, but I can't give that part away... I am so bad at hiding my plots and twists that I need to stop talking now. >.> But I love reading speculations, so never stop speculating!
If he was intentionally trying to make her fall for him, then yes he succeeded... but regardless, Sanyu has fallen for him and now that she has, there is going to be no doubt that heartbreak is on the cards. Love doesn't come without heartbreak... at least not in Saffi's writing world! She has decided already that she feels something for him and she doesn't want to leave him, but circumstances won't always favour our desires. She does love him a lot... and here's a hint (secret... not so secret because this is a public forum), but he loves her too. Now whether these two egoistic kids recognize and understand their feelings is another story.
Haha there is still some time to go before the heartbreak phase, so just enjoy it until then! Don't worry, at the very end, everything will be okay... *cough I am planning to write a sequel cough*. By the way, you analyze and understand my work really well... you truly know what my characters are like. Yeah, she's going to continue, because according to her, RD likes her, but she wants to make him fall fast so they can stay together... why prolong it if it can be done in 7 days you know? Wow, you're really involved in this fic! I hope everything that happens I do justice to! I hope all of your questions get answered soon, because I hate leaving loose ends. As of now, Sanyu and RD are crazy about each other... they may/may not have recognized their feelings for the other, and the 7 day challenge still exists from Sanyu's side in order for her to make sure that RD is there to stay with her. Not because she wants to hurt him or prove him wrong anymore. According to her, she still doesn't love him so she doesn't give a damn if he's heartbroken, but her own heart breaks at the thought... sooo she will come to that realization soon too.
I am very deeply touched by this review Kri! You are such a dedicated reviewer that I can't praise you enough for that. You are commendable... an inspiration, someone I look up to. Now this is dedication man! Thank you so much for taking the time to review like this, despite your busy schedule. *Pinches self* You are not a figment of my imagination, you are real... wow this world feels complete now! <3 I love you! Thank you once again. Thank you * infinity. I love you! <3
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