#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

it's that confusing feeling again when you read a awesome story and feel great and then u realize it has come to an end and are sad...that was a superb ending though...the patents, khushi, a very very good Shyam jha😊 all of it was beautifully written...really loved reading this story and kudos to all the writes that contributed in taking the readers into the jungle

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vibha92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

beautiful chapter!!...beautiful ending!!...

loved it!!...

thnx for d pm ...:)

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Rayolight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Awesome story! Feel bad that it has ended and that I don't have to look forward to new updates any more...will truly miss it!

Coming back to the chapter...beautifully written! Enjoyed the fold out of all the people involved! Descriptions were sooo real..loved it!

I really really hope you all get together and write more stuff like this! Pretty please?

Epilogue? 😉

Cheers!

Rayolight

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smric

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Oh my god its end already?? But it had been a heartening journey with this arnav and khushi.

What a chapter sandhya..simply amazing. Happy that arnav recovered. N finally the cold war between father-son came to an end. I loved arnav's mother. I was eager to know what could have been in his wallet.(had clue that it must be a photo but still reading about it makes it more real)

Arnav's confession was emotional. Never thought that arnav singh raizada (doesnt matter even if its just a fictional character) can be this emotionally revealing of what he felt. Its different. N finally they are together in this story.

You have unique way to describe everything. The para where you said about doctors n nurses n patients n attenders..i realised you make these mundane things also intresting in your stories.

Lastly i would like to say thank you for writing this story..as well to other writers.

Hope you will write soon something for us. 😊

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Thanks for this ,fabulous & amazing journey of The Last Place On Earth

Beautifully well written by wonderful writer

Really enjoyed reading it & looking forward to read next collab

Merci beaucoup Sandya.😉

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suji5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

finally every thing is fine and Arnav's father accepted him
shyam was a good person and officer...
and Arnav confessed to khushi..

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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Absolutely stunning finale!!!
Loved it...
His mom ws actually cool...shyam ws definitely a surprise!!!
Would there be an epilogue???? Nonetheless u'v done amazing job...

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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#628

All is well that ends well is what I have to say about this. They will appreciate being together so much more now that they have worked for it. The family comes full circle as well with the dad being proud of the son's line of work and a simply amazing mother who was caught in between her son's happiness and loyalty to her husband. Shyam ain't no saint but glad he was not involved in this scheme. Why did the man eater not eat the evil man Aman? I guess he was just brain washed by the money hungry organization so maybe not so evil after all. I would love to see an epilogue ladies.