#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

awesome chap loved it to the core...loved arnav parents here...loved khushi and arnav's mom interaction...loved shyam and arnav convo...last but not the least arnav khushi talks :)...over all it was an excellent experience ,loved the story loads...thank u loads all of u for this great journey :),cheers

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sara

@tdtd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

loved it 😊it was a wonderful story👏

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Such a wonderful story. Sandhya, the ending was very beautifully written. You have covered each and every point. From the beginning itself I found this story very interesting. All of you have done superb job...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

That was excellent update...

I too thought the same ki Shyam also part of Aman's plan but he is pure and liked the way you showed Shyam is a great man with flaws...

True, Kushi's mom is really cool and thank god she didnt behave like a typical mom...

Wonderful ending...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

awesome update..!!!!!!1

beautiful ending..!!!!!

love everything.. khushi and arnav;s mom talk.. shyam and aranv's convo..!!!!!
arnav's parents are proud of him..!!!!!

arshi they are best... lovely part..!!!!!

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Super update. And awesome ending.

Covering all the loose ends.

You guys made Shyam a better guy who accepts his flaws and at the same time high on work ethics.

Aranavs parents entered in this update, with her mother bringing the pandora box of Arnav's love for Khushi as his hidden treasure. His father came with an acceptance of his sons career choice and left with a proud chest for his son.

As for Khushi and Arnav, finally the talk happened, the reason relaid and heard and confessions of how much they loved, love and meant, mean to each other. Arshi together for ever.

This was a well written story with all the authors did an awesome job. Loved each update.

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

lovely update!!

all fall in place..

Arnav and his parents are now on Arnav's side..

Arnav and shyam are going to work together all mu are clear

Arshi are together forever👏

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

that was a awesome update..I really loved reading this story from the start to the end...the story was beautifully written...I am so glad that Arnav and Khushi are together...Arnav's interaction with his parents was very well portrayed..So Shyam was not the bad guy..nice twist to the tale...Arnav and Khushi's scenes were very heartwarming and way too adorable...superb, fantastic, marvelous work..will miss this story loads...job well done...👍🏼

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Loved the update Sandhya! Loved how Arnav and Khushi just fell into place in each other's life. Loved how Khushi realized in the face of all the danger that is was not worth holding on to the past. And Arnav's mom is indeed cool!

The story was incredibly well written and although I am sad that it ended, but I am glad that you all ended at the right time without dragging it. All of you have done a great job! 👏

But can we at least get an epilogue, with a glimpse of Masai Mara 😉