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bob55

@bob55

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Sounds so good!!! Update soon!

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Manreet ... a new story. And as usual it is brilliant😃
Arnav ... a well educated, foreign returned boy who looks at his motherland with the eyes of a Britisher ... finds India lacking in manners and opportunities. And a father who seems to be disappointed in his only son's attitude and lack of understanding for the old generation. Oh the agony of a generation gap😆
Shyam, in any form, is as vile as ever .. hehe
Now I wait to see sparks flying, Arnav drowning himself in those innocent hazels😉

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

That's the good one!! I never thought u could write such type story mean to say kotha n all!! But u did it well!
As u said it's their love story so I'm hoping Arshi will be together n khushi will be out from this hell!
I just wish the same fate for thousands of innocents who r actually suffering there!!

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

A very intriguing prologue, love within despair comes to mind, Arnav needs soothing and Khushi needs rescuing ... Look forward to more. Well done for captivating your readers !!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Interesting .. looking forward to the next part

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow... interesting concept... can't wait to read the rest 😊

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This aldy sounds like a beautiful story, Mannoji!! I cannot wait!!!

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jg12

@jg12

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

New story - looking forward to it . I am hoping that inspite of the situation which Khushi is in, it will not be a dark story . But will read and enjoy however you decide to take it forward

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