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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey :)

Very interesting start and I'm loving the backdrop of the story. Period romances always interests me. So Khushi was sold by her uncle to be a courtesan. Well well...doesn't everything happen for a reason? She'd get to meet Arnav babu soon :)

Waiting for the next part :)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Nice opening Manreet...

Really sad to know Khushi's only kith and kin betrayed her and pushed her to make a living out of selling her body!

Arnav the England returned is unhappy with his life at present!

Waiting for the story to unfold...

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ravalisharma06

@ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Superb start...

looking forward for d next update

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Rishita.SIholic

@Rishita.SIholic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Wow... Really interesting start!

Do continue soon.

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sonia_1

@sonia_1

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow ! This is so interesting...waiting for the story to unfold.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Manz is back with a bang! Way to go woman, loved the concept already!

It is bilkul alag from the stories that we are used to hearing from you! I for one am super duper intrigued! Khushi had a heart breaking predicament here, yet isn't this unfortunate issue so common even now. Alot of unsuspecting girls are constantly sold and trained to please the horrid men who have contributed and continue to be the reason for the existence of brothels and what not. The way you have written the prologue grabbing everyone's attention, describing the sleaze-bags on the streets who are fantasizing about the innocent girl being forced into what she wouldn't have imagined even in her nightmares, is so wonderfully vivid. I could already feel the digust towards these men thanks to the power of your writing here!

Arnav on the other hand is facing his own family issues, he is obviously stressed out but is not nearly in as bad of a predicament as Khushi. I cannot wait to see what transpires next! How Arshi meet? What would happen when they meet?! Bring on the first chapter whenever you can and by that I mean at your earliest convenience!😆

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Arshirox97

@Arshirox97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Wow! Its really a wonderful concept! I hope Arnav finds solace in Khushi"s arms! 😉

Really loved it! plz update soon!!!

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Thats a nice start, Manreet.. My heart broke for Khushi..🥺 Her parents left her and that chit of her uncle, the moron Shyam has sold her off.. 🤬 And Arnav on the other side is out to rebel against his father.. Waiting for their meeting and still hoping that nothing wrong has happened with Khushi... 🥺