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Posted: 11 years ago
For the first time i don't know how to comment or what to comment i understand what khushi did and why she did it but i don't agree why she did it i don't understand why she could not see that Arnav would love the baby because it was part of her and he would not have asked her to give it up he never did it was her thinking an her alone i understand she was raped but he lived with what happened because he should have come into the room and confronted her he should have given her a chance to defend that night but he did not that was his mistake he loved her enough to do anything and everything for her he consider her pure not because of her body but because of her soul she chose the child when she could have had both Arnav would have loved the child no matter what the insecurities lied with her right now she is in shock she could have talked to him the child was innocent yes she need time but she took away from Arnav not just his wife and not just his child but she pushed him and her self right back to day one heart breaking ending to season one wonder how long will it take her to understand her worth in his life he removed her from his life completely this time she walked away last time he pushed her away and this time he gave her the right to choose for them that the only reason he is not going after her wished she understood him more had she did ,she would have realized together they would have healed so sad when he said who is khushi thanks for the pm.
Edited by dumas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Di... i'm NOT gonna talk to you... no matter how realistic, how true-to-the-character, how sensible this is, it hurts a lot di... IT HURTS... i am crying like anything... why they have to go through this... whats their fault... how can fate be this cruel... this is unfair... life IS unfair... his "Kaun Khushi" is still bringing fresh sets of tears Di... this is painful...

but again i cant deny the fact that this is best possible outcome, and i'm proud of you Di to be brave enough to embrace this... knowing you. this must be difficult for you to separate ArShi like this... my tears are not possibly even one tenth of your feelings for them... if I, Lala, and everyone here live their life with them, you gave them that life...hurting them it bound to hurt you much more us seeing them hurt...love you Di, for wisely and brilliantly u brought this forward...

now comes to the MOST important thing... 😎 when the hell i wanted Aman... 😕 it was Lala & Poo fighting for him... i ONLY want & need Arnav, bas... 😈 tum jao Jiju ki pass... this Arnav is MINE...☺️
by the way, what have you meant by falling in love again... 😕 is it WITH SOMEONE ELSE...😕 make ME that someone pleeease... 😳 😉
yes, he deserves to be happy... both of them do... waiting for you to bring that up Di...😛

by the way, thanks for telling NOT to read before exam, warna i'm sure i would've spent all 3 hours thinking of them in stead of writing papers...😳 😆


nishu though i dont wanted to step back from aman but know the night he went to anjali...my heart brokes into million pieces...still trying to fix them with favicol...i got an idea ...u both go to respective my jiju's and let arnav be with me ...he needs me dammit ...LOL

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh


nishu though i dont wanted to step back from aman but know the night he went to anjali...my heart brokes into million pieces...still trying to fix them with favicol...i got an idea ...u both go to respective my jiju's and let arnav be with me ...he needs me dammit ...LOL


huh... in your dreams baby...😛 Arnav is MINE...😈 bas...😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome n emotional ending...
But u did marvellous job in bringing out the true emotions of khushi...

N this separation was much more required specially for khushi to regain strength n move on in her life...because her love n emotional dependency on Arnav would never let her,if she stays back with him. And how much ever Arnav masks it the facts will haunt him...

Now waiting for them to meet in the next phase where they r almost healed n moved on...
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Posted: 11 years ago
You made us cry ... But a loud applause for writing this ending. Thank you for letting us know that there will be part 2 which made us smile after such an emotional end. Looking forward for their love story. You writing is amazing. Keep writing !!!
Edited by Rihanna4all - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!! omg!!...wat to say !!...i dnt knw anymore!...
ok as i said i had stoped reading after tht adi doing all those things to khushi!!...
i was gng to skip some update as i couldnt bare tht!!...n i did tht!!...bt then i randomly clicked one chappie after some epis n after reading tht i found out tht adi is dead!!...n khushi didnt knew anything !!...
so i read updates after tht skipping some parts though!!...n when khushi came to knw abt tht it was d most painful scenes i hv ever read!!!...god!!...u written dem perfectly!!...👏
i hate my self whn i say tht i wanted d baby to die!!...i kne thts sick to think lyk tht!!...bt i couldnt bare arshi in tht posittion!...
poor khushi!!...oh god!!...her pain!! her helplessness!!!...god!!...:(
i nvr knew dis s gng to b last one!!!...at d end whn i read kaun khushi!!...n den the end!!!...i ws lyk!!!...😲😲 i didnt knew wat to do anymore!!...i was abt to shut my lappy off n thn saw ur note tht thrs gng to b season 2 as well!!...
god!!...i cant tell how much relief it caused to m e!!...
eagarly waiting for der romance nw!!...
no more tears!...no more villans!!...dey wl fall in love wid each other only ri8!!!...
p.s. i got ur point after ending it here, tht true tht ra** victioms!!...its nt easy at all for dem!!...so it was logical only to end dis one here!!!...bt still it hurts a lot!!!...😭arshi r in pain n away from each other...:(
cant wait for continuation though!!...
Edited by nirmal1992 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a vary fitting ending to your story...it's hard but required...cause here we had two very strong characters.and even then being a women I can truly agree with khusis decision...
She took the most difficult yet the most important decision of her life cause she did have a huge responsibility to take care off...loved Ur story to bits...
Needless to say that Ur a an amazing story teller...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heart wrenching... 😭

Khushi's pain for herself, for Arnav and for them is what made her to take that decision... How much Arnav tried ro hide his pain, she knew that seeing the baby will always be a reminder of that night... So she freed him from that torture... Though I still don't know how are they going to live without each other .. 😭..

From the start to the end of this story, you always amazed me with the detail grip you have on each character... It was a total emotional ride... And I m glad to be a part of it... Its one of my favorite story... ❤️...

Eagerly waiting for phase 2...
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Posted: 11 years ago
No way i couldn't belive it was the end of TVK coz i never
Ever thought in my wildest dream dey are going to be
Apart after so much pain,accusions,hearbreaking,n fight!!!! I Know you are the
Writer and creator of TVK so u better know each and every
Character and there ending but we are ur readers and we can
Gv u suggestions or our point of view ' the fact is im nt
Strong enough to except this arnav he is in midserable condition dear i just couldnt :( he is
Terribly broken n khushi as well in other way ''' they are hurting eachother unknowingly and dats misserable but it had to be end one day in any way as you decided so we hv to except it weldone dear it was realy a hardwork and you did it awsummm...
one more fact your writing
gives me Strength' confidence 'respect and alot more'''i respect
You alot you are a best writer in my view i never enjoyed
Anyones writing dis much it was emotionl,senti somtime
Scary some time tooo romantic, some time sad n heartouching
...and alot more there are alot of words to praise ur work
But im going to end dis gving u hugs,kisses, and lots of
Love im waiting and i will be waiting for season 2 for my whole
Life :) plz take your time but bring dem close make dem
One im crying bucktes and couldn't control my tears soon!!!!!!my family
My husband all are worried for me but i couldn't speak a word
After he said (Kaun khushi) it realy hurts :(
Thanx for ur precious time thanx for pms thanx for
Everythng u did to make my days special with TVK :) A big thank u from all the readers...!!!!!
Edited by Meeshaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh...u said u will start tvk2 BT don't know why I'm still feeling low...pata nehi kya hua...may be the whole chapter make me all gloomy! Sooo much pain...feeling sympathy for arnav more than khushi...come back soon di...we are waiting...who will say its just a story? Throwing me all into melancholy

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