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Hi Deepthi !
First of all I'd say please pardon me for the spelling mistakes i guess i'll be making while writing this comment because apparently its very difficult to type properly when eyes are blurred with tears.
To be honest, i'm not a very emotional person...i don't cry easily. But by the time i finished reading the last chapter i was sobbing, literally.
This ff which i stumbled upon one day when i was extremely bored...i guess it had 7 chapters at that time and those 7 chapters had me hooked badly and madly...and at that time i had the feeling that their journey was gonna be tough...extremely tough for that matter but never in my wildest dream i had expected it to be so painful. The phase one ended so painfully...,the lump in my throat is killing me. Arnav and Khushi, their relationship was nothing short of a rollercoaster which started with hatred...but the hate started fading away , gradually turning into a subtle understanding which grew into a mutual attraction and finally turned into love. Pure love. But their love wasn't that blessed and they were tested by fate again and again...and for once when things started getting sorted,,,when we felt that the thorny path of their lives had come to an end, the two poor souls got separated again.
Trust me i hold nothing against you for giving this kind of an end to phase 1 , your reasoning as to why you ended the chapter that way made perfect sense. It was the most logical thing that should have happened given to the situation they were in and as per their characterization. But then what to do of this stupid little heart of mine who's crying like a baby right now. After everything Arnav and Khushi went through...it hurts when i see the torture hasn't come to an end yet.
When i read chapter 44 , at the beginning even though i could see the situation getting out of hand, i was still hanging on to the hope that maybe...maybe things will get better, even when i read Khushi's letter, my eyes started getting moist but i thought that Arnav will surely go bring his Khushi back but then when he said "Kaun Khushi ?" the hell broke loose and i started sobbing.
How can their beautiful love story have an end like this ??
Why so much pain for such good people ?
I continued crying until i read your note. So there will be another phase when they will finally get the happiness they deserve.
Ohh god Deepthi i don't know i just feel so disturbed...but the knowledge that things will go better in phase II is keeping my spirit up.
Now deepthi , I would like to congratulate you. And a few honest words of appreciation . I have read loads...like so many ffs on this forum and i can't help but say this has certainly been one of the best reading experiences so far and the entire credit goes to you. Your superb capability to write a story with such sensitive issues in such a tasteful way left me astound. It was bloody brilliant. Your regular updates helped us keep the connect to the story...This FF without exaggeration has been one of the best Ffs of this forum and you one of the best writers.
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful ff dear.
And last but not the least , i'm openly threatening you that the phase II has to has to has to be an all-happy-happy phase which will leave all your readers with big grins on their faces with each chapter.
Enough of Rona-dhona.
And Deepthi, i would once again like to congratulate you for successfully completing this phase of the FF and all the best for the next one. I'm totally looking forward to it.
Love
Nikita
Sampoorna
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