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Deepu,
This...rendered me breathless.I read few comments and It took me some time to open the link in fear.. one of the most awaited update-
This was a very powerful piece of writing. i really appreciated what you said in note about all the associated questions that go along with characters mind frame.. I'm sure it took a lot of courage for you to describe what happened and stir up all the memories and emotions from the assault in both the characters..
Kushis fight for CD, i had literally tears.. and can understand what she must have through.. the phrase u have used.. Win? Against whom? Me, a loser?.. explains clearly Kushis state of mind... You have such a way with words. .. 👏
It's amazing to read your perspective on this, how different people react differntly to the circumstances. you are so wise to have the understanding of characters.. I haven't come across anything that came anywhere close to describing it as clearly and beautifully as you have here and the down-to-earth acknowledgment of the situation scene to scene keeping their emotions in tact. ...just WOW... iam still wondering how could you mend it so nicely without a slip -- it was a surprising perspective of you Deepu... It is inspiring to read something like this..
You wrote that so succinctly--just the way we live it. You're style so completely captured the waterfall of emotions, and at the same time the pure resolve that it takes..
Superb and very touching update.. A Great Read.
Stay Blessed!!
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