Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago
heart touching and emotional update
feeling bad for them
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
God, u portrayed their feelings soo well, that I ve tears in my eyes...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nw wht i wanna say abt the chapter,i really dnt know. . . .coz i want to say a lot of things bt dnt knw frm where to start . . . .
1st i thank u for this wonderfully intense writing,which made me cry again bt im nt accusing u. . . .it was indeed a heart wrenching updt & i couldn't help bt cry.when tears came i didn't know. . .
I agree with u cmpltly on what u said on the note. I too dnt blame Arnav for anything not even in my dream. Yes he hid the truth and may be khushi has the rite to know what has happened with her bt not at the cost of her own pride,her life. Arnav loves khushi more than his life, so there's nothing can change that. Every human'll react the same way that how he reacted that night. Bt when he sensed the truth he felt guilty, cursed his own self for nt being there for her when she needed him the most. He bore all the pain, guilt,suffering all himself,died thousands times only to protect her, to make her happy,thats how his love for her. So i feel that who im to raise even any doubt or question on him! I dont even have the rite i guess!
And now khushi knows all, so situation is the same for them. Yes its time to see how much she loves arnav. She'll suffer i know, as u said she's strong to bare all these pain,and she'll rise again bt she has to pay the price. I know that too, Bt my only wish is in all these pains, sufferings she should nt leave arnav alone again,whatever she faces,she should face it with him,he has no one bt her, only her.and khushi knows that too. I dont want Arnav to be alone without his khushi,his life.he needs her like his breath and its time for khushi to show that she too need him the same way he does, love him with all she has and she'll never leave his side like he never did in every worst that came in there life. They'll face everything together may what come or happen in life.
Thank u for the pm and thanks again for this wonderful ff of urs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved each and every part of chapter 42 and 43 I'm glad I got to read it together!! For I couldn't have waited to see what happens next but its still the same now only the situations have changed!!
I repeat I loved everything that you gave us! The below comments are just my thoughts or to be precise my reactions!!

I did expect her to choose him over the baby! Somewhere its understood!! That's how Khushi is!! But I didn't think the reaction would be to this level!! Poor soul is in a trauma now!!


Arnav I kinda love the way you have characterized him!!

I'm sure the kid will see day light and the mother will take time!!

Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful and heartbreaking chapter
Beautiful because you have written it beautifully and brilliantly
Never I have read anything soo intense...esp on this forum
You are a blessed writer mashaAllah
I wont comment on how one should behave or who is right or wrong
M really enjoying seeing how they are behaving in every situation..
Both of them handle their situations really well or at least try to..but time and odds are a big Test..
Hope khushi accepts the baby..and arnav bring her back to normal
Khusji,s last dialogues to Anjali just tore my heart..
WILL IT BE A BABY BOY OR GIRL??
#Curious
And the same drill
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the pm... this is one chapter which I was sacred to open n read it
Finally the bitter truth is out and boy I was scared hell out it...its so scary n painful when Khushi came to know the truth.oh god she doesn't want that baby although the baby is innocent but can feel what Khushi is going through.
Felt really sorry for Arnav, cmng out strong n supporting Khushi and at the same time feeling so helpless when Khushi asked him to take the baby away frm her.
The conclusion part is samn scary n painful when Khushi is refusing to push and asking Anjali to help her to vanished the baby, poor her she feel so sorry for Arnav with the promise she gave to him.
I am more scared whats the future of the baby when he or she comes out in the world unwanted by his or her parents esp the mother
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Posted: 11 years ago
So painful update.
I was so afraid to read this update but you pictured it very beautifully.
Adi,thank god he is died , because i really want to kill him again n again...
Why Khushi Dammit?😭
I was so worried for that kid :(
Waiting for more...
Thanks for PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
he is not regretting but he is afraid that he will lose her n he will fail to protect her again
hw can she accept a child that will be a reminder of her pain
can she ever love it
it will be hard for her

if she is only his than he si also only hers
they both r ready to give up anything for others happiness n that will be their strength
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally the truth came out and khushi doesn't want the baby
now what will Arnav do?

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