Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 64

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! What an outstanding update:))!!! I loved the way you showed their undying love for each other!!! Both are hurting, not for their own pain, but for each other's pain. And that is called pure love, amazing:))!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional one
It might have been painful for both arnav and kushi to see what happened to her
Hope they willed strong
What I didn't like is why she does not want the baby now and she can never love the baby
She might be in a big a shock and even deny it but still there is no mistake of the innocent baby and she knows that very well still she want to abort the baby at the last minute
Still wonder why kushi is thinking so much negative about the baby
They r the ones who were ready to adopt other kids and distribute the love to unknown kids
Inspite of all that she want to kill the baby
Even though it is not arnav baby still the baby is innocent
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Posted: 11 years ago
probably its after a long time I'm comments. Just read the author's note and completely agree with most of the things you said in that little note.

According to me Arnav was guilty only for throwing Khushi out of the house without questioning her I mean the loss of two months. I completely agree no man at his place who loves his wife would have the courage to barge in when he felt his wife was making out with somebody. Unless he is some psycho who is obcessed with his wife. Even his guilt according to me was what any man would feel in his place. But he became the valiant knight when he accepted the woman who was carrying somebody else's child as his wife along with the child. Most important he choosed the thorns for himself, to make the way smoother for Khushi. He kept all the pain and truth to himself and continued to sufffer for Khushi's peace of mind. I can't believe a man could love a woman to the extend that he refuses to even share his pain and greif with her.

Khushi's reaction was something that I had expected because her dreams were not related to children. She thought of her own home, a husband and children only after Arnav came into her life so this reaction was expected. So, no matter what promise she made to her mother. Arnav will always be more important than this child or any other child that they may have in future because she cannot envision her children without her husband. We had always known that Khushi is someone who wouldn't accept something dumped on her forcefully, so it would be same with the baby. But I really hope with my heart that if this baby survives he gets love of her mother like any other baby deserves. Looking forward to the next update as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Im totaly speechless..
Realy dnt knw what should i tel u..
I was afraid for khushi's reaction..
Bt realy didnt think khushi wil refuse to push baby..
Omg!! Nw what wil happen..? Realy scared..
If baby survives then i want khushi gives her motherly love like any other mother..
Hope khushi wil be fine..
Thnks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updte
w8ing for d next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heart shattering update...

You have expressed each emotion so perfectly... Arnav's fear that khushi heard everything yet hoping that there is a chance... Khushi devastation yet she stood strong to know the whole truth...

Khushi whole world revolves around Arnav... She didn't accused him but blamed herself... In that situation she was only thinking about Arnav...

Hats off...
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Posted: 11 years ago
read both the chapters...
trust me it was mind blowing 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
how do u do that...write like this..the kinda emotions u portrayed in each other ...every single emotion...it was superb...
omg..now she knows...and she s withdrawing from everything only for him...coz he means to her life ...
next update awaited 😃

p.s.sorry for late and short reply..internet issues..have time constrain for usage for few days..hope to be back in 2-3days
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deeps first of all my applauds to you👏
An excruciating update...
Im speechlees
khushi stood way too strong and watched the video and blamed herself...
i couldn't bare arhi's helplessness...
n khushi's trust n love for arnav is way too much to withstand for arnav when he got to know about his place in khushi's life who believes her world is only arnav and nothing makes sense except arnav...










Edited by diyadivya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant chapter...read chapters 39 to 43 in one go...thanks for the PMs
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diyadivya

Deeps first of all my applauds to you👏

An excruciating update...
Im speechlees
khushi stood way too strong and watched the video and blamed herself...
i couldn't bare arhi's helplessness...
n khushi's trust n love for arnav is way too much to withstand for arnav when he got to know about his place in khushi's life who believes her world is only arnav and nothing makes sense except arnav...












Divya: I would like correct you here dear, Khushi is not blaming herself...If you notice she is reacting to what she is seeing and battling her emotions and his pain...

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