Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
fantastic update
loved it
feeling bad for arnav
congrats for the new thread
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
marvelous ... super awesome update..!!!!!!!
very well written..so much pain..!!!!
khusho's mood swing.. !!!!!!
arnav is trying everything to shut down anything related to adi..!!!!!1
part where arnav confronted his mother .. i cried while reading that.. how much he suffered..!!!!!!
the way khushi said about his mother..nani..loved it..!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Such an amazing updates
loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
wow, what an amazing update...I call it the MAHA UPDATE
Just loved it,
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

superb updt..beautifully written..loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
no words... the last part was jst brilliant...
thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
strange that while Arnav is connected to the baby, Khushi is not. But I love the fact that they have moved on as friends at least.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
fabulous update loved the way they both stand for each other and the last part was so amazingly written .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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too awesome...!!!!!
khushi nearing her 7months...
i guess the tapes are on their way...
w8ng for next..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread..

Deeps again you've left me speechless completely...

Chapter 40 was very intense, emotional and heartwarmingly...

The emotions, the love and the devotion you've described perfectly...

When khushi was in 6 months and 2 weeks of pregnancy...

Her mood swings were on the peak, she behaves with everyone unpredictably...

Which make arnav falling in love with her all over again undoubtedly...

Her antics & craving for ladu scene was so endearing and childishly...

And in the 7th month of pregnancy, her longing for arnav increased gradually...

The last part of this chapter was heart touching & you depicted arnav's situation emotionally...

I'm glad that when khushi asked arnav that she'll go with him possessively & determinedly...

And the way she came to his room, taking steps as a wife, to comfort him silently...

He shed silent tears for his nonexistence sins. She soothes his anguish so devotedly...

Nani is his real mother and here I'm totally agreed with khushi's words unquestionably...

Nani is a selfless lady who loves him genuinely and boundlessly...

All in all, it was a beautiful chapter and you've penned it breathtakingly...

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago

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