Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
I am so happy to see ur update.and coming to the update is so emotional and heartwarming dat i cry and also laugh ..I just hope he fine the tape before is giving to kushi 😭 And if not hope we come out of it like true camps xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Superb...extraordinary...brilliant...mind blowing update.
Khushi cannot understand why she is not able to connect with her child. It is extremely disturbing for her to have such indifference toward her baby. Her instincts are so storng that they are not allowing her to accept her baby. Try as she might she cannot relate her child to arnav.
Arnav on the other hand only sees khushi in the baby and haa accepted it in his life without any doubt. He is excited to experience the small and all partsof khushi's pergnancy.
All the teasing over the rawa ladoos was just superb. Arnav knows how to divert her mind and cheer her up. Buaji nani and payal are happy to see the couple at their mischivious best.
Arnav has suggested the best option to help khushi's cause. This way khushi will not have to face danger in future for others. He is silently there to help her always...even in her sleep.
Khushi can equally understand his distress. Its good that she went with arnav. And her assurrance..love and care is what arnav needs right now. Hope that armav will be able to put his past behind now that he has faced his mother and confronted her for her mistake.
Hope that khushi and arnav will be able to give each other both emotional and physical support now that khushi has already taken the firts step
Continue soon...
U have left us craving for more after such an awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Awesome update Di ..Finally anrav meet his so called Mother .. Its Tron my Heart seeing Arnav so broken , he died 1000 death in his childhood Remembering The word which is hunting him till date , My heart gose out for that inocent child I really loved the way khushi comfort him..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
it was all in all a awesome update!!!
loved arshi how there little gesture r bringing them close!!!!
i guess arnav will again open up a little to kushi after his encounter with his mother!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
that was one very beautifully written update, it had all the elements to make this one update an unforgetable one and i loved the fact that it had multiple parts.

n ur dedication to all the mothers was just awesome because for sure in this one chapter we got to see different shades and kinds of mothers, selfless and giving mother like nani ji, who has heartily embraced a child with whom she had no blood ties, nurtured and cared for him and when the time came, chose him over her own grandson because she knew that her upbringing cant be wrong.

on the other side there is arnav's mother, who was so heartless and selfish so that she abandonned her new born baby who was still depending on her for her next feed on the garbage without even considering and thinking of wat kind of life the innocent soul will be leading from this moment on. n as khushi said, i pitied the woman as well because she will never know wat gem her son is and wat she has missed and will be missing by abandonning him years ago!

n there khushi, who can be a lioness for her cub when the moment depends it, who was ready to give up her life as she knew it, the husband she loved more than anyone to bring this baby in this world, its another thing that she cannot emotionally bond with the baby but one thing is sure she will never abandon the baby to fend for itself!

i tthink by going to arnav's room to comfort him in the darkest hour of his life, khushi has crossed the invisible barrier that arnav has drawn between them and being there for her husband as any wife should be! n i loved when khushi took the stand to accompany arnav to meet his mother because she knew arnav will be completely heartbroken but he wont let that be shown. she knew she had to be for him as his wife and as his friend.

i felt so bad for arnav, when he was crying i could feel my own eyes tearing up. but i hope that tears will no longer be a part of their lives. they have each other of the support of all those who love them and they can move forward. it was so cute seeing him handling all khushi's cravings and eractic moods, he is such a cutie pie who knows how to treat his woman as his queen even when she is unresonable.

i just hope aman and arnav manage to catch the solicitor and get all the videos of that night form him before it reached khushi. they are surely in the right direction and wishing they manage to catch him before its too late.

this was one wonderfully breath takingly emotional update and hats off to all the mothers who will do anything to safeguard their babies!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Amazing mahaupdt deepthi only u can bring al imotion in one part hw can mr raizada manage his wife mood swing last part is so imotional rula dia yaar i realy pity for his mother waiting for next part tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Very intense and emotional update yaar...
So much crying yaar and i still cant stop d tears in my eyes...
Thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
Wat is going to happen next...
Cant wait for d next update yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
really loved it.
superb.
one of the best updates. in all these 40 chapters there were many moments where you excelled by narrating a beautiful scene.
i feel this FF is completely different and one of your best writings.
fantastic and fabulous.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
MIND BLOWING UPDATE👏👏
HATS OFF TO YOU😊👏
THANKS FOR PM DEAR😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
That was an awesome update! I'm so glad that khushi was there to comfort arnav. I wonder why arnav is still keeping that distance? Is it the guilt or is he waiting for khushi to say something? I just wish he would move forward but I guess after what happened between them it would take time for them to get over it. Khushi's detachment from the baby is sad and even though I hate the fact she has been rapd and the fact that she is pregnant because of that incident I can't help but feel bad for the baby. I just hope that the baby doesn't have to go through the consequences of its father's sins for no fault of its own... That was an amazing update. I just wish khushi would talk toarnav like she is now and help him move forward. Thanks for the pm and pls update soon.

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