Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Congo for new thread.
Will get back to commenting after reading the chap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
That was awesome...
Loved the update <3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Loved the update...
Awesome
Fianllyyy arnav got to know his mother
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 i cant believe a mother would ever do that... Even when she had the man she loved beside her... Thats not just cruel but inhuman... I feel for arnav...
You've done a splendid job writing this update... The gradual progress in their lives is heartwarming... Good job! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update dear sorry for the late reply
Edited by sweetydoll32 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love you for such a wonderful update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superbly written awesome update my dear... Starting with their cute noke jhokes to their intense emotional scene at the end was just too good... Loved khushi's mood swings.. Felt really bad for Arnav when he saw his mother.. I mean how can someone do that.. But loved the way khushi supported him throughout.. Really really nice.. Btw I think deena is the daughter of the same person who is arrested for adi'a murder charges.. I just hope Arnav figures out everything before khushi.. Can't wait to read the next part dear.. Once again beautiful update:-))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...hatts off to ur writing...!!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update di...no words to describe this amazing update..a mahaupdate in true sense..

The true meaning of life shown in the update..a 3.5 month leap..things more or less same between arnav n khushi..bt their friendship was amazingly shown..

Arnav is always there with khushi..the care,concern n love shown by him is superb..though he is still hurting..trying to make things better..he is always there with her..

Deena not being able to work.. the name paritosh karamchand is somewhr related to adi..khushi trying to remember..he is the same man who is accused to murder adi..

Loved the comfort level between arnav n khushi..they r two halves of the same soul..they r at peace only with eachother..khushi still not have good feeling about the child..she is not being able to feel anything else than arnav..no idea wht is this pointing towards..

The rava ladoo part was soo adorable..khushi cursing arnav..he should b in her place..lol..

Arnav fed up of khushis hormones..lol..payals too cute..i m shocked that khushi cried on these silly matters..i knw due to pregnancy bt still..wht a change fr a person who didn't cry at all..n arnavs fed up of her cring lol..they jst looked soo perfect with their laddu ,chahiye.nahi chahiye ,kiss conversation..i really thought arnav is going to kiss her..;p

Finally arnav got clue abt the man who has the cd..lets hope he gets to the person soon.

Arnav trying to help khushi..n the women..i think khushi will take arnavs offer..

Sudden gloomy arnav because he is going to meet his mother...the conversation with his mother was soo painful..its a really bad wen some one abandons a person..the feeling of being unwanted is really suffocating..

I m soo happy khushi was there with him..standing by his side as his wife n a true companion..

The sentence "my wife could give me up fr her child"I think khushi will feel something wrong here..

The confusion..that there is no way arnav could have acted to this extent just because of a mere insecurity..lets see how khushi acts to this..

I m soo glad khushi went to his room as his wife to soothe his pain..the way she spoke abt nani n in all this he is not at fault..soo true..nani is a gem..n arnav is very lucky to have her as his mother..

Arnav feeling better..waiting fr the next update already..

Lets c whts in store fr them..i m really happy that khushi crossed the line which was separating them ..though a mere bedroom..bt makes a difference fr husband n wife..

Waitng fr arnavs next move abt the man n the khushis next move regarding the words spoken by

arnav..n also will knw something abt deenas father..meet him by any chance..waiting n only waiting..wens the next update dii?..sorry fr being greedy..jst asking😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply beautiful

the bond arshi share in here is just incomparable

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